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The Art of Copying

Plagiarize, Plagiarize, Plagiarize, let no one's work escape your eyes! (a) Or, how to prepare a really great manuscript ?

With the advent of the Internet, we are faced with another of Salvador Dali's endless enigmas.

Having developed an interest in an area, we would like to commit to paper some of our thoughts. Simple enough, until we decide that perhaps we should add the flavor of some other's research to our project and as we peruse the literature (or the web), we find that we are not alone in our thoughts and that there are opposite viewpoints as well. How shall we proceed? If you take an academic viewpoint, we are obligated to cite song and verse from those who may have contributed to our thought process and to be safe, even after the fact, we should acknowledge those that we just now are discovering, even if they contributed not at all. And for all those we find, there are countless others, in fact for each stone turned, there are two or more underneath awaiting our attention. The admonition, leave no stone unturned, is short sighted when we have deadlines, space constraints, and a short attention span to boot. Perhaps the advice given Cervantes when he prepared his text for Don Quixote is worth repeating:

In the preface to Don Quixote as written by Cervantes and translated by Dr. Tobias Smollett, Vol. 1, pp 36, D. Huntington 1814, New York.
"Let us now proceed to the citation of authors, so frequent in other books and so little used in your performance; the remedy is obvious and easy; take the trouble to find a book that quotes the whole tribe alphabetically, as you observed from Alpha to Omega, and transfer them to your book; and though the absurdity should appear never so glaring, as there is no necessity for using such names, it will signify nothing. Nay, perhaps some reader will be weak enough to believe you have actually availed yourself of all those authors, in the simple and sincere history you have composed; and if such a large catalogue of writers should answer no other purpose, it may serve at first sight to give some authority to the production, nor will any person take the trouble to examine whether you have or have not followed those originals, because he can reap no benefit from his labour. But if I am not mistaken, you book needs none of those embellishments in which you say it is defective; for it is one continued satire upon books of chivalry; a subject which Aristotle never investigated, St. Basil never mentioned and Cicero never explained. The punctuality of truth and observations of astrology fall not within the fabulous relation of our adventures; to the description of which, neither the proportions of geometry, nor the confirmation of rhetorical arguments, are of the least importance; hath it any connection with preaching, or mingling divine truths with human imagination; a mixture which no christian's (sic) fancy should conceive."

Doubt this will work in today's frenzy of publish or perish, so let's look at what others have done and how they have accepted the inevitable.

Hudibras


Hudibras is a mock poem written shortly after Cromwell left the scene and Charles II reclaimed the throne. Samuel Butler patterned the poem after Don Quixote and numerous mentions of the Don and Sancho are to be found in the poem. Following the success of Butler's poem, many attempts have been made to match his style, knowledge and particularly his wit in the burlesque style.

One particular author, Samuel Colvil, has been cited both as one who gave credit where credit was due and others find that he was lacking (remember the poem was written in 1660, or about.) One of the main characters in Hudibras (Ralph or Ralpho) appears in Colvil's poem. Here's what Colvil had to say about plagiarism:

Whoe'er thou art, Muse, who dost make
By force of brandy, ale, and sack,
Some who both words and mater want,
Admired of the ignorant:
In whom sagacious noses snuff:
Nought worth but plagiary stuff.
By which they purchase praise and money,
(When bees have toil'd, drones eat the honey.)
Inspire me with poetic fury,
That I may likewise favor curry..
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Or more to the point:

And others like thee, not a few doth,
Who bred out of the peccant humours,
Of this our church, like wens and tumors;
Like maggots bred within a sore,
Would that which gve them life, devour.)
Thou'lt say these last for lines were stol'n. -
I answer with that red-shank fullen,
Once challenged for stealing beef,
I sole them from another thief.
Now since thy sophistry's confuted,
I end...

Both selections from The Wigs Supplication or, the Scots Hudibras, Samuel Colvil, St. Andrews, 1796.

Wizard of Oz

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When L. Frank Baum created the Wizard of Oz and all the characters, he opened up pandora's box. The reader (children and adults(?)) wanted more. And he provided. He wrote14 books that entertained the public with the product of his mind. The demand was such that other writers, following his death, continued the series; Ruth Plumly Thompson wrote some 20 or so books about Oz. John R. Neill wrote three, Jack Snow, wrote two, Rachel Cosgrove, one; and Elois Jarvis McGraw and Lauren McGraw Wagner wrote one. Perhaps, more are to follow. The question is whether Baum should have been disturbed that so much was made of his creation. I think not.

Perhaps it was an unusual circumstance but in this case it was flattery when others copied Baum's work and probably enriched his heirs as well, as it created a greater audience for the product of his pen. Today's collectors place high value on books of his contemporaries as well as the originals from Baum's imagination.

The question; Is it plagiarism when you take a character, the creation of another, and write of that persona as if your own?

Comment in T. Smollet's The History and Adventures of the Renowned Don Quixote

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Having visited already how Cervantes was advised to fluff up his bibliography, we now read how Smollet related Cervantes' feeling toward an imposter who was using Don Quixote to his advantage.(pp 20 in which the author provides much color related to the life of Miguel De Cervantes Saavedra, D. Huntington, New York, 1814, )
"But of all the insults to which he was exposed from the malevolence of mankind, nothing provoked him so much, as the outrage he sustained from the insolence and knavery of an author, who, while he was preparing the second part of Don Quixote for the press, in the year 1614, published a performance entitled, the second volume of the sage Hidalgo Don Quixote de la Mancha, containing his third sally, composed by the licentiate Alonzo Fernandez de Avellaneda, a native of Tordesillas; dedicated to the alcalde, regidora, and gentlemen of the noble town of Argamasilla, the happy country of Don Quixote de la Mancha. This imposter not contended with having robbed Cervantes of his plan, and, as some people believe, a good part of his copy, attacked him personally, in his preface. In the most virulent manner, accusing him of envy, malice, peevishness, and rancour; reproaching him with his poverty, and taxing him with having abused his contemporary writers, particularly Lope de Vega, under the shadow of whose reputation this spurious writer takes shelter, pretending to have been lashed, together with that great genius, in some of our author's critical reflections."

Not nice, that native of Tordesillas, who deserved Cervantes wrath. (However, it has been suggested that perhaps Cervantes "created" Avellaneda and used him as a shill to promote his own works. Interesting thought(?)

Don Quixote and squire Sancho Panza

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The many adventures of the Don and his squire have contributed much entertainment for centuries. And if Cervantes were writing today, his publisher would demand that he continue the serial with book after book, much in the manner of Agatha Christie. He can't. He's dead. So why haven't other writers volunteered to fill the void on the exploits of the ingenuous Don Quixote, much as those who followed Frank Baum's Wizard of Oz stories? At least one has chosen to do so.

S. J. Mahtrow has added several chapters to Cervantes works. Since Saavedra was much put out that an interloper would take his creation and modify it to another cause, how would he view these new additions to his character's adventures?. In Miguel de Cervantes' development of Don Quixote and Sancho Panza he was using wry wit to tweak those who had held knight heraldry in such esteem. At the time with monies short and time (he died soon after) as well, Cervantes could ill-afford the appearance of another one's Don Quixote. Not only did he see it as diminishing his goals of ridicule but also quite changed the characters as well. In addition as there was no copyright laws at the time, anyone with a printing press and financial backing could issue copies of his books either in the original Spanish or in translations. He was vulnerable to the market at the time. Such is not the case with the original works of S. J. Mahtrow, who having appreciated Savendra's humor, brings the Don and his man-servant to additional adventures. Judge them as you will, the intent now is to introduce a bit of science (chemistry if you like) into the story so that one can subtly learn a bit while enjoying the story. Would Cervantes approve? Probably not. Is it plagiarism? Maybe not with today's definition of plagiarism.


Birchfield - Fowler's Modern English Usage

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Is not Fowler's Modern English Usage at all, but R. W. Birchfield's rewrite of this classic. The Fowler brothers would not have accepted such an insult during their life. This is the worst than plagiarizing. Taking an author's good name and title and twisting it to suggest that you are he is exactly what Miguel Cervantes was most upset about.

Johnson/Webster/Oxford English Dictionary/Microsoft

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Development of the English language is not complete. New words must come into being to fulfil the requirements of our rapidly expanding technology. Having said that, however, it is only right and proper that due respect be paid to the language into which the new words must accept their place as an extension of knowledge. One of the best complements that has been given to Noah Webster was that regardless of what you thought of his ideas, when it came to a dictionary, he was a master at defining the meaning of words. So while he pursued lesser objects to provide us with a key to the pronunciation of words, the spelling of words, or the improvement of the alphabet with introduction of new letters and removal of others, Noah Webster accomplished his primary goal of unifying the country. We now all speak the same language and in so doing are seldom misunderstood.

Continuing along the lines of Johnson and Webster, the Oxford English Dictionary embarked on a notable quest. Why not in one dictionary put "all" the words in the language complete with definition and examples where appropriate. "Done, said the Queen with a stroke!" And done it has been. Now in some twenty volumes, OED. challenges the owner to find shelf space adequate to support the weight. Of course it is available in a version requiring a magnifying glass or on a CD but both lose the appeal of holding one of these marvelous volumes in your hand and reading it as one would a Mickey Spillane novel or some such.

And along comes Microsoft with an idea that they know best what the English speaking world needs. With a minuscule group of lackeys they develop a book that is most appropriately contained on a CD but that is wanting in many ways other than its lack of completeness. Trying to present it as a "world" edition, thus lessening its base in America and England, words appear that are quite right but because of the relative number of "un-American" and "un-English" compared to those in a Webster's College Dictionary, the balance is wrong. Let them take on OED if they want to justify introduction of other words that are acceptable in parts of the world but less likely to be heard in the United States. Noah Webster would be enraged to discover that the simple and easy to remember phonetics that he introduced have been bastardized so that confusion reigns. If that's not enough, where are the contemporary Henry Menckens? With a sharp pen and an even sharper tongue, Microsoft's adventure in diction would quickly find its way into the garbage can where it belongs.

And now, we return our attention to plagiarizing. It must be admitted that there is no way to develop a dictionary without plagiarizing from A to Z.

Tom Lehrer - Plagiarize, plagiarize, plagiarize let no one's work escape your eyes.


In the memorial to Nicolai Ivanovich Labacheisky, Lehrer immortalized the process of plagiarizing. But the problem is deeper than just looking for and finding relevant materials that will bolster one's cause. It's the method that one can slyly present the information so that "you" receive credit for the works. Now in the educational system, at all levels, the student is encouraged to "research" the topic at hand and to then provide "in their own 500 words or less" an epistle that is devoid of plagiarism. Sorry, this just wont pass the bar that most who judge the act, raise. In today's crafting of words, Shakespeare who borrowed from Plutarch who borrowed from someone else, all would be found to plagiarize, how can you not be.

Some who review the depths of man's inner soul want the source to be in the text, right there with the "lifted" material. Footnotes aren't good enough. Now imagine trying to read most anything of substance if you are constantly reminded that "this ain't me".

The best that can be said to avoid the stigma of plagiarizing is to be up-front in announcing that your work is beholden to various and sundry sources, that nothing in the word that you have put to paper is original and that it is only for the merriment (and perhaps) a good grade or pat on the head (substitute financial rewards, full professorship, grants and chairs if you are academically disadvantaged) by your peers that you are embarking on this task. Perhaps then the reviewer will be so kind as to dismiss your foraging into the literature and bringing back salient thoughts that are not your own. This is the tact taken by peer reviewed journals.

If you dwell in the never-never-land of commercial writing, beware. When Gail Sheehy wrote the book, Passages, way back in the 1970's she was said to have borrowed "ideas" from David Levinson (Yale) and Roger Gould (UCLA). For this transgression she was forced to give up some 10% of here royalties from the book in an out-of-court settlement. I am at a loss to explain how one can not borrow ideas. There is really nothing new in this world, only revisionist theories on the order of occurrence. But pay she did.

So long Tom it's off to drop the bomb! (er, Mom that is. As written and performed by Tom Lehrer.)

(a) Too Many Songs by Tom Lehrer, Tom Lehrer

Teacher's violation of copyright by making multiple copies

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It's Wrong! Most accept making a single copy or so for reference work (scholarly(?)) as a necessary evil and a benefit of living in the electronic world.

However, to make multiple copies for the benefit of the students in a class should be preceded by a request to the publisher (or writer) to do so. And after the request is granted then it is permissible to distribute the copies. This is seldom done.

Can you imagine the difficulty if this were strictly enforced. The professor would have to read the material, digest it, cast new ideas in his/her own words (this is not paraphrasing as some would have you believe), commit the ideas to paper and then freely make copies for distribution. Even then, there is a thin line between original work and therefore a copyrightable piece and one that is plagiarization clothed in new phrases.

So, we criticize the student, perhaps an author that is too bold in stealing another's work or the researcher that jumps to the head of the class by publishing first even though the idea is another's. And yet, we see examples set by our most senior professors, stealing copyrighted material every day. What to do? The next best thing is to make sure that the source of the material is well documented. That way at least the magazine/journal/newspaper is given credit for their publishing the work.

It's easier to steal than to invent

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Working with a scientist at a major corporation, I was introduced to this concept. At this firm, the scientist and the non-scientist are on two different career tracts. This permits the company to hire and pay top salaries to their chosen few scientist and at the same time let management receive their just rewards as well, in a non-competitive environment.

This particular scientist, a physical chemist, typically had issued in him and his co-workers, more patents than all the rest of the division each year. How could this be? He explained it so simply. Once you have been promoted to such an esteemed position, you have assigned to you, your own patent attorney. Since the attorney's future lies in getting patents in vast numbers, it was to his advantage to glean from our scientist's work all that was of value. Unfortunately, not all that comes from such a noble mind is actually all that great. Nevertheless, as was confided to me by Al Kelly, another attorney with whom I worked; "I can get a patent on anything. It's just understanding how the Patent Office works." Obviously our chief scientist and his PA knew this as well.

But how about the concept of theft and honor? Simply put, our scientist follows the published literature in his field of interest. When he sees a paper which has particular merit, and there are always a number published each month, he simply extends the author's observations by what is called, politely, paper chemistry. Duly recording the concepts; he and his coworkers attempt to verify his minds-work in his notebooks and as all things are on a monthly timetable in industry, passes them on to the patent attorney. Then it's off to another project based on yet another journal article that has just appeared. With time, usually less than two years, a patent emerges with the official certificate from the Department of Commerce.

Certainly the originator of the papers that were in essence plagiarized could have claimed foul. But when you merge interest in "public or perish" in academia with "patent to survive" in industry, something gets lost in the process. The rewards are distributed. The professor of the original paper gets his tenure and our chief scientist gets his monetary rewards for his "beta-research". The companies' management also benefits; as the annual reports make much of the breakthroughs just around the corner based on research, so managers are rewarded for being smart to have chosen so well their scientist.. The stockholder can hardly complain as the companies' stock advances based on the stories in the press. And, last of all the United States Patent Office reaps rewards as they hire more examiners to study the applications and pass those that have the appropriate "i"s dotted and "t"s crossed.

Is this good science? Of course not! Is it plagiarism? Probably. The chief scientist hasn't had a novel idea in years; he preforms the role intended for him; and you can argue that nobody is hurt by the system. Maybe you can call it by some other name(?). I call it in deference to that great unnamed scientist, "It's easier to steal than to invent."

Copyright laws

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You can apply for a copyright and the cost is about twenty dollars. Do you really need to do so? When you commit an idea to paper it becomes your property, in essence it's copyrighted without formal declaration. If you choose to apply for copyright, you open the possibility that it will be denied. How can this be? There is a thin line between what the United States Department of Commerce will grant a copyright on and what they believe is simply an extension of existing works.

An example is the periodic table which represents the combined works of scientist since the original concept by Dmitri Mendeleev in 1869. As new elements are discovered they're added to the table in an orderly fashion and the table grows. In addition, there have been several suggestions of structuring the table so that it has more utility, provides more information, better shows te relationship between the elements, is more colorful, dramatic, &c. For the most part the government's view has been that the improvements are not considered copyrightable. I doubt that this would hold in court if the issue were challenged. Otherwise, one could never copyright a dictionary, or works of art that portray Jesus Christ.

Probably the best stance is that if you create it, it's yours and unless stated to the contrary by the Commerce Department, it is copyrighted, until challenged. So the bottom line is why waste twenty bucks on a certificate from the Government unless you just want something to hang on your wall.

But how about the warning on the inside of dictionaries and such. They claim that no part can be copied because it would be a violation of their copyright if you do so. It's legalese. Certainly parts of the dictionary are original works but most of the words and definitions have passed into common usage long since Noah Webster and others defined them. So go ahead and use words, even the definitions as you please, that's not plagiarism, and it would be ridiculous to cite Random House, Colliers, Merriam Webster, &c. ever time you write.

The Internet


Along comes the Internet, confounds the issue and upsets the cart. Suddenly, everyone can view an amazing variety of writings and stuff. And after having visited so many sites, it is difficult to remember from whence information came. It's possible that your own fertile imagination may have marriaged contributions from several sources into a unique creation of your own. How do you handle such a problem? Certainly the statements that come from University Deans and such, only confuse the issue. They insist that complete documentation be provided. Ah well, in a perfect society their wish would be granted, as in Baum's Oz, but unlikely today.

In one of my classes, I offered the students ten additional points to be added to their total points for test and other materials, for each article they brought to class that was used in the lectures. I thought this would be an incentive for these students to read carefully; the newspapers, journals and other sources of printed words that were available to them. Wrong! I was deluged by printed documents from the Web. They didn't even bother to read and certainly not understand the information they turned in for credit. Relevant to our class work? Yes. Of benefit to the student turning in the work? Hardly. So the golden goose was fried (Southern style).

Art

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Here's an interesting twist observed in a major university. One particular year the school of art had a very talented individual who combined ceramics and sculpture in his creations. Having worked in a manufacturing facility that produced laser cut steel for a number of commercial products, he came to appreciate the use of sub-assembly of components to create the final product. So, when he prepared for his "show" he created a number of identical ceramic and steel pieces that were assembled in various ways, yielding several unique pieces. In fact the strength of his show was the "tying of the pieces together." He sold some of the sculpture, gave some away and as the case at most universities, abandoned many exquisite pieces to the scrap heap. Here the story should end, but it doesn't. For the next two years, several of the components of his sculpture, reappeared in other students work. In particular the ceramic pieces seemed to have the most favor. No question but that the following students added a creative spark to the discard of another, but here is the really hard question. How is the work to be judged?

The last word

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I particularly like what Roget has to say about thieves;
" thief, robber, homo trium literarum, pilferer, rifler, filcher, plagiarist.

spoiler, depredator, pillager, marauder; harpy, shark, land-shark, falcon, moos-trooper, bushranger, Bedouin, brigand, freebooter, bandit, thug, dacoit, pirate, corsair, viking, Paul Jones; buccaneer, buccanier; piqueerer, pickeerer, rover, ranger, privateer, filibuster, rapparee, wrecker, picaroon, smuggler, poacher, plunderer, racketeer.

highwayman, Dick Turbin, Claude Durval, Macheath, knight of the road, footpad sturdy beggar; abductor, kidnapper.

cut purse, pick purse, pick pocket, light-fingered gentry; sharper, card sharper, skittle sharper, crook, thimble rigger, rook, Greek, blackleg, leg welsher, defaulter; Autolycus, Cacus, Barabbas, Jeremy Diddler, Robert Macaire, artful dodger, trickster; swell mob, chevalier d insustrie, shop lifter.

swindler, peculator, forger, coiner, counterfeiter, shoful, fence, receiver of stolen goods, duffer, smasher.

burglar, housebreaker, craksman, magsman, Bill Sikes, Jack Sheppard, Jonathan Wild, Raffles, cat burglar."

Roget's Thesaurus of English Words and Phrases, Grosset & Dunlap, 1941.

An updating of Roget would certainly add many other terms. If you plagiarize, you'll have lots of company. On the other hand if you ignore the literature you risk the more serious problem of our chemist friend.

One University defined plagiarism as: "To use someone's words or ideas without letting your readers know where they came from is a form of theft." Another goes further to say; "To copy sentences, or even phrases, without full acknowledgment, from someone else's work and to thereby convey the impression that they are one's own is plagiarism. So is paraphrasing - restating in one's own words - of someone else's ideas without full acknowledgment." Sounds simple doesn't it.

What's distressing is that by citation, stating that some or perhaps lots of the writing is taken; the author goes right along and presents the concepts, &c., as his or her own. The reader is left with the impression that much of what is written is the product of sweat from the author's brow and perhaps later is surprised to discover that many of the terms used by Roget, apply to that individual when the thief is revealed..

That's an unwritten cost of plagiarism.

And, finally an admonition from the preface of Don Quixote by Miguel De Cervantes Saavendra; "... your business is, with plain, significant, well chosen and elegant words to render your periods sonorous, and your style entertaining; to give spirit and expression to all your descriptions, and communicate your ideas without obscurity and confusion. You must endeavor to write in such a manner as to convert melancholy into mirth, increase good humour, entertain the ignorant, excite the admiration of the learned, escape the contempt of gravity, and attract applause from persons of ingenuity and taste. Finally, let your aim be leveled against that ill-founded bulwark of idle books .... " Of course this was directed to the tearing down of the illusion that chivalry and knights of old were Gods created to save mankind from itself, but it is appropriate to consider this advise in regards to theories that are taught as fact in many facets of our current educational system. Don Quixote, vol 1, pp 37 Huntington, New York, New York, 1814.

In "the little book" William Strunk had nothing to say about plagiarism. Now that's in keeping with Strunk who only directed his attention toward that which could be improved upon.

But before we end on the sad lot of plagiarist, we need to consider the opposite - ignorance of what has passed before.

Ignorance

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In many of our universities, governmental laboratories and commercial operations "ignorance is bliss". In this case the researcher ignores "all" the literature. It's so simple, using computer based literature documentation to overlook any publications that occurred before the 70's. This includes both the scientific and patent literature. It remains the fate of reviewers of those journals that practice this archaic form of punishment to point out that those really great ideas and experiments that the author has submitted have passed this way before. (Sometimes by the same reviewer to whom the manuscript was sent to for comments.) So not only is it necessary to study the literature for significant historical documentation but also to encapsule work in progress, to cite it for the benefit of the reader if not for the writer as well. Ignoring this bit of wisdom has disastrous consequences far greater than simple a bruised ego.

"It's easier to steal than invent" may be the credo, but invention without knowledge sure will get you in a peck of trouble in industry when you try to market your invention of "sliced bread."

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