| Ultimately, some of his goals for modernization were realized posthumously in 1949, with the reunification of China under the CCP, but as previously mentioned, he did not live to see it. Another disappointment to him was that, while he wrote original material, healso rigorously translated other works, mostly Russian, which fell on deaf ears; or in this case, blind eyes. You see the useless filler I had to throw in there? I'm telling you, this was impossible. Little more can be said of the Lu Xun [NO], but that does not undermine his importance to Chinese history at all, for his works, short as they were, served to expose his "abnormal society" and eventually change it. "The Lu Xun"? What the hell was I on? Few moderate writers in any age can make that claim, but as I said, 5 pages on a short story writer is a bit of a stretch, yet I reiterate, Lu Xun's impact on Chinese culture during his lifetime, and even during the rediscovery of his work more recently, is immeasurable. Whew. Again, double-size Post-it note: "Lucas, You brush upon some relevant and important points on page 3, but it goes no further than that. The main problem is no Thesis statement; the paper isn't really 'about' anything. Also, don't refer to yourself or the fact that you're writing a paper. The Gogol stuff was a neat aside, but it has no place here. Also, page length does not meet the minimum requirements. Please try harder Lucas. You need to put more time in, and get feedback before you turn in your final drafts. 68 / D+" -George Lazopoulous Seeing as how my only two goals for my collegiate career, a D+ and a D-, were both met in my first semester of my first year, and both in the same class, I won't be too pissed about losing my scholarships. Well, I probably will. God dammit. First Paper Other Writing Home |