AMON
The Darkside of the Devilman
Part 6
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Title: Final Judgement
Written: Gou Nagai
Illustrated: Yu Kinutani (I think.
I'm not sure if this was the arrangement for author and illustrator but it makes the most sense.)
Translated from: Amon Devilman Mokushiroku
© Gou Nagai, Yu Kinutani and Kodansha 2000 (Not me!)
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This translation is © to me and is done expressly for non profit purposes.
(I desparately wanted to know exactly what was happening and since no one else was going to do it for me...)
So no selling, renting or anything else...

[Right... This is a very literal translation, and I have put in some scene descriptions but you are missing out on a lot if you don't have the manga. It looks wonderful. ^_^ No I'm not sick, you just miss out on a lot when you are reading a translation of something which is essentially a visual work.]

WARNING: (Again) - This will have strong language and violennce in it. I can't help it, the manga's got it. So if you are going to be offended, click 'Back' on your browser now.


Page 177.

Cover page showing a spot light illuminating one single feather. As I said earlier, "Single feather in the light, single life in the balance. What will the final judgement be?"

Title: Final Judgement


Page 178.

Amon: At last... The time for paying up has come....

Amon: It's the time for me to crush you....

[Several panels leading into a close up of Satan and Amon's faces. The other panels show that they are standing, floating over some sort of surface which is reflecting them. There is no back ground, just white nothingness.]


Page 179.

Satan: Hm....

[A couple of pictures of Satan, I think just to show him off and those wings! He doesn't really look that impressed with what Amon is saying. Maybe he was hoping to see Akira.]


Page 180.

Satan: Come then, Amon...

Satan: You've found your way here to fight your ruler...

Amon: Your spirit (mental powers) wound help you...

Amon: Now!!

[Picture of Satan curling himself up into the fetal position with his wings folded around him and then looking over disinterestedly at Amon before closing his eyes. Amon looks pissed at this and then leaps to attack.]


Page 181.

Amon: Gu!!

[Panels of Amon closing to attack Satan with one of Satan, his eyes still closed. Amon realises something just before a wave of power hits him and drives him back.]


Page 182.

Amon: Uogoa!!

Amon Gu..!!

[Amon crying out as his wings are ripped off by that power. It almost looks like he has become the earlier goup around the wound. He falls slightly and then his wings are seen falling away.]


Page 183.

Amon: Ugu...!!

[Amon has caught his fall but then his right arm is blown off at the shoulder causing him to fall to the ground. A shot of his severed arm before back to Satan who still has his eyes closed although perhaps is looking a little sad.]


Page 184.

Amon: U...

Amon: Oo....O....

Amon: OO!!

Amon: Uo!!

[Amon picks himself up but he is in pain. He then regenerates wing spikes, pointy things protruding from his back that could develop into wings, and then picks up his severed arm and reconnects it to his body. Amon, like Devilman Akira can heal any wound but that doesn't mean he doesn't feel the pain of them.]


Page 185.

Amon: Ha...

Amon: That's right... The best....

Amon: It's been... A long time (Since I had to fight this well/Since I was injured like this (Take your pick of what he is meaning here.))

[Amon continuing to heal himself as he continues on towards Satan. Satan hasn't moved and still has his eyes closed. Definitely saddened though. (I'll explain my thoughts on this later.)]


Page 186.

Amon: UGOA!!

[Pretty much Amon's entire right side has become a wound, splitting him down the middle. And he falls back down, flat on his face before Satan.]


Page 187.

[Panel of Satan opening his eyes slightly and then of Amon, though wounded and steaming, or baking from his wounds, still crawling to attack Satan. Satan looks on, not attacking anymore at the very determined Amon.]


Page 188.

Amon:...ha... haha...

Amon: As... As to be expected of you, Satan...

Amon: As expected... You're powerful...

Amon: Now, I'm...

Amon: Happy despite myself... (Happy despite my wounds.)

{Amon is saying 'sasugada' which is something like, As to be expected of you, or just like you. It was explained to me as being said when something was typical of that person.}

[Amon still crawling towards Satan although he really does look like he is melting or burning white hot where his is touching the ground. Amon is sweating a lot and Satan is still looking on.]


Page 189.

Amon: But there is something seriously wrong with this (usually strong) health...

Amon: Sata... n

[Amon reaching out towards Satan. Satan almost seems to consider it before he reaches down before closing his eyes again. Last panel is of their hands almost touching.]


Page 190.

[Panel of a crying Satan reaching out towards Amon's hand.]


Page 191.

[Completely black page.]


Page 192.

Satan: Akira.....

[Completely black page except for the one word bubble.]


Page 193.

Merican-jou (I think): Which one could be finished this soon?!

Merican-jou: Amon or Satan, which one!?

Big Head: I don't know, but....

Big Head: Amon and Satan... The two of them went into that place with the intention to finish this.

(I think that's what's being said.)

Big Head: No matter what the consequences...

Miiko: Wh...

Miiko: What's that!?

Zenon: Huh!?

[Back to the Indian guys and the rest of the Devilman Gundan before a picture of a surprised Zenon followed by one of some light streaming though dark clouds.]


Page 194.

[Panels of Satan decending from the sky in a beam of light, carrying something. The something resolves itself into being a softened form of Amon although Satan seems happy enough.]


Page 195.

[Satan carrying a curled up Amon with some of his wings protectively furled around them. Various panels overlaid of surprised expressions on Zenon's, Merican-jou's, Miiko's and the Indian Guys faces.]

LOOK AT THE SCAN! LOOK AT THE SCAN!!!!!


Pages 196 - 197.

[Page 196 is a picture of the softened Amon hanging in a spotlight. Page 197 is the Indian Guys, Miiko, Merican-jou and Dosu 6 gathered around looking at him.]



 Page 198.

Zenon: Amon is dead...

Zenon: This is...  over...

Indian guy possibly Brow Bones: Amon was still young...

Indian guy possibly Brow Bones: And that's... Satan..!!

Brow Bones: So... Amon is dead...

Satan: It's not over Zenon....

Satan: It's just beginning...

(Here the Indian guys, I think, are trying to say that compared to Satan Amon was still very young and  inexperienced in combat. Actually the Indian Guys are probably saying that very well in Japanese, I'm just having trouble picking up the meanings.)

[Close up of the soften Amon in profile, followed by one of a happy/surprised Zenon and then various shots of the Indiann guys. Finally one of Satan's eyes.]


Page 199.

Miiko: !!

Zenon: Im... Impossible..!

Merican jou: A...

Merican jou: Aa....

[Panels of Satan gently touching Amon's face before he leans over to kiss him. Various shots of a surprised Miiko, disbelieving Zenon, fierce Big Head and a shocked Merican-jou.]

LOOK AT THE SCAN! LOOK AT THE SCAN!


Pages 200 - 201

[Double spread of Satan  now holding an unconscious Akira. Drool!]

LOOK AT THE SCAN! I MEAN IT!


Page 202.

Satan: I wanted to meet you...

Satan: Akira...

OR

Satan: I've secretly loved you...

Satan: Akira...

[Close up of a peaceful Akira and then a close up of a wistful Satan.]

(THIS particular line caused me more headaches than the rest of the entire translation. It was one of the first parts I translated and I STILL don't know what exactly is being said here.  The kanji, as I understand it is meet secretly or lovers meeting, so you can see how I can get the two translations. I have put both in because I really don't know which one it should be. If anyone knows, PLEASE tell me since this is a rather important section. I have my own preference of course but I am willing to be reluctantly over ruled. Sorry for making such a long  note, and back to the translation.)

MAY I SUGGEST THE SCAN TO HELP YOU APPRECIATE THIS PAGE?


Page 203.

Merican-jou: Br... Brother!!

Miiko: Akira... san..!!

Zenon: I...

Zenon: I don't believe it...!!

[Panels of Merican-jou,  Miiko and Zenon over a picture Satan and Akira. Akira is lying on the ground and Satan is kneeling before him, one hand lightly resting on Akira abdomen and his wings spread out beautifully.]


Page 204.

Satan: Good-bye

Satan: Akira

Merican-jou: Darn it... Look,  Dosu 6... It's our Brother...

Merican-jou: It's Fudou, our Brother..!!

Merican-jou: Our Brother's alive...

Merican-jou: He's... really alive!!

[Panel of a still wistful Satan and then a close up of the still comatose Akira. Various panels of a crying Merican-jou with the last one being a crying Miiko.]


Page 205.

Satan: Let's go, Zenon!

Zenon:....huh....

Satan: The fight's over (The War's over)

[Panel of one of Satan's wings followed by a very fierce looking Satan looking over at something,  presumably Zenon. Last panel is of Akira lying in the ruins of what looks like an ancient city. Ruined white marble everywhere!]


Page 206.

[Panels of a single feather falling to earth above Akira. As the feather falls it gently brushes against Akira's lips before fluttering to the ground.]


Page 207.

Akira: Where..?

Akira: I've has a long dream....

Akira: Ryou... Satan... (I will) continue to hate your dream... (This could be Will continue to hate my dream but I don't think so.)

[Akira opening his eyes before sitting up and looking around. Did I forget to mention he is naked? Finally, female fan service! Anyway, he runs his hand through his hair before considering where he is.]


Page 208.

Akira: I'll proceed (continue)...

Akira: The Devilman Army Corps are the beginning...

Akira: Miki...!

[Akira standing up and beginning to walk around. When he says Miki have close up of his face before a back shot of him with hair beginning to rise up.]


Page 209.

Akira: I am...

[Various panels of Akira changing into Devilman.]


Page 210

Akira: Devilman!

[Close up of Devilman's face overlaid with a fully changed Akira walking out of the page. Underneath is a single panel of a forgotten feather.]

OWARI (yatta, I finished!)


Thoughts and Notes.

While it may seem stupid for Amon just to leap to attack Satan, in my opinion it was probably the wisest course of action. Although Amon does have some telepathic powers I doubt he could take on Satan who relies on those powers. Satan is a demon who fights using telepathy, and Amon is one who fights using his body, that's why he is covered with extendable spines and blades. So for Amon to win against Satan he had to get close enough to him to inflict damage upon Satans body which doesn't have any defenses against physical injury. Satan has a human body with wings, no armour and no claws to attack. It's merely a matter of how they have evolved. In all probability if Satan didn't have his mental powers Amon would win because in a physical fight he is clearly superior. Oh well...

Now, when Amon is saying that he is seriously injured I believe he is trying to say that Akira is interferring with his fighting ability. It's also begging for mercy without actually begging. It probably is what moved Satan and probably why Satan was sad at attacking Amon. He gives Amon mercy because he loves and wants to rescue Akira and he was sad because he didn't want to inflict the damage on Akira in the first place.

And if you haven't noticed by now I really am a Satan/Akira fan! That is why I'm not likely to translate more of Amon. Akira's not in it! Satan is handsome and while the story does look interesting Volume two, except for the last little bit really didn't grab my attention that much. As I said, Volume three is going to have to be really really impressive before I do anything.


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