Author: January
Review by: Lemondrop*
NoRomos beware!!
When I read this fanfic, I could tell that she put a lot of time and effort into it. She provided a wealth of descriptive detail when introducing the characters to help the readers get an impression of them. Good readers note, remember, and visualize descriptive details to familiarize themselves with the characters and settings of the stories. A lot of her story dealt with sensory images, and I enjoyed that very much.
Characterization was another way she developed and presented the characters in her story. The elements of characterization included descriptions of the character's thoughts, feelings, and actions. The characterization was also developed in showing how other people responded to the character. As I read each selection, I could feel each character come alive in it's own unique way, and she made you feel like you were inside each character's head without jumping from one person to another in the same scene, and I was very grateful for that. I felt she covered this area very well.
The ending has got to be the best part, it was so beautiful, I finished the story with tears stinging the back of my eyes. But for those of you who have not read it yet, I want you to go in without any knowledge of what will happen, so I encourage you to click on the link below as soon as you have finished reading this review! :-D
Everything was believeable and always kept me in suspense for the next moment. It seemed the story got better and better the farther you read. I really enjoyed reading this story and highly recommend others to read it!!
READ IT!!
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