Detached
It was December�a bright frozen day in the early morning. Far out in the country there was an old Negro woman with her head tied in a red rag, coming along a path through the pinewoods. Her name was Phoenix Jackson. She was very old and small and she walked slowly in the dark pine shadows, moving a little from side to side in her steps, with the balanced heaviness and lightness of a pendulum in a grandfather clock. She carried a thin, small cane made from an umbrella, and with this she kept tapping the frozen earth in front of her. This made a grave and persistent noise in the still air that seemed meditative, like the chirping of a solitary little bird.
She wore a dark striped dress reaching down to her shoe tops, and an equally long apron of bleached sugar sacks, with a full pocket: all neat and tidy, but every time she took a step she might have fallen over her shoelaces, which dragged from her unlaced shoes. She looked straight ahead. Her eyes were blue with age. Her skin had a pattern all its own of numberless branching wrinkles and as though a whole little tree stood in the middle of her forehead, but a golden color ran underneath, and the two knobs of her cheeks were illumined by a yellow burning under the dark. Under the red rag her hair came down on her neck in the frailest of ringlets, still black, and with an odor like copper.
    In the opening of her essay, �A Worn Path�, Eudora Welty�s detached tone is expressed through her vivid imagery and static syntax. Welty exploits her imagery in a series of brief descriptions of her main character, Phoenix Jackson. Welty describes Jackson as �walk[ing] slowly in the dark pine shadows�, �moving from side to side�, and walking with �the chirping of a solitary little bird�, promoting the overall frailty and ill-health of Jackson. Furthermore, Welty�s static syntax in her essay once again demonstrates Jackson�s weakness. Her sentences constantly remain moderately of length and very descriptive, promoting how calm and analytical Welty is in writing this essay.
Analysis
"A Worn Path"
Eudora Welty
Welty, Eudora. A Worn Path. 17 Nov 2003.  <http://womenshistory.about.com/
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