| I'm writing to humbly offer my services as copyeditor. I've just "gotten a load" of the HIA News #6 and the lack of proofreading is a crime to behold. One would think you were typing with that famed ass of yours, instead of your hands. For instance, what the hell does this sentence mean?: "Later when queried about when exactly these trays would appear, found that Myers, who had previously "fiddled" about the husbands car - claiming he was 'just trying to shut the door' when questioned politely by the husband, was actually considering keeping the trays." The context does not make the above statement any clearer. I see one headline was corrected with a pen, which is one way to do it, I guess. Also, I've spoken to one of your authors and he has informed me that the articles you claim were lost, were actually censored. I would encourage you, in the name of responsible journalism, to maintain in your pages a free and open discussion of the issues and not to hide from controversy like a startled rabbit. Of course, the portions of the publication that I could understand (i.e. the parts with the least number of grammatical errors) were hilarious and I thank you for the laughs. I especially liked "Current Trends: Fear of El Serpiente," although I'm not familiar with the name. And I enjoyed Mr. Wordbutt's angry rant. Please let me know if I can be of help. GFMC |
| BUT WE WILL ALSO PRINT SCATHING DIATRIBES LIKE THIS ONE! (From our good friend, Mary Connor) |