THE MYTHOLOGY OF PLACE:

JAMES K. BAXTER'S OTAGO WORLDS

Lawrence Jones
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The Brighton World
Page 9 

          Thus the memory of smoking the wild bees out of their hive in the rotten cabbage tree 'beside the stagnant  river' becomes an image of the Fall, its treasure not the honey the child coveted but 
     . . .  a nectar
     Distilled in time, preaching the truth of winter
     To the fallen heart that does not cease to fall. 
Many of the images from the town and the nearby farms are associated with loss and the 
Fall.  There is the simple loss through Time, represented by ruined farms.  One is the site of the farm of his great granduncle Duncan McColl, above Black Bridge,  which bridged McColl Creek where it joins with the Otokia Stream to form the Brighton River.  The first settlers saw in the wild landscape the possibility of 'release, eventual and ancestral peace, / Building the stubborn clans again', but the poet can now see only an overgrown orchard where
     . . . undergrowth
     Among stunted apple-trees  coiling
     Trips the foot.  Sods grass-buried like antique faith. 
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