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Title: Violation Author: J.S. Michel E-mail: [email protected] Web: www.geocities.com/js_michel/ Classification: Challenge fic (see author's notes). Keywords: Doggett/Reyes. Spoilers: Season 9. Rating: G Archive: Please ask, so I know where it's going. Disclaimer: They belong to Chris Carter. Feedback: Always welcome. Written: March 8, 2003 Summary: Long-lost mail. -- Years later, when she finally found the letter, her hands shook as she opened it. A bit of her past, John's past, materializing unexpectedly in an overlooked pocket of her tattered jacket... Monica waited until the quiet hum of the desert evening had set in; waited until he was sprawled on the lumpy couch with the sports section from last week's "La Cronica de hoy" before handing him the envelope. He fished out the yellow scrap of paper, looked up at her in disbelief, and the memory of that long-ago night came flooding back to her once again... -- "Do you want to come in for coffee?" she asked as he pulled up in front of her apartment. He shook his head. "It's late. I'll just walk you up a minute." Dinner had been continental, mid-priced. Not too casual, not too formal, not too intimate. A safe choice. She couldn't remember the restaurant's name, could barely recall what she'd eaten. But the conversation had flowed comfortably and they'd managed to avoid the dreaded First Date awkwardness. Dinner wasn't the point, anyway; they'd eaten together hundreds of times. Tonight was more like a respectful formality, a rite of passage. This man had been married for nearly a decade once and the whole dating concept probably ranked one notch below prostate surgery, but John Doggett played by the book. "You're going to get ticketed," she warned as she shut the passenger door. "Just be a minute," he assured her. Yes, John, you mentioned. They reached the front steps. She pulled out her key, turned expectantly to face him. "Thanks for dinner," she smiled dutifully. "I had a nice time." The age-old routine brought a hint of amusement to his face; his eyes narrowed, steely blue in the cold fluorescent lighting. "Yeah, me too." He leaned in close and kissed her. No tongue. But his mouth left no room for misunderstanding and she knew he was making sure neither of them could look back and misfile the evening as platonic or else he might actually have to go through this whole First Date thing again. She focused on his face as he pulled away. "You sure you don't want to come up?" she murmured innocently. She was toying with him now; knew it wasn't what he'd planned. "Don't wanna get ticketed," he reminded her with a smile. "See you Monday?" He didn't move, though, waiting for her to get into the safety of her building. His field, his rules: You don't jump a woman on the First Date. She told herself she should just be relieved they were off the bench at last. His hard-wired concept of respect was one of the things that had attracted her to him in the first place, wasn't it? Surely she could wait one more week for Date Number Two... "I'd like you to come up for coffee," she repeated, just softly enough. He hesitated. She could feel his resistance wavering. "Come up for coffee and I'll pay the damn parking ticket, John," she muttered. He blinked. She could practically see him re-framing the evening in his mind. "I'll just move the truck..." he began but she kissed him again and when they finally wandered out for a late breakfast she plucked the flapping yellow tag out from under his windshield wiper and ignored his protest. "Small price to pay," she murmured. And she'd meant it. Really. -- Of course the fact that they'd spent the next few weeks testifying for Mulder and then breaking him out of that military prison had wreaked havoc with her bill-payment system. Not to mention the fact that they'd been in hiding in Mexico ever since, but... "I could've sworn I'd mailed this," she gazed at him contritely as the parking ticket lay accusingly on the pock-marked coffee table alongside her long-expired check. "You're sayin' I've had an outstandin' parking violation for over a decade?" he grumbled. She drew him close, nuzzled his neck with gentle affection. "Don't worry, I doubt the Bureau bothered adding it to your rap sheet." He studied her with wounded amusement for a moment. "It was the one part of my past I'd hoped might still be respectable," he finally sighed, abandoning the Spanish sports section as she moved to make amends. -- Author's notes: This story was written in response to a "first line" Why Incision challenge ("Years later, when she finally found the letter, her hands shook as she opened it.") to see where different authors might take an identical starting point. This is where it took me -- what can I say except I guess I wasn't feeling very angsty that night. :) I'm the compulsive nit-picking type by nature but, in order to remain true to the exercise, I've ignored the urge to go back and change anything. The only thing I allowed myself to fiddle with was the title (it went from "untitled" to "Respect" to "Violation" in the twenty-four hours following its original posting on WI). Thanks for reading! Feedback is welcome as always. J.S. Michel www.geocities.com/js_michel |