Checklist for Writing Queries
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O THE COVER LETTER:
    O Contents:
        O Return Address. Make it very easy for the agent to contact you.
        O Phone number, e-mail, website information, etc.
                Hint: Is your phone number toll free? Professionals use toll free numbers.
        O Address double-checked. Have they moved? Same suite?
        O Addressed to the correct person. Use their name, not "Dear Editor,"
                Hint: Consider a 25-cent phone call to check.
        O Nothing informal. This is business.
        O Times Roman, 11 or 12 point font, never smaller.
        O High quality white paper. 20# bond at least.
        O Your own letterhead stationery.
            O Don?t have letterhead stationery? The professionals do.
                Hint:  Your word processor can create letterhead. Just use a different font.
        O Business style format. Let your modern word processor help you here.
            O Laser printed if at all possible. Ink jet is okay. NOT a 9-pin dot matrix printer.
                Hint: Sweet talk your boss into printing it for you on the company laser.
        O A "reminder" introduction used, if and only if it applies. "In Dallas, we spoke..."
        O No more than one page for the cover letter.
        O Absolutely nothing negative or amateurish in the letter. Avoid such errors as:
                "Although I'm not published..."
                "All my friends love it..."
                "Since everyone else has rejected it, you're my last hope..."
        O Sell, Market, and Sell. Sell the benefits, not just the bare facts.
                Hint: Do you know a great marketing rep.? Let them look over your letter.
        O Any impressive awards your manuscript has won.
        O Great "hook", even if you must rewrite it fifty times to get it perfect.
        O High-impact, concise "blurb".
                Hint: See my "High-impact Thesaurus"
        O Superb "clincher" at the end.
        O Signed. (duh!)
        O P.S. included if feasible. A postscript nearly always gets read.
        O Spell checked, by computer and visually.
        O Grammar checked, by computer and visually.
                Hint: If you use Mail-Merge, pay SPECIAL attention to the greeting.
                          You don't want to write something like "Dear Ms. Dr. Jones,"
        O Aged at least a day, and proofed again.
        O Correct letter in the correct envelope!
            O Double check this before sealing every envelope.


O THE SHORT SYNOPSIS
    O Spell checked, by computer and visually.
    O Grammar checked, by computer and visually.
    O Aged at least a day, and proofed again.
            Hint: Let a second pair of eyes read it.
    O Correct synopsis in the correct envelope.
        O Double check this before sealing every envelope.


O THE S.A.S.E:
    O Correctly addressed to you (not to them!).
    O Their correct return address.
    O Envelope the size they requested.
    O Proper postage.
    O Courtesy piece of bond paper inside the SASE, inscribed "For your comments."


O YOUR BUSINESS CARD:
    O Optional of course, but you should have them.
            The professionals do (hint, hint).


O THE ENVELOPE:
    O Correctly addressed to them (not to you!).
    O Your correct return address.
    O Proper postage. Won't they just love you if it arrives there with postage due?
    O All enclosures.
        O Cover Letter on top.
        O Business card clipped to your cover letter.
        O Short synopsis.
        O Folded S.A.S.E, stamp showing prominently when they open your outer envelope.
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