Academic Writing 1                  Gary Rostock                      Winter Semester 2008

Lectures will take place every two weeks. Two essays at pass – 12 marks – are necessary for an overall pass, essays should be between 600 to 700 words and are to be emailed to [email protected]. [email protected]



Your essay should contain a header in which there is: your name, your course code, my name and the deadline date, below this should be the exact title. If you do not comply with this requirement I shall send your essay back to you.

Do not bring me paper versions. I will Google at least seventy per cent of work submitted and will fail all plagiarists with no chance of re-submission.

I have uploaded an excellent essay by Marie Pecarova as an illustration of academic writing by a Czech student for which I gave a maximum of 20. She also formatted the essay correctly but as a web page this is not visible.

You will need to refer to the Academic Writing website throughout the course for support materials and a course outline www.geocities.com/grostock


The focus this semester will be on literary critique using the academic writing course as your skills base. My lectures will go over sections 1 to 12 of the Academic Writing outline and we will also discuss elements of literary criticism. 

IMPORTANT NOTICE CONCERNING ESSAY REQUIREMENTS

You will evaluate two music videos (compare and contrast); their visual content, lyrics and style. The videos are available on the Internet; see below.

Essay 1, Deadline: Friday 14th November 2008

 

Your first essay title is:  Compare and contrast the music videos `Hurt` performed by Johnny Cash and `Baby One More Time` performed by Britney Spears 

 

Think about the seriousness of each song and its presentation. What do they represent?  What is Cash trying to convey? How does the music/lyrics/video achieve this? What is the aim of Spears` video? Think about the sexual imagery and suggestiveness. Is she selling more than a song? How are they different? What is asked of the viewer? Think about why videos are made, who they are made for, what role do they play in popular culture?

 

Links:

 

Johnny Cash:

Video… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmVAWKfJ4Go

Lyrics… http://www.lyrics007.com/Johnny Cash Lyrics/Hurt Lyrics.html

 

 

Britney Spears:

Video… http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_bsniYwSaWg&feature=user

Lyrics… http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/britneyspears/babyonemoretime.html

 

Video criticism, page 221…
http://books.google.com/books?id=nr-o8xEJSfoC&pg=PA224&lpg=PA224&dq=music+video+academic+criticism&source=web&ots=4U07DBAlCA&sig=vw8VXmK7JnTH5AmW1pVpCOpcr7I&hl=en&sa=X&oi=book_result&resnum=9&ct=result - PPA222,M1

http://www.edcox.net/research/ba/musicvideo/part2-4.asp

http://www.edcox.net/research/ba/musicvideo/conclusion.asp

 

Essay 2, Deadline: Friday 12th December 2008

 

Your second essay title is: Compare and contrast the lyrics of Joy Divison´s ´Love Will Tear Us Apart´ and the Beatles´ ´Love Me Do´

 

 

What do both songs represent? Are they positive or negative reflections? Who are they aimed at? What are they trying to convey? Why did the writers choose to write in this way? Which affects you the most? Why? Which will endure over time? Why?

 

This is a textual analysis; the videos are to be used only to relate to the song.

 

Videos:

Beatles - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GwbOp8mqD7g

Joy Division - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yTIpcwBTTs

 

Lyrics:

Beatles -  http://lyricwiki.org/The_Beatles:Love_Me_Do

Joy Division - http://lyricwiki.org/Joy_Division:Love_Will_Tear_Us_Apart

 

Lyrical analysis…

http://www.loc.gov/teachers/lyrical/tools/docs/songs.pdf

http://beatlesnumber9.com/together.html  non academic but interesting ideas about the lyrics to the Beatles `Come Together`

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