Stop Memorizing! Write a Real Band 9 Opinion Essay


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Hello again dear lovely IELTS  
再次問候親愛的雅思考生  

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candidates. Welcome to your channel  
考生們，歡迎來到你的頻道  

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IELTS with Ralph. Hope you're fine. And  
Ralph的雅思頻道。希望你一切安好。  

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today we're going on uh to work on a  
今天我們將進行一個  

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task to band nine essay writing. And I  
九分範圍的作文寫作練習。我  

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have provided a very great question and  
提供了一個非常好的題目，我們  

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we'll see how we can write a band n  
看看如何寫出九分範圍的答案。  

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answer to this question. All right. So  
我們將對這個問題作答。好了，首先  

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first of all let's read the question.  
讓我們先讀一下題目。  

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Let's see what type of question it is  
看看這是什麼類型的題目  

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and then we will analyze the question  
然後我們將分析這個題目  

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step by step seeing what how many  
一步步來看要寫多少段落  

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paragraphs we are going to write and  
以及我們要寫的內容。  

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what exactly we're are going to uh  
以及我們究竟要寫些什麼。  

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write. Millions of dollars are spent on  
每年都在太空研究上花費數百萬美元。  

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space research every year. Some people  
有人認為這筆錢應該用來改善地球上的生活水準。  

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argue that the money should be spent on  
你是否贊同或反對？  

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improving living standards on Earth. Do  
好。  

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you agree or disagree?  
你贊同還是不同意？  

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All right.  
好了。  

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Do you agree or disagree with what?  
你贊同還是反對什麼？  

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Let's read the question again. You know  
讓我們再讀一次題目。  

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the first part, millions of dollars are  
第一部分是：每年在太空研究上的花費。  

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spent on space research every year. This  
這部分我們可以在引言的第一句做一個總結性陳述。  

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is the part in which we can provide a  
是我們可以提出一個總體的陳述的地方。  

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general general statement in the first  
好的。  

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sentence of our introduction. All right.  
現在最重要的是  

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Now the most important thing here is  
一些人認為  

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some people argue  
這筆錢應該用來  

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that the money should be spent on  
用於改善地球上的生活水準。  

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improving living standards on earth. So  
所以  

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there are some people who believe that  
有人認為  

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wasting that much money on space  
在太空探索上浪費如此大額的資金是不合理的，  

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exploration is not justified and that  
這筆錢應該用來改善地球上的生活水準。  

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money should be spent on improving  
你是否贊同或反對？  

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living standards on earth. Do you agree  
像這樣。  

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or disagree with this? Do you agree that  
這是一篇意見類文章，所以我們需要表達自己的觀點。  

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this money should be spent on earth not  
你贊成還是反對？  

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on space exploration? So as you can see  
我們可以採取的立場有幾個：  

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this is an opinion essay. So we have to  
第一個是完全贊同，並給出理由，例如  

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provide our own opinion. Do we agree  
由於這些原因，我完全贊同這筆錢應用於改善地球。  

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with this or not? Now there are a couple  
相反的觀點是，太空探索的支出是合理的，基於以下原因，  

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of let's say positions that we can take.  
我們可以提出理由。  

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The first one is that we completely  
第二個立場是部分贊同：  

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agree with this and we provide the  
我們部分贊同，並說明原因。  

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answers. We provide the reasons that for  
比如說，因為……，我很贊同這個想法。  

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example due to these reasons I quite  
另一種是部分贊同：  

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agree with this that I completely agree  
我們部分贊同，也認為應該在地球改善生活水準上花費一些資金。  

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that this money should be spent on earth  
還有另一個觀點是，我們認為部分資金應用於太空探索，  

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and um the opposite viewpoint is that uh  
並且應該在改善地球生活水準方面花費一些資金。  

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we say no space exploration uh  
我會說：在太空探索上的支出不合理，理由如下，  

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expenditure on space exploration is  
並提供我的理由。  

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justified due to these reasons and we  
還有另外兩個觀點：  

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can provide our reasons. There are  
第一個是我部分贊同，  

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um two other opinions. The first one is  
我部分贊同在改善生活水準的同時，也要考慮太空探索。  

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that I partly agree [snorts] with  
第二個是我也部分贊同，  

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investing this money on living  
我認為投資這筆錢於太空探索是合理的，  

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standards, but spending money on space  
並且一些資金也應用於改善地球上的生活水準。  

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should also be considered.  
我打算為太空探索的這筆支出辯護，  

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And there is also uh the other side of  
我將提供三個原因，說明為何我相信未來這些投資會有回報。  

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the argument in which I partly agree  
我會用五段文章：  

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with spending money on space exploration  
第一段是引言，最後一段是結論。  

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and um it should also be some of that  
我會提出三個主要理由，說明太空計畫和探索對地球福祉的貢獻。  

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money should also be invested in um  
好了，首先我們要有一個計劃。  

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improving living standards on earth,  
我們要清楚每段要寫什麼。  

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right? So what I'm going to do here is  
在第一段，我們總是用一個一般性陳述開始。  

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that I'm going to justify this  
例如，可以從最近人們對太空項目的興趣說起。  

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expenditure on space exploration. All  
然後提到一些人認為這樣的花費是不合理的，接著寫出我們的立場。  

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right. [snorts] And I'm going to provide  
之後的段落我會支持我的觀點：  

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three reasons why I believe that this  
第一個原因：資源問題。  

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investment will definitely pay off in  
第二個原因：世界人口增加。  

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the future. Right? And I'm going to have  
第三個原因：改善地球環境的計畫。  

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uh five paragraphs. The first one is  
這是我的五段結構。  

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introduction. The last paragraph is  
第一段：引言；最後一段：結論。  

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conclusion. And I am going to provide  
我會提出三個主要理由，說明太空探索對地球的益處。  

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three main reasons why I think that this  
好了，開始寫第一段：引言。  

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um space programs and space uh  
一般來說，引言可以從空間探索的總體背景開始。  

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exploration contribute considerably to  
例如：近年來越來越多國家參與太空項目。  

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the well-being of the earth. All right.  
這是我的總體陳述。  



當然，以下是剩餘內容的短語拆解與中文翻譯，持續前面內容的結構：

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Now uh let's see first of all as you  
現在，讓我們首先看看，  

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remember we always have a plan. We write  
記得我們總是先有一個計劃。  

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our plan what we are going to write  
我們會寫什麼內容都要先規劃好。  

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exactly in each paragraph. All right.  
每段內容都要明確規劃。  

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So in the first paragraph we always start  
所以第一段我們總是以一個  

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with a general statement. So general  
概括性陳述開始。  

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statement here is something related to  
這裡的總體陳述是關於  

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space exploration. And you can start  
太空探索的內容。你可以用例如  

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your introduction with something like  
來引導你的引言，例如：  

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for example um about um let's say recent  
例如，談談最近的興趣或事件。  

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involvement of people and recent  
人們對太空項目的參與與興趣。  

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interest uh uh in uh let's say space  
這樣的開頭可以幫助設定背景。  

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projects. All right. [snorts] And then  
然後在段落中說明一些反對意見。  

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we talk about uh let's say some people  
然後再提出我們的立場（立場句）。  

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that uh they say that this expenditure  
接著說明這些人認為這樣花錢是不合理的。  

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is not justified and then thesis  
最後提出自己支持的論點（論點句）。  

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statement which is our opinion which  
最後用一句話總結我們同意的理由。  

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side of the argument we agree with.  
接著進入主體段落的內容，提供理由與例子。  

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And then three reasons we are  
接下來，提供三個理由來支持你的觀點。  

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going to provide for [snorts] our um  
第一個理由：資源問題。  

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let's say for our claim. Now let's talk  
說明資源匱乏，探索新資源的重要性。  

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about the reasons. You know the first  
在第一個段落支持理由時，句子要明確表達。  

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reason that this expenditure on space  
第一個原因：地球資源短缺。  

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exploration is justified is related to  
說明這是支出合理的原因之一。  

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um resource problems that there is the  
再闡述資源短缺的嚴重性。  

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scarcity of resources right on the earth  
可以舉例說明：金屬、石油等資源的枯竭。  

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and um maybe  
提到可以在其他行星找到新資源。  

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uh we can find new resources on other  
例如：在火星找到資源的可能性。  

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planets right so this is my first reason  
這是第一個理由。  

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and then um in the first body paragraph  
在第一段中，進一步分析和提供例子。  

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I'm going to analyze this claim more  
支持資源短缺的理由：  

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analyze this reason more I'm going to  
例如：資源枯竭的嚴重性。  

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provide maybe some examples right and  
說明資源稀缺的例子，如：金、銀等稀有金屬。  

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another reason why I think this  
並說明探索新資源的重要性。  

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expenditure is justified  
第二個理由：世界人口增長。  

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is the world's population that is  
說明人口快速成長，資源再分配的需求。  

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growing  
例如：移民或殖民火星的可能性。  

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and resettlement  
說明：人類重置到其他行星的潛力。  

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of people would be a good option that we  
這是第二個理由。  

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can uh [snorts] actually transfer people  
可以幫助解決地球資源壓力。  

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to other planets right this is another  
最後一個理由：改善地球環境的計畫。  

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reason that I have in mind and the third  
例如：太空科技改善空氣、災害預警等。  

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reason which actually helps the  
這些計畫能提升地球的生活品質。  

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well-being of the earth is related to  
這三個理由支持探索太空的合理性。  

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some programs that can for example  
這些例子包括：臭氧層修復、氣候監測。  

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[snorts] uh improve the standards of  
太空科技有助於改善地球的環境。  

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living standards of the people on the earth by  
這些段落都用來支持太空探索的正面影響。  

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doing research on space exploration like  
最後，總結這些理由，強調太空探索的價值。  

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for example ozone layer or some  
這樣就完成了主要論點的陳述。  

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satellites that people um send to the uh  
在段落結尾用一句總結句。  

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to the space in order to analyze right  
說明：這些研究能提升地球的生活品質。  

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uh the problems uh which at last all  
最後，總結段落。  

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right? Uh eventually this will improve  
這樣結束一個段落，進入下一段。  

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the living standard and well-being of  
（繼續支持主旨）  

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people on the earth. So these are my  
這是我支持論點的三個主要理由。  

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three main reasons that I am going to  
下一段：討論人口增長。  

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support my claim. All right. Now let's  
開始第二段。  

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start with the first paragraph which is  
第一句：引入人口問題。  

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introduction. [snorts] So our general  
一般來說，這段可以用“同樣”或“此外”來連接。  

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statement is related to space  
相關於太空探索與人口問題。  

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exploration space projects and I can  
我可以說：  

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talk about that more and more countries  
越來越多國家參與太空項目。  

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have uh let's say are involved and have  
說明國家投入程度。  

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shown interest in this topic.  
這是我的總體陳述。  

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This is my general statement. In recent  
接著，縮小範圍，與題目相關。  

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years, you can start sometimes when you  
可以用：  

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are going to talk about a recent  
“近年來”。  

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development, you can start with in  
例如：  

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recent years. In recent years, in recent  
“近年來，隨著太空科技的發展”。  

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years, there have been more and more  
描述越來越多的國家加入。  

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countries involved and interested in  
說明趨勢。  

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long-term space projects.  
這是我的總體陳述。  




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This is my general statement. Now I  
這是我的總體陳述。接著我需要將內容縮小，與題目相關。  

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should narrow it down in order in order  
我會說：由於巨額的研究花費，這引發了爭議。  

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to relate it to my topic to the  
我會說：  

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question. So the question is this  
“這筆花費的合理性”。  

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expenditure. All right. Now I can talk  
我會開始談論：  

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about the debate that has been shaped by  
這個爭議：由於太空探索的支出引發的討論。  

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this uh let's say uh or about the  
我會說：  

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controversy that has been shaped by this  
“這筆龐大的花費引發的爭議”。  

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a huge amount of money spent on space  
接著，進入論述：  

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exploration. All right. Now my second  
“花費在太空探索上的龐大資金”。  

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sentence is related to this. I've  
這是我的第二句，縮小範圍：  

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narrowed it down to related to the  
“由於花費巨大”，  

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question because of the enormous  
說明：花費巨大，造成爭議。  

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research expenditures incurred. So you  
我會用如下句子：  

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see that how I start my sentence by  
“由於這些巨大支出”。  

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[snorts] talking about the expenditure,  
“花費在太空項目上的資金”。  

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right? The expenses, the money spent on  
“這引發了許多討論”。  

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the value of space projects has been  
“我已縮小我的陳述，與題目相關”。  

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disputed. This is a very good sentence  
“很多人認為這筆資金應該用於改善地球上的生活水準”。  

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because I've narrowed my general  
“現在我來說說我自己的觀點”。  

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statement down in order to relate it to  
“我贊同還是反對這個觀點”。  

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the question. Now I should talk about  
“我贊成這筆資金用於地球上的改善”。  

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those people who believe that this  
“我認為：這個花費是合理的”。  

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funding should be spent on standard of  
“我會用正面語氣來支持”。  

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people on the earth. Some people suggest  
“我會說：投資太空探索是值得的”。  

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that government funding should be  
“這是我支持的立場”。  

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diverted toward improving the living  
“我會根據這個理由來闡述”。  

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standard of ordinary people. Now it's  
“我們應該用更廣的視角看待”。  

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time to talk about my own opinion. Which  
“投資太空研究未來會有回報”。  

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side of the argument do I agree with  
“這支持我贊同花費的觀點”。  

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now? I should uh write about uh let's  
“我會說：這種投資在未來一定會有回報”。  

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say my claim that this space exploration  
這是我的主要觀點：太空探索的花費是合理的。  

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the money that is spent is justified.  
這是我整體的支持理由。  

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Right? [snorts]  
這是我的支持理由。  

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In evaluating the merits, you see how I  
我會說：  

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talk about the merits of space  
“太空探索的好處”。  

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exploration here. the merits of a space  
“投資未來太空探索的價值”。  

**00:08:44**  
ambition,  
“我們要以更廣闊的視野來看待”。  

**00:08:46**  
one should adopt a broader perspective.  
“這些投資未來一定會回報”。  

**00:08:49**  
The investment in space research can be  
“所以我認為這筆花費在未來一定會有回報”。  

**00:08:53**  
paid off someday in the future. So  
這就是我贊同的理由。  

**00:08:56**  
[snorts] what I say here is that this  
這是第一段的結尾。  

**00:08:59**  
expenditure will definitely pay off in  
接著，開始第二段：  

**00:09:01**  
the future. So I'm talking about the  
支持資源短缺與人口增長的理由。  

**00:09:03**  
positive point. So I agree with uh let's  
我會說：  

**00:09:07**  
say this idea  
“資源短缺的嚴重性”。  

**00:09:09**  
uh that this expenditure that is spent  
“探索新資源是合理的”。  

**00:09:12**  
on space exploration is definitely justified.  
“這是我的第一個支持點”。  

**00:09:15**  
That's it. This is my first  
接著開始第二段：  

**00:09:18**  
um paragraph, my introduction paragraph.  
我會用第一個理由：資源的稀缺。  

**00:09:20**  
Now it's time to start writing my first  
我會用一句話作為段落主旨句：  

**00:09:23**  
body paragraph. I'm going to provide as  
“地球資源正面臨前所未有的短缺”。  

**00:09:28**  
I said earlier three reasons. My  
“這些資源可以在其他行星找到”。  

**00:09:31**  
first reason here in this is uh resource  
“探索太空能解決資源枯竭問題”。  

**00:09:34**  
problem or the scarcity of the resources  
“這是第一個理由”。  

**00:09:37**  
on the earth. Because this is my first  
在段落裡，我會用例子說明資源的稀缺。  

**00:09:39**  
reason, I should definitely definitely  
舉例：金、銀等稀有金屬將會枯竭。  

**00:09:42**  
provide it in my first  
然後提出：  

**00:09:44**  
sentence which is the topic sentence.  
“這些資源在其他行星可能更豐富”。  

**00:09:46**  
Right? You should definitely include  
最後，總結：  

**00:09:48**  
your first reason in the topic sentence.  
“進行太空探索是有希望的冒險”。  

**00:09:51**  
This is how I start. The first reason  
“未來資源的開採可以解決資源短缺”。  

**00:09:54**  
let you see the first reason to support  
段落結束，進入例子與分析：  

**00:09:57**  
it is that our planet is now facing an  
“這些資源可能在其他行星豐富”。  

**00:10:01**  
unprecedented resource problem which can be  
“因此，進行太空研究是有希望的”。  

**00:10:03**  
tackled only by discovering and mining new  
“未來太空探索能解決資源枯竭”。  

**00:10:06**  
resources on other planets. This is my  
“這是我的結論句”。  

**00:10:09**  
first reason. All right, this is my  
“支持資源短缺的理由結束”。  

**00:10:12**  
topic sentence. Now I have um in the  
接著，分析資源的嚴重性：  

**00:10:17**  
rest of the paragraph I'm going to  
“金、銀等稀有金屬將會枯竭”。  

**00:10:19**  
support my claim maybe providing some  
最後，說明未來資源在其他星球可能豐富，  

**00:10:22**  
examples. Right. I talk about the  
這樣的探索是值得的冒險。  

**00:10:24**  
severity of this problem. I uh in the  
“這些資源在地球上稀少，但在太空中豐富”。  

**00:10:28**  
first sentence I uh let's say uh  
“這樣的資源可以在其他行星找到”。  

**00:10:34**  
I said that this is the problem or I  
“因此，太空探索是值得的”。  

**00:10:37**  
talked about the reason. Now I talk  
“這是我支持的第二個理由”。  

**00:10:39**  
about the severity how severe this  
最後，總結：探索太空是有希望的冒險。  

**00:10:41**  
problem is. All right. [snorts] The  
“資源在其他行星豐富，未來值得探索”。  

**00:10:44**  
overuse or scarcity of some resources on  
這樣就結束了這個段落。  

**00:10:48**  
the earth is a severe problems is a  
我們可以說：探索太空是值得的冒險。  

**00:10:52**  
severe problem. Now I provide some  
最後，總結並呼應原論點。  

**00:10:56**  
examples like what like gold like silver  
“探索新資源，未來一定會回報”。  

**00:10:59**  
right rare metals such as gold or silver  
這是我支持的第二個理由。  

**00:11:06**  
will eventually be depleted as  
“這些資源在地球上會枯竭，但在太空中可能豐富”。  

**00:11:09**  
industrial production expands.  
探索太空是值得的冒險。  

**00:11:13**  
Now uh  
“探索新資源是未來的趨勢”。  

**00:11:16**  
I can say that these resources or these  
“探索太空能解決資源枯竭問題”。  

**00:11:20**  
metals all right can be found or might  
“未來這些資源可能在其他行星豐富”。  

**00:11:25**  
abound on other planets. All right.  
“因此，進行太空探索是明智的”。  

**00:11:30**  
So conducting this research or space  
結論：太空探索是值得的冒險。  

**00:11:33**  
exploration is can be promising in the  
“未來探索太空將帶來巨大回報”。  

**00:11:36**  
future. All right. These metals and  
“這些資源在地球上稀少，但在太空中豐富”。  

**00:11:40**  
other natural resources although rare on  
“探索太空是未來的趨勢”。  

**00:11:45**  
earth might abound on other planets  
結束段落，呼應主題。  

**00:11:50**  
[snorts] in that case and this is how uh  
這樣就支持了探索太空的正當性。  

**00:11:53**  
I am going actually to conclude my uh  
總結整個論點，強調探索太空的未來價值。  

**00:11:58**  
claim in that case conducting space  
這是我最後的結論：  

**00:12:02**  
research is a promising adventure.  
探索太空是有希望且值得的冒險。  

---

當然！以下是結論段的短語拆解與中文翻譯，接續前面內容：

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**00:12:05**  
So you see my last sentence uh is a kind of  
你可以看到，我最後一句話是  

**00:12:08**  
concluding sentence that I conclude I  
一個總結句，總結我所說的內容。  

**00:12:12**  
wrap up the what I've said in this  
我會用這句話來收尾：  

**00:12:15**  
paragraph. So eventually I I I mean that  
“這個段落的結論。”  

**00:12:19**  
this will pay off and this expenditure  
我認為：這樣的支出未來一定會有回報。  

**00:12:22**  
is something that um is justified.  
這是我支持的理由。  

**00:12:25**  
Alright. Now let's move on to our next  
好了，接著進入下一段。  

**00:12:27**  
paragraph. As I said it is about words  
這一段是關於未來展望的。  

**00:12:30**  
population. All right. So I start like  
我可以用“我希望”來展望未來。  

**00:12:33**  
this. Meanwhile,  
例如：  

**00:12:35**  
meanwhile is a good word because it  
“我希望未來能看到更大的進步”。  

**00:12:38**  
connects my claim, my reason to the  
“探索太空將帶來更多知識與機會”。  

**00:12:40**  
previous one. And it means that I'm  
“這就是我對未來的希望”。  

**00:12:42**  
going to provide another reason for my  
最後，我會說：  

**00:12:44**  
claim. Meanwhile, the world's population  
“我希望未來人類能在太空中找到新家園”。  

**00:12:48**  
is now growing to a stage where there  
這是我的展望，期待未來的發展。  

**00:12:50**  
are too many people for the planet to  
“探索太空將幫助解決人口過多的問題”。  

**00:12:52**  
support, highlighting the need to seek  
“我們可以在火星或其他行星建立新居所”。  

**00:12:56**  
land suitable for people's resettlement  
這是我的展望和希望。  

**00:12:59**  
of the planet. So this is my topic  
“這是我對未來的期待”。  

**00:13:03**  
sentence and in my topic sentence I  
“我希望未來我們能見證太空探索的更大進步”。  

**00:13:05**  
provide my second reason and I say that  
這樣的展望鼓勵我們持續努力。  

**00:13:08**  
how this is space exploration will help  
“未來太空探索將推動科技進步”。  

**00:13:12**  
this resettlement.  
結尾：對未來的希望與正面展望。  

---

當然！你想要我繼續拆解最後的總結段落嗎？如果是的，以下是完整的短語拆解和中文翻譯：

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**00:13:15**  
Even if new urban developments are able  
即使未來城市可以容納更多人口，  

**00:13:17**  
to accommodate the increasing  
水資源和電力供應、廢物處理、污水排放和衛生設施，  

**00:13:20**  
population, water and electricity supply, waste  
都會變得難以負荷，  

**00:13:24**  
treatment, sewage disposal and  
因為資源有限，這些都會成為大問題。  

**00:13:28**  
sanitation will become unmanageable for  
因此，唯一解決方法就是：  

**00:13:30**  
the capacity of our planet. this  
重新安置地球上的人群。  

**00:13:34**  
sentence supports my claim and I provide  
我會說：  

**00:13:37**  
some examples like the scarcity of water  
“太空探索能提供新資源”。  

**00:13:40**  
or other resources or or electricity  
“未來我們可以在火星找到資源”。  

**00:13:43**  
so this or also sanitation so uh  
“探索太空是值得的冒險”。  

**00:13:47**  
by the end of the day we will face this  
最後，解決方案是：  

**00:13:52**  
scarcity of resources on the earth on  
“在太空中建立新居所”。  

**00:13:54**  
earth. All right so the only way that we  
“火星或其他行星可能成為人類的備用家園”。  

**00:13:57**  
can tackle this problem is to uh  
“探索太空是未來的趨勢”。  

**00:14:01**  
resettle people of the planet.  
結論：  

**00:14:04**  
Alright. So you see that how I provide  
“探索太空是人類未來的重要使命”。  

**00:14:07**  
suitable answer, suitable uh let's say  
“我們應該積極投資太空科技”。  

**00:14:10**  
uh examples in order to tackle this  
“未來探索太空會帶來巨大回報”。  

**00:14:14**  
issue.  
最後一句：  

**00:14:17**  
Um  
“未來太空探索將成為人類不可或缺的一部分”。  


**00:14:20**  
Um  
（引入結尾語氣詞，表示總結或結束的開始）

**00:14:21**  
now I should refer here what can I do  
現在我應該說明未來可以做些什麼  

**00:14:26**  
now here uh for the rest of the  
接下來的段落，我會討論未來的行動方案。

**00:14:30**  
paragraph I should talk about the  
我應該談談：  

**00:14:32**  
planets and I should say that there are  
行星的數量，至少有一個適合人類居住。  

**00:14:35**  
millions of planets out there in the  
“太空中有數百萬顆行星”。  

**00:14:39**  
space that at least one of them can be a  
“其中至少一個可以成為未來的人類家園”。  

**00:14:41**  
suitable place for people to live and I  
我可以舉例：  

**00:14:45**  
can provide as an example Mars right  
火星，例如：  

**00:14:47**  
Mars for example is a good example. The  
“火星與地球有很多相似之處”。  

**00:14:50**  
people in the near future can be able to  
“未來，人類可以在火星定居”。  

**00:14:52**  
move there and resettle there.  
“在太空中建立新家園”。  

**00:14:54**  
Right? So, as there are countless  
“這些行星將成為未來的備用家園”。  

**00:14:59**  
instead of saying a lot of, I've written  
“除了火星，還有其他行星”。  

**00:15:01**  
countless planets orbiting stars  
“數不清的行星在宇宙中繞行”。  

**00:15:05**  
throughout the universe. One can be  
“我們可以相信，至少有一個適合人類居住”。  

**00:15:08**  
confident that at least one of them is  
“火星可能是最接近地球的備用行星”。  

**00:15:10**  
suitable for our second home planet.  
“未來人類可以在這些行星上生存”。  

**00:15:14**  
Now, I provide example here. Mars, for  
例子：火星。  

**00:15:17**  
example, bearing a close resemblance to  
“火星與地球有許多相似之處”。  

**00:15:21**  
the Earth is considered a potential  
“火星被視為一個潛在的備用家園”。  

**00:15:24**  
backup. Backup means candidate or  
“未來，火星可能成為人類的第二個家園”。  

**00:15:27**  
replacement. Now, um it's time to move  
結束段落，進入下一個段落：  

**00:15:31**  
on to our next paragraph, which is uh  
下一段：第三個理由，說明太空探索的好處。  

**00:15:34**  
third body paragraph. All right, because  
我會說：  

**00:15:38**  
I'm going to provide three reasons.  
“我將提出三個理由”。  

**00:15:41**  
Now, uh it's time to talk about the uh  
“第一個理由：太空探索能促進科技進步”。  

**00:15:44**  
let's say um benefits of uh space  
“這些科技進步可以幫助改善地球環境”。  

**00:15:48**  
exploration to the well-being of people  
“例如：氣候監測、環境保護”。  

**00:15:50**  
on the earth. Right? In addition, you  
“這些科技應用能提升人類生活品質”。  

**00:15:53**  
see how I start my uh third body  
“另外，太空探索還能推動新科學研究”。  

**00:15:56**  
paragraph because I'm pro going to  
“提供新平台做實驗，促進發展”。  

**00:15:58**  
provide the third reason. So, I write in  
“這些都是太空探索帶來的好處”。  

**00:16:00**  
addition. In addition to searching for a  
最後，總結：  

**00:16:03**  
shelter for future generations, space  
“太空探索不僅對地球有幫助，也促進人類未來的進步”。  

**00:16:06**  
programs contribute considerably to the  
“未來太空科技會持續推動社會進步”。  

**00:16:08**  
well-being of the earth in some other  
“這些科技也能改善地球的環境”。  

**00:16:11**  
aspects what aspects so this well-being  
“例如：氣候控制、資源管理”。  

**00:16:15**  
improving the well-being of people on  
“這些都是太空探索帶來的正面影響”。  

**00:16:17**  
the earth how can it be advanced or  
“未來，太空探索會推動人類科技進步”。  

**00:16:19**  
improved now I'm going to provide  
“這會促進整體人類的福祉”。  

**00:16:21**  
example for example by monitoring the  
“例如：監測臭氧層、全球暖化”。  

**00:16:24**  
ozone hole global warming the loss of  
“太空技術能幫助解決環境危機”。  

**00:16:28**  
rainforests and other environmental threats  
“這些技術能改善地球的環境”。  

**00:16:31**  
to human survival. Remote sensing satellites  
“這些都是太空科技帶來的好處”。  

**00:16:34**  
help people trace the recovery from the  
“這些科技支持人類改善生活”。  

**00:16:38**  
worst environmental threats and thereby  
“在未來，太空科技將成為改善地球的重要工具”。  

**00:16:40**  
improve the quality of life. So you see that  
“這就是我支持太空探索的原因”。  

**00:16:43**  
how I provide the examples here that this space  
“最後，我會總結：太空探索是人類未來的重要使命”。  

**00:16:46**  
exploration can also improve the well-being  
“我們應該積極投資太空科技”。  

**00:16:50**  
of people on the earth. All right.  
“未來太空探索會帶來巨大回報”。