A msiquoting by O'Neill about Kerry's searches of boats
p. 55
    This misquoting seems relatively insignificant, but I find it interesting for what it seems to reveal about O'Neill's motives.  On page 55 he says that Kerry admits that during his
...entire stint in Vietnam, he never found a single piece of contraband on the hundreds of vessels he searched.
   As a source O'Neill cites page 202 of Tour of Duty.  I almost failed to find the words O'Neill used as inspiration until I looked at page 201, where these words begin (extending onto page 202):
During Kerry's entire stint in Vietnam he never found a single piece of contraband on a junk or sampan, unless one counts a U.S. military-issue anchor he confiscated from a Vietnamese barge.
   O'Neill altered the source information in three ways:

--giving a lower-limit number, of "hundreds", for how many boats Kerry ordered searched by his PCF crewmen
--changing Brinkley's list of three different types of vessels from junk, sampan, and barge to simply "vessels"
--removing mention of the anchor (a trivial change in my opinion)

    These changes seem motiviated by a desire to make Kerry's job seem simpler (by removing the list of three different types of boats), and to give readers a tangible, fairly large number of boats, enabling readers to better visualize the searches-without-warrant ordered by Kerry.
Hosted by www.Geocities.ws

1