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Amateur at Story telling

Note: The characters in this story are fictional and have
no relation to any person(s) dead or alive. If yes, it is only
coincidence.

Actually this article was written specially for my CICC training mates. I have used everybody names in this fiction story. I wrote this for a laugh and emailed to all of them. Hayel has been dreaming to be Gina's hero. From there, I got my inspiration plus our interesting experiences in Japan, Titanic, James Bond's "Tomorrow Never Dies" and etc ......  to come out with this story. My fellow CICC mates will smile knowing when they read to parts that they are familiar with.

A Fiction Story               Written in May 1998

    Hayel is an ex-army sergeant who had fight in the Vietnam war. He is on the way home on a big ship called "See Ice See Sea" shortname "CICC". He is together with his lovely fiancée, Hanh and her brother, Dr. Dinh. Dr. Dinh has saved Hayel's life during one of the attacks by the Vietnamese guerrillas. Out of gratefulness, Hayel agreed to marry Dr. Dinh's sister, Hanh and bring them to live with him in Jordan.

    The captain of the ship is Rao, who always say "Come come" to all passengers. He always organises party and karaoke for the passengers.

    Among the passengers, there is a father and daughter, Azimul and Gina. The father being greedy for money had sold his other daughter, Yai to Brad Pitt the American actor for 100 yen. And now not enough he is forcing Gina to marry a rich gangster, Daher. Together with his two henchmen, Orkun and Kamran, Daher is bringing the Azimul and Gina to Paris. Daher plans to marry Gina in Paris and stay at the famous Ritz Hotel where the late Princess Diana had her last meal.

    The dining hall of the ship is a non-smoking place, so Hayel has to get out of the dining hall leaving Dr. Dinh and Hanh behind. Hayel walks to the top deck of the ship and leans by the steel barrier as he smokes his Winston Lights cigarette. Nearby Gina is sitting alone hidden at a corner thinking about her future. She doesn't want to marry Daher but she cannot disobey her father. Suddenly she heard a shout for help and she saw Hayel was hanging on a broken bar. It seems that the barrier has broken due to Hayel's heavy weight. Gina quickly run and try to put Hayel up, but with the body like Arnold Schwartznegger, Hayel is too heavy for her. When Gina look below into the sea, she saw a shark opening it's jaws waiting for Hayel to fall. Hayel seeing the shark and get panic and drop one of his shoes. The shark bites his shoe but immediately spits the shoe out because it is too smelly. The shark then swims away thinking if the shoe is smelly then the owner of the shoe will be too smelly to eat so better find something else to eat. Hayel feel so relief that the shark has swam away. He looks up to Gina who is looking at him. As they hold hands and look into each other eye, they feel a sudden electric current pass between them and fallen in love with each other. Hayel said to Gina, "Do not let go of my hand" and Gina replied, "No, I will not". Gina starts screaming for help. Three ladies, Ain, Lisa and Julie heard Gina's scream and come to help. Ain use her long scarf to tie Hayel and all four ladies combined their strength and pull Hayel up to safety. Then Ain, Lisa and Julie leave Hayel and Gina alone since two of them have only eyes for each other.
Hayel : "I have fallen in love with you"
Gina : "Me too."
Hayel : "I love you, but I have promised to marry Hanh."
Gina : "Me too."
Hayel : "Huh? You promised to marry Hanh too?"
Gina : "No, my stupid darling. My father has promised to marry me to Daher."
Hayel : "I can't let you marry another man."
Gina : "I must not disobey my father."
Hayel : "Don't leave me, my sweetheart."
Then both of them hug each other.
At one dark corner, someone is watching and she is Marucia, Daher's sister. She then told Daher what she has seen.

    Daher orders his henchmen, Orkun and Kamran to beat Hayel to warn him to stay away from Gina. Hayel is much more stronger and bigger size. So Orkun and Kamran are no fight for Hayel. Hayel fights like Jean Claude Van Damme. Punch here *Ouch* and kick there *Aaaagh*. Both, Orkun and Kamran went back to Daher with blue eyes, bruises, broken arm and leg. Daher use his money to hire the three Thai boxers who happened to be on the ship to Europe for an international boxing competition. The three Thai boxers are Sakul, Teekha and Chusak. This time Hayel could not beat the three professional boxers. Fortunately, the three Sri Lanka musketeers saw the fighting and help Hayel to fight. *Hit* *Ouch* *Pow* *Kick* *Aagh* and knock down the three Thai boxers. Hayel said thanks to the three musketeers, Lalith, Shanta and Wijetunga.

    Daher getting furious that he still can't beat Hayel. He uses his money again to buy firearm from the Chinese, Pan and Du. He went to the ship's bar and met two men, Carlos and Zaman who wear sunglasses with black coat and black tie like in "Men In Black" movie. He offered them money and firearm to kill Hayel. Stella, a best friend of Gina, was drinking tequila with Pia and Cristina at the bar. She overheard the deal and told Gina about this. Gina hurried and went to see Hayel and tell him about this. Hayel said to Gina, "Don't worry, I am better than Rambo. They will not able to get me."
    Hayel also went to Pan and Du for firearm. Carlos and Zaman found Hayel and the shooting started. I shoot at you *Bang* and you shoot at me *Bang* *Bang* and so on. The gun shooting gets more and more exciting as Daher, Orkun and Kamran join Carlos and Zaman against Hayel. *Bang Bang* here and *Bang Bang* there. Hayel like Rambo very tricky and Daher and his men couldn't get him. They chased from the top deck of the ship until the engine room at the ship bottom. The battle getting more and more serious and they started using grenades. Daher throw one grenade toward Hayel but Hayel dived away and the grenade hit the body of the ship and *Boommmm*  the explosion made a hole and sea water rushing into the ship and the ship starts to sink slowly.

    Gina managed to steal Daher's private helicopter controller in the form of a watch. This controller is better than James Bond's BMW controller hand phone. Gina only has to say "Helicopter come here" to the watch and the helicopter will automatic starts and fly to Gina. Gina gets up the helicopter and search for Hayel. At last she found him still shooting at Daher's men at the second deck of the sinking ship. She lowers the string ladder to Hayel and Hayel grabs hold of the ladder and Gina quickly ordered the helicopter to fly away. The ship sunk but fortunately another big ship "All Ought To Save(AOTS)" comes and rescues everybody.

Hayel and Gina fly away in the helicopter and live happily after all.

THE END.

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