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Give Chance To A Boy
Before you read the poem I wrote, you have to read first this version of a girl. This is the original verse and it hits me. So I decided to write a response poem against the original version.

 

Give To A Boy
-An attack against Egoistic boys-


A heart is not a plaything,
A heart is not a toy,
But if you want it broken,
Just give it to a boy.
Boys they like to play with things,
To see what makes them run,
But when it comes to kissing,
They do it just for fun.
Boys never give their hearts away
They play us girls for fools,
They wait until we give our hearts,
And then they play it cool.
You will wonder where he is at night,
You will wonder if he's true,
One moment you will be happy,
One moment you will be blue.
If you get a chance to see him,
Your heart begins to dance.
Your life revolves around him,
There's nothing like romance.
And then it starts to happen,
You worry day and night.
You see, my friend, you're losing him.
It never turns out right.
Boys are great though immature.
The price you pay is high,
He may seem sweet and gorgeous,
But remember, he's a guy.
Don't fall in love with just a boy.
That takes a lot of nerve.
You see, my friend, you need a man
To get what you deserve.
So, when you think you're in love,
Be careful if you can.
Before you give your heart away,
Make sure that he's a man!

-Obviously, written by an unknown girl

Give Chance To A Boy
-A defense against ‘Give To A Boy’-

A heart is not a plaything
A heart is not a toy
“We never really want it broken…”
Now, listen to the defense of a boy…
Boys they like to play with things
To enjoy everything they seem
But when it comes to real loving,
Nobody understands him.
Boys do give their hearts away
But to make it see will be un-“cool”
“So we wait before we give our hearts,
While playing girls who are fools.”
Girls wonder where he is at night
But never wonder if he’s feeling right.
One moment, girls will be happy
One moment, girls will be moody.
And then it starts to happen
Girls worry day and night
They think they’re losing him
But never really listen to his side.
If only girls get a chance to hear him
They’ll understand what he’s been
Ego’s part of all plans
“Our way of becoming a man.”
“Boys are immature, we admit
But maturity tells only how we think,
How many experiences we have had,
Not, our capacity to fall in love.”
“Boys, like me, are inconsistent
But girls’ demands are never constant
So we, boys, insist persistency
Hoping you, girls, will show us your clemency.”
So when you think you’re in love
Learn how to understand
No matter if he’s a boy or a man,
As long as it’s real, love him all you can.

-J.K.P.

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Bloody isn't it?

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