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O THE COVER LETTER: O Contents: O Return Address. Make it very easy for the agent to contact you. O Phone number, e-mail, website information, etc. Hint: Is your phone number toll free? Professionals use toll free numbers. O Address double-checked. Have they moved? Same suite? O Addressed to the correct person. Use their name, not "Dear Editor," Hint: Consider a 25-cent phone call to check. O Nothing informal. This is business. O Times Roman, 11 or 12 point font, never smaller. O High quality white paper. 20# bond at least. O Your own letterhead stationery. O Don?t have letterhead stationery? The professionals do. Hint: Your word processor can create letterhead. Just use a different font. O Business style format. Let your modern word processor help you here. O Laser printed if at all possible. Ink jet is okay. NOT a 9-pin dot matrix printer. Hint: Sweet talk your boss into printing it for you on the company laser. O A "reminder" introduction used, if and only if it applies. "In Dallas, we spoke..." O No more than one page for the cover letter. O Absolutely nothing negative or amateurish in the letter. Avoid such errors as: "Although I'm not published..." "All my friends love it..." "Since everyone else has rejected it, you're my last hope..." O Sell, Market, and Sell. Sell the benefits, not just the bare facts. Hint: Do you know a great marketing rep.? Let them look over your letter. O Any impressive awards your manuscript has won. O Great "hook", even if you must rewrite it fifty times to get it perfect. O High-impact, concise "blurb". Hint: See my "High-impact Thesaurus" O Superb "clincher" at the end. O Signed. (duh!) O P.S. included if feasible. A postscript nearly always gets read. O Spell checked, by computer and visually. O Grammar checked, by computer and visually. Hint: If you use Mail-Merge, pay SPECIAL attention to the greeting. You don't want to write something like "Dear Ms. Dr. Jones," O Aged at least a day, and proofed again. O Correct letter in the correct envelope! O Double check this before sealing every envelope. O THE SHORT SYNOPSIS O Spell checked, by computer and visually. O Grammar checked, by computer and visually. O Aged at least a day, and proofed again. Hint: Let a second pair of eyes read it. O Correct synopsis in the correct envelope. O Double check this before sealing every envelope. O THE S.A.S.E: O Correctly addressed to you (not to them!). O Their correct return address. O Envelope the size they requested. O Proper postage. O Courtesy piece of bond paper inside the SASE, inscribed "For your comments." O YOUR BUSINESS CARD: O Optional of course, but you should have them. The professionals do (hint, hint). O THE ENVELOPE: O Correctly addressed to them (not to you!). O Your correct return address. O Proper postage. Won't they just love you if it arrives there with postage due? O All enclosures. O Cover Letter on top. O Business card clipped to your cover letter. O Short synopsis. O Folded S.A.S.E, stamp showing prominently when they open your outer envelope. |
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