(untitled - 17 men)

17 men on a ship   17 men on ship

17 then on a slip   17 then one slid

17 men one a kid   7 that one hid   17 and

one a him   17 that one kissed   17 men on a

ship   17 of them kissed   17 men on a trip

17 men gave slip   7 gents one a trip   17

men on him   17 men but not him   70 men

give sing   17 men on a whim   17 men on

ship   70 men sing a hymn   7 men son him

17 men on a ship   17 men one him

(untitled v.2.0)

17 men on a ship        

17 men on ship           

17 then on a slip         

17 then one slid          

17 men one a kid        

  7 that one hid            

17 and one a him        

17 that one kissed       

17 men on a ship        

17 of them kissed       

17 men on a trip         

17 men gave slip         

  7 gents one a trip      

17 men on him    

17 men but not him    

  70 men give sing      

17 men on a whim      

17 men on ship           

  70 men sing a hymn 

        7 men son him                

17 men on a ship        

17 men one him          

john

winter, 2002

taipei

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