TIME TO DO A PEE
You will need a system to organise your ideas if you want to get maximum marks in your coursework. You need a system that makes you develop your ideas.
You must try to PEE in every paragraph.
Start with a
Point- this is a comment made by you that you think is true and important.
�The First World war was a totally new type of war�
This is true but how do you prove it? You need
Evidence or Examples
�Far more soldiers were killed than in other previous wars and the battles, such as the one at the Somme, were bloody, long and seemingly pointless. New weapons like machine guns made advance impossible. Barbed wire and trenches made defence easier.�
These are good examples, but why did all this happen like this? You need
Explanation
�All this happened because the technology had changed the weapons available but the tactics of generals did not change as quickly. High death rates happened because old fashioned infantry charges did not work against new technology.�
Now you have a PEE with this non historical example.
Point- Alcohol can be dangerous to some young people
Evidence/Examples-
Explanation-
If there is time and if you are told, try a historical example.
YOU CAN USE PEE TO GET HIGH MARKS ON THIS COURSEWORK