I never really knew you
Before you were gone
You were my savior
But I hated you
Still you lost me
I did not lose you
Then you came back

Before you came back . . .
I was
A subject without a verb
A semi-colon used to separate a dependant clause
A preposition at the end of a sentence
Eine Akkusativ Präposition mit einem Dativ Artikel
A subordinating conjunction not connected to an independent clause

Then you came back with the force of a freight train
Kicking, screaming and cursing
Reminding me what you had done for me
Angry that I hated you
And I opened my arms and said
Forgive me

Now that you are back . . .
I am
A complete sentence ending with an exclamation point
An essay with a good introduction, compelling thesis, supporting evidence, and a strong conclusion
Two independent clauses joined by a coordinating conjunction
Eine männliche Genitiv Adjektiv mit der richtige Endung
A correct use of an irregular plural form
 

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