INT. CAR - DUSK 

          Close on RADIO.  Sound of static.  A heavily jeweled hand 
          reaches for the knob amidst giggles and laughter. 

                                          TINA (OS) 
                         Shut up! 

                                          GARET (OS) 
                         Come on.  You didn't like my singing?   
                              (sings) 
                         I was cryin when I met you, now I'm 
                         tryin to forget you... 

          Several male voices howl like dogs.   

                                          CATHY (OS) 
                         Garet, you can't sing. 

                                          GARET (OS) 
                         And you can't kiss.   
                              (sings falsetto) 
                         You don't have to be beautiful... to 
                         turn me on... 

          A punch. 

                                          GARET (OS) 
                         Ow! 

                                          J.T. (OS) 
                         Let's find some real music.   

                                          JARNELL (OS) 
                         Let's find some real food.  I'm 
                         starving. 


          EXT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          A clunker of a car pulls into the drive and sputters to a 
          stop.  Two long legs in high heeled sandals stretch out 
          of the car.  They lead up to a short skirt worn by a 
          barely legal TINA GRAVES. 

          She giggles as she steps away and pulls college boy J.T. 
          GORDON from the car.   

          On the other side of the car a prude college girl, CATHY 
          GORDON, emerges.  She glares at how Tina snuggles up to 
          J.T. and leads him into the restaurant. 

          GARET JOHANSSON, a typical frat boy, hops out in time to 
          catch Cathy's displeasure. 

                                          GARET 
                         Hey, don't sweat it.  She'll be old 
                         news by Flagstaff. 

          Finally, big, burly college linebacker JARNELL JOHNSON 
          squeezes through the small car.  His attempt is 
          unsuccessful. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         A little help here? 

          Garet laughs and then pulls the big man through the tiny 
          car door frame.   


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - CONTINUOUS 

          The kids find a corner booth under the reproachful gaze 
          of SHERYL FINN (50s).  Her scowl bears little tolerance 
          for shenanigans. 

          Tina snuggles up to J.T., and plants playful kisses on 
          his neck while her hand snakes under the table. 

                                          CATHY 
                         If you prefer a bed, they have a motel. 

                                          TINA
                         A bed?  How vanilla. 

          She glares right back at Cathy while her hand does nice 
          things to J.T. 

          Sheryl approaches with some menus.  Cathy hands hers back 
          right away. 

                                          CATHY 
                         No thanks.  I just lost my appetite. 

          Tina giggles, then crawls over J.T. 

                                          TINA
                         C'mon.  Let me out.  Gotta pee. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Again?  You must have the bladder of a 
                         mouse, girl. 

                                          CATHY 
                         More like a snake. 

          Tina sticks her tongue out before she struts off to the 
          ladies room. 

                                          J.T. 
                         You could try to be a little nicer, 
                         Cath. 

                                          CATHY 
                         When you finally get a girlfriend that 
                         isn't one evolutionary step above a bed 
                         bug, we'll talk. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Such aggression.  You need to get laid, 
                         sis. 

                                          GARET 
                         I tried that.  She's got a chastity 
                         belt made of titanium. 

          Sheryl pulls out her white pad. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Know what'cha want? 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I'll have the triple bacon 
                         cheeseburger, extra cheese.  A side of 
                         onion rings.  A side of fries.  A side 
                         of slaw.  You got biscuits? 


          LATER 

          Cigarettes overflow the ashtray and some half eaten 
          plates.  Jarnell dives into a piece of pie ala mode, 
          while Tina spoon feeds J.T. an ice cream sundae. 

          Garet sucks down a beer.   

                                          CATHY 
                         You sure you can drive?  Let's just get 
                         a room. 

                                          GARET 
                         Is that an offer? 

                                          J.T. 
                         A night here means one less night in 
                         L.A.  I say we push on.  Besides, 
                         there's nothing we can't do in the car, 
                         right babe? 

                                          CATHY 
                         Great.  I call shotgun. 


          OUTSIDE IN THE PARKING LOT 

          Garet and Cathy push Jarnell into the backseat of the 
          small car, while Tina cuddles up to J.T. on the other 
          side of the car. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Sure you don't have to go pee again? 

          She giggles and grinds against him, then grabs his hand 
          that sports a class ring.  She eases it off his finger 
          and puts it on her thumb.  She models it for him.   

                                          TINA
                         How does it look? 

                                          J.T. 
                         If it's the only thing you're 
                         wearing... spectacular. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Garet turns the key.  Nothing happens.   

                                          GARET 
                         Great.   

          Again.  Nothing. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I still can't believe you didn't get a 
                         new battery. 

                                          GARET 
                         Don't need one.  Just a loose cable. 


          OUT OF THE CAR 

          Garet pops the hood, jiggles the cable a bit and the 
          headlights come on.   


          IN THE CAR 

          Cathy reaches over and turns the key.  The car sputters 
          to life. 

          Garet gets in.   

                                          GARET 
                         See?  Runs like a dream. 

                                          CATHY 
                         And stalls like a nightmare. 


          INT. THE CAR - NIGHT 

          Miles stretch out endlessly, trees line the two lane 
          mountain highway.  The music on the radio starts to fade 
          out.  Smoke fills the car, along with drug induced 
          giggling. 

                                          J.T. (OS) 
                         I got one, I got one.  I spy with my 
                         little eye, something pink. 

          Out the window there is nothing pink.  The only thing 
          with any color at all is the sign that says NOW LEAVING 


          CHENOQUAH COUNTY. 

                                          CATHY (OS) 
                         I don't see anything pink. 

                                          TINA (OS) 
                              (giggles) 
                         J.T. does.  And Jarnell too! 

                                          JARNELL (OS) 
                         Hey, man, I ain't lookin.  I don't 
                         wanna see y'all gettin freaky.  The 
                         only thing I spy is somethin green. 

          In the front seat Garet half turns.   

                                          GARET 
                         Pass that up here, man. 

          A joint passes up to the front seat where Cathy and Garet 
          sit as far apart as the car will allow.  Cathy shakes her 
          head but Garet grabs it. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What are you doing? 

                                          GARET 
                         Why, I'm getting high. 

                                          CATHY 
                         You're driving. 

                                          GARET 
                         I guess I'm one of those talented 
                         people who can do two things at once.   

          He takes a hit.  Cathy just glares. 

                                          CATHY 
                         It's dangerous. 

                                          GARET 
                         Well if I start to go to sleep you can 
                         reach over and wake me up.   

          He grabs her hand and pulls it toward his lap.  She 
          struggles against his grip. 


          OUT ON THE ROAD 

          The car sways across two lanes.   


          BACK IN THE CAR 

          Cathy tugs free. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Will you get serious?  You're going to 
                         get pulled over. 

                                          GARET 
                         Aww, I didn't know you cared. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I don't.  I just want to get to Los 
                         Angeles. 

                                          GARET 
                         Ah, yes.  Lance, the Internet Romeo. 

                                          CATHY 
                         His name is Larry. 

                                          GARET 
                         I like Lance better.  I can see the 
                         cover of the romance novel now.  Long, 
                         flowing hair.  Dark, mysterious eyes.  
                         You bent over in a flowing dress, your 
                         breasts half exposed.  Sounds like a 
                         best seller to me. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Go ahead.  Joke.  But he got to know me 
                         better in two months than you have in 
                         years.   

                                          GARET 
                         What's there to know?  Remove the stick 
                         up your ass and you would fall down off 
                         your high horse, just like any 
                         scarecrow.   

                                          CATHY 
                         You're such an asshole. 

                                          GARET 
                         Pompous ass, thank you very much.  Come 
                         on.  Admit it, Cath.  You had fun with 
                         me. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Yes.  Dumping you was lots of fun.   

          Giggles come from the back, and knock against Cathy's 
          seat.  Cathy sighs and reaches over to flip the radio.  
          She flips across a scratchy hip-hop channel. 

                                          GARET 
                         Hey. I like that song. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Too bad.  You're driving.  I'm the DJ. 

          She lands on a slow ballad.  Garet makes a face.  He 
          reaches for the tuner but she swats his hand away.   

          A beat passes.  Garet dives in again but Cathy's too 
          quick.  Instead he uses his free hand to tickle her.   

          She laughs and jumps. 

          THROUGH THE WINDOW - a huge blurry figure dashes across 
          the road. 

                                          GARET 
                         Holy shit! 


          OUT ON THE HIGHWAY 

          The car swerves way off to the right and kicks up dust.  
          Tires lose their traction on the graveled shoulder of the 
          road, then skid off of the shoulder and down a dirt road. 

          They finally slide to a stop in the middle of a dense 
          forest. 


          IN THE CAR 

          Garet slams the car into park and glances around at 
          everyone. 

                                          GARET 
                         Everyone okay? 

          Heads nod.   

                                          CATHY 
                         I told you you shouldn't have gotten 
                         high. 

                                          GARET 
                         I wasn't high.  There was something in 
                         the road.  Didn't you see it? 

          She shakes her head and looks around.  It's dark - many 
          trees.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Whatever.  Let's just get back to the 
                         highway. 

                                          GARET 
                         Yes.  Lance is waiting. 

                                          CATHY 
                         His name is Larry. 


          OUT ON THE DIRT ROAD 

          The car eases around on the narrow dirt road to face the 
          other direction.  Only what they see is an unending 
          stretch of dirt road. 


          IN THE CAR 

                                          GARET 
                         Where's the highway? 

                                          CATHY 
                         That way.  It has to be that way.  
                         Right? 

                                          TINA
                         Can we just go?  I have to pee. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Yeah, man.  Just go back that way.  
                         You're bound to hit the highway. 

          Garet shrugs and starts off.  Nothing is on either side 
          of the car but a thicket of trees, and nothing ahead but 
          an endless dirt road that leads into blackness. 

                                          GARET 
                         This is weird.  We should have hit the 
                         highway by now.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Maybe it's back the other way.  We did 
                         spin around, right? 

          Garet nods, but is unconvinced.  Again he maneuvers the 
          car around on the dirt road to face the other way.  It 
          looks just the same.   

                                          GARET 
                         What the fuck? 

                                          CATHY 
                         Look.  Let's just be rational.  How far 
                         did we drive just now? 

                                          GARET 
                         Not even a mile. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Okay.  Then the turn off to the highway 
                         has to be that far back.  Check the 
                         odometer.  If you hit a mile, you've 
                         gone too far. 

          Garet sets the tripometer.  They set off again, slowly.  
          Clouds hang down over the tops of the trees.  The radio 
          has lost all reception and the static is the only sound 
          in the car. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Surely we've gone far enough. 

          Garet glances at the tripometer.  It's at 000.0.   

                                          GARET 
                         Fuck.  It's broken. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Like everything else in your car. 

          The car skids to a halt.  Everyone looks through the rear 
          view window the other direction.  Both forward and 
          backward look exactly the same. 

                                          TINA
                         Just keep going.  We have to hit a road 
                         eventually.  I really have to pee. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Come on, man.  She's sitting in my lap.  
                         Just drive. 

          The speedometer inches up, ten miles an hour, twenty, 
          thirt-five.   

          Everyone in the car looks out the side windows to catch a 
          glimpse of the highway, but it's nothing but darkness 
          surrounding the car.   


          SPEEDOMETER: 45.  50.  60. 

          Red dust kicks up behind the car.  Tina bounces in J.T.'s 
          lap.   

                                          J.T. 
                         Hang on, baby. 

                                          TINA
                         I really gotta go.  We have to pull 
                         over. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Fuck no.  Have you seen it out there?  
                         You get out here you're going to wind 
                         up supper for some hick with a chain 
                         saw. 

                                          J.T. 
                         You've taken too many hits to the head, 
                         Jarnell.  It's just a deserted, dirt 
                         road.  In the middle of nowhere.  With 
                         no visible means of escape.   

          J.T. gooses Tina, who screams. 

                                          TINA
                         You dick.  I told you I have to pee. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Garet, man.  Pull over.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         No way, man.  Keep going.  The highway 
                         has to be up here somewhere. 

                                          TINA
                         I have to pee! 

                                          CATHY 
                         Jesus, just pull over already.   

          The car slows down and eases over to the side.   


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Tina hops out.  It's strangely quiet, not even a rustle 
          in the trees.   

                                          TINA
                         J.T., come with me. 

                                          CATHY 
                         You can't even pee alone? 

                                          TINA
                         I don't see you going out into the 
                         woods by yourself. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I don't have to go. 

                                          J.T. 
                         I'll go.  I oughta make you go, 
                         Jarnell.  You freaked her out. 

                                          TINA
                              (snaps) 
                         I'm not freaked out.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Then why can't you go alone? 

                                          TINA
                         Maybe I want to give your brother a 
                         blowjob without you bitching about it. 

          J.T. climbs out of the car and follows Tina -  


          INTO THE WOODS 

          J.T. and Tina step over the dead branches and through the 
          trees.   

                                          TINA
                         You don't think they're snakes out here 
                         do you? 

                                          J.T. 
                         If there are I'll protect you.  Hey.  
                         Come here. 

          He pulls her to him for a kiss.   

                                          J.T. 
                         Hurry up and pee so we can get a 
                         quickie before we get back to the car. 

                                          TINA
                         You're such a bad boy.   

                                          J.T. 
                         Says the girl who has been fondling me 
                         all night.  Go on.   

          Tina heads off behind a tree, slips down her panties and 
          squats.   

                                          TINA
                         Your sister sure doesn't like me, does 
                         she? 

          Her question is met with silence.  Not even the wind 
          blows. 

                                          TINA
                         J.T.? 

          Something crunches through the brush.  Steady and drawing 
          closer.   

                                          TINA
                         J.T.?  Is that you? 

          More silence.   

                                          TINA
                         J.T.!  Stop being a jerk! 

          Two arms reach around the tree, one on either side of 
          where she squats.  Hands spread wide then reach in to 
          grab her.  She screams.   

          J.T. laughs as he jumps around the tree.  She slaps him 
          hard. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Scared the piss outta ya, huh? 

                                          TINA
                         You're such a dick head.   

          She pulls up her panties. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Hey now.  Wrong direction. 

          He slips a hand under her skirt but she slaps him away.   

                                          TINA
                         Forget it.   

                                          J.T. 
                         What?  You're really mad? 

          She says nothing but stalks off toward the car.   

                                          J.T. 
                         Look, I didn't mean to scare ya, babe. 

                                          TINA
                         Yes, you did. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Okay, I did.  But I'm sorry.  Come, on.  
                         You know that's just how I play.  Now 
                         where's that blowjob you were talking 
                         about? 

          He swings her up into his arms and tries to kiss her but 
          she knees him in the groin.  He doubles over.  She throws 
          his class ring at him. 

                                          TINA
                         Go fondle yourself, J.T. 


          BACK AT THE CAR 

          Cathy sits in the car and reads a map, but Jarnell and 
          Garet stand just outside.  They consider both directions. 

                                          GARET 
                         Where the fuck is the highway?  I just 
                         don't get it. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Well it's either that way... or that 
                         way. 

                                          GARET 
                         Thank you, Rand McNally.  

          He bends down to the car window. 

                                          GARET 
                         Any luck? 

                                          CATHY 
                         No, I doubt this map won't show a dirt 
                         road like this one.   

                                          GARET 
                         And the highway? 

                                          CATHY 
                         Your guess is as good as mine. 


          IN THE FOREST 

          Tina hugs herself as she plods through the broken limbs.  
          A wind follows her.   

          She whirls around with an angry snarl. 

                                          TINA
                         J.T. you're going to end up walking to 
                         L.A. if you don't stop it!  I mean it! 

          She surveys the scene.  Wind rattles the leaves on the 
          trees as the clouds roll over them.   

                                          TINA
                         Stop it, you ass!  I don't like being 
                         afraid! 
                              (beat) 
                         J.T.? 


          BACK AT THE CAR 

          Tina stalks from the wooded area to the car. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Where's J.T.? 

                                          TINA
                         Ask someone who gives a shit. 

                                          GARET 
                         Lovers tiff? 

                                          TINA
                         Not anymore.  I don't like people who 
                         play practical jokes. 

          Cathy smiles. 

                                          CATHY 
                         You picked the wrong guy to go to 
                         California with.  That's all J.T. has 
                         ever been able to do. 

                                          TINA
                         Fine.  Let's leave and see how he likes 
                         it.   

                                          CATHY 
                         We're not leaving J.T. 

          Cathy pulls her cell phone from her purse. 

                                          TINA
                         I don't mean forever.  Let's just scare 
                         him a little.  Would serve him right. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Damn.  No reception. 

                                          GARET 
                         Big fucking surprise.  Listen, we're 
                         not leaving without J.T.  The way our 
                         luck is running, we won't be able to 
                         find our way back. 


          BACK IN THE FOREST 

          J.T. wanders through the brush.  He's obviously lost. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Tina!  Baby, I'm sorry!  Where are you? 
                              (under breath) 
                         Fuckin' humorless bitch. 

          He handles his injured area.   

                                          J.T. 
                         Tina! 

          He stops, looks around.  A wind now begins to rattle the 
          tops of the trees as the low lying clouds drift by.  J.T. 
          looks behind him into the shadows. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Trish? 

          The brush moves, but nothing emerges.  J.T. squints in 
          that direction.   

                                          J.T. 
                         Hello? 

          Behind him twigs break under footsteps.  He spins around.  
          His fear gives way to a nervous smile. 

                                          J.T. 
                         Okay, I get it.  You can't kid a 
                         kidder, babe.  Just scare me already. 

          A crazy loon call pierces the darkness.  J.T. jumps. 

                                          J.T. 
                              (startled) 
                         Shit.  Payback's a bitch. 

          More footsteps.  Another loon call.   

                                          J.T. 
                              (under breath) 
                         Holy fuck. 


          BACK AT THE CAR 

          The loon screams again.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         D'you hear that?  What is that? 

                                          GARET 
                         Sounds like a loon.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Sounds like a fuckin' banshee. 

          Garet sends him a look. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What?  My Aunt is Irish. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Where is J.T.? 

                                          TINA
                         Playing another joke.  He's probably 
                         the one making all that racket. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Maybe we should go get him. 

                                          TINA
                         Feel free.  I ain't goin' back out 
                         there. 

          Cathy's face sets in a line before she opens her car 
          door. 


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Cathy wrenches Tina's door open. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Too bad.  You're the only one who can 
                         lead me to where you went.  You have to 
                         the count of three or Jarnell's going 
                         to shove you out himself. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Wait, I ain't gettin' in the middle - 

                                          CATHY 
                         One... 

                                          TINA
                         I'm not going. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Two... 

          A loon cries out in the darkness.  Tina jumps, then hops 
          out of the car. 

                                          TINA
                         Fine!  The sooner we bring him back the 
                         sooner we can get the hell outta here. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Both Garet and Jarnell stare after the girls. 

                                          GARET 
                         Maybe one of us should go with them.  
                         You wanna volunteer? 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Hell no.  Do you? 

                                          GARET 
                         Not really. 


          IN THE WOODS 

          Tina stomps ahead of Cathy over the dried leaves and 
          broken twigs.   

                                          CATHY 
                         You sure you know where you're going? 

                                          TINA
                         Why wouldn't I know?  I'm not stupid 
                         you know. 

          Cathy shrugs and follows on.  Tina stops and spins around 
          to Cathy. 

                                          TINA
                         I said I'm not stupid.  I know what you 
                         think of me.  

                                          CATHY 
                         And what do I think about you, Tina?  
                         That you're easy for feeling up my 
                         brother in a car full of people?  That 
                         you're foolish for taking a cross 
                         country trip with someone you just met 
                         a few weeks ago?  Is that what I think?  
                         Is that what's wrong? 

                                          TINA
                         Well at least I'm not desperate enough 
                         to travel across three states to fuck 
                         someone I've never even met. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Give you time. 

          Tina slaps Cathy.  Cathy just smiles and wipes blood from 
          the corner of her mouth. 

                                          TINA
                         You know, I don't even know why I'm out 
                         here trying to find J.T.  He's probably 
                         hiding off behind one of the trees 
                         waiting to grab me.  Both of you are 
                         warped. 

          Tina turns back to the car. 

                                          CATHY 
                         It'd work out for you just fine if we 
                         didn't find J.T. wouldn't it?  You 
                         could just move on to Garet. 

          Tina stops and sneers Cathy's direction. 

                                          TINA
                         Not hardly.  He's got horrible taste in 
                         women.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Fine.  Go.  I wasn't expecting any less 
                         from trailer trash like you. 

          Tina stops.  She turns back and gives Cathy a steely 
          look.  She lifts her chin and stalks back, and passes 
          her, disappearing further into the woods.   


          FURTHER INTO THE WOODS 

          Cathy and Tina plod on. 

                                          TINA
                         J.T.! 

                                          CATHY 
                         You sure this is where you left him? 

                                          TINA
                         You want to see the pee stain? 

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T.! 

          The woods are silent, not even animals make a sound. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Maybe he's back at the car already.   

          Both girls look around the strange little cocoon of 
          silence.  A loon screams loudly and nearby. 

          A huge gust of wind whips through the trees like a 
          physical force flying above.  Leaves kick up and dust 
          swirls. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What the hell? 

                                          TINA
                         Fuck this! 

          Tina bolts back into the direction they'd come from. 

                                          CATHY
                         Come back here!
                              (beat)
                         Stupid slut.

          Cathy turns into the wind and presses on.  

                                          CATHY
                         J.T.!

          The wind literally backs her up and the sound of an 
          animal cry spirals around her.  

          Cathy loses her footing and falls to the ground.  Tina, 
          who has come back, runs to Cathy and grabs her hand, 
          pulling her to her feet despite the howling wind.   

          Cathy leans on Tina and they hurry away from the woods 
          that breathe behind them. 


          BACK AT THE CAR 

          Garet dozes on the driver's side, while Jarnell snores 
          heavily in the backseat. 

          Both jump with a start as Cathy and Tina explode from the 
          trees. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Start the car! 

                                          TINA
                         Start the car! 

          Both girls dive into the car as Garet throws it into 
          drive, guns it and spins out onto the road. 


          IN THE CAR 

          Jarnell, Trish and Cathy stare out the back windshield 
          while Garet drives. 

                                          GARET 
                         What the hell did you see? 

                                          TINA
                         Nothing. 

                                          CATHY 
                         That's the problem. 

                                          GARET 
                         What do you mean? 

                                          CATHY 
                         There was something back there, Garet.  
                         But we couldn't see it.   

                                          TINA
                         It could breathe.  It could scream. 

                                          CATHY 
                         It could chase us. 

                                          TINA
                         It's got J.T. 

          Everyone processes the information as the car speeds 
          along the dirt road. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - DAYBREAK 

          Ahead of the car the inky black sky gives way to the pink 
          of a new day - and the end of the woods. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Everyone else fights to stay awake, with less success 
          than Garet.  Garet blinks as he stares out the 
          windshield.  Finally he sees traffic crossing the road a 
          few miles ahead. 

                                          GARET 
                         Thank God. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What is it? 

                                          GARET 
                         The way out. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - DAY 

          Cathy, Garet, Jarnell and Tina stumble through the door, 
          all wear the effects of their night. 

          VINCE FINN (50s) sets coffee in front of SHERIFF IAN 
          MCFARLANE (40s) and DEPUTY MARTY RICKS (30s).   

                                          CATHY 
                         We gotta tell them about J.T. 

                                          TINA
                         No one is going to believe you. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I've got to try.  

          She heads toward the counter where the lawmen sit. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Excuse me. 

          Sheriff McFarlane turns to her and gives her the once 
          over, taking in her haggard appearance. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Can I help you, Miss? 

                                          CATHY 
                         We were lost out in the country all 
                         night, not too far from here.  There's 
                         a road - just off the highway.  Anyway 
                         my brother is out there still.  We 
                         think... we think there might be 
                         something out there that could hurt 
                         him. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Like an animal? 

                                          CATHY 
                         We don't know.  We didn't see anything. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I see.   

          Tina comes up to them, and draws the interest of both 
          lawmen who assess her mini and halter.   

                                          TINA
                         Maybe you can take us out there and 
                         check it out? 

          She sends a winning smile to Deputy Ricks.  Both men 
          share a look.   

                                          RICKS 
                         I think we can find time for that, 
                         don't you, Sheriff? 


          INT. SHERIFF'S CAR - DAY 

          Sheriff McFarlane and Cathy sit up front.  

          Out the window they pass the 'NOW LEAVING CHENOQUAH 
          COUNTY' sign. 

          Tina and Deputy Ricks sit in back.  She gives him a coy 
          smile. 

                                          RICKS 
                         So who'd you lose out there? 

                                          TINA
                         Her brother.  Used to be my boyfriend.   

                                          RICKS 
                         Used to be?  What'd you do?  Kill him 
                         and dump the body? 

          Tina giggles and snuggles closer.  Deputy Ricks eats up 
          her attention.  She traces the metal on his gun with a 
          finger. 

                                          TINA
                         Ooh, such a big gun. 

          In the front seat Cathy rolls her eyes and sighs.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         So where's the road? 

                                          CATHY 
                         I'm not sure.  We kinda found it by 
                         accident. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Were you drinking?  Doing drugs? 

          Cathy doesn't say anything, she just scours the scenery 
          for the road, and holds her cell phone to her ear. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Something's wrong.  We've gone too far. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         There are no roads in those woods.  Are 
                         you sure that's where you were? 

                                          CATHY 
                         We spun off to the right.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Are you positive?  It was dark.  Maybe 
                         you were drinking? 

          She shakes her head. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Look, there are no roads out this way.  
                         There's nothing out here by Bloody 
                         Creek.  Even the animals aren't fit to 
                         hunt.  Most of it's dead and dried up, 
                         including the creek itself.    

                                          CATHY 
                         I didn't see a creek.  But I did see a 
                         road.  It was in the middle of the 
                         woods.  And we've passed it.  I know 
                         it. 

          McFarlane sends her a skeptical glance. 

                                          CATHY 
                         It was here.  I swear.   

          In the backseat, Ricks slides a hand along the silken 
          skin of Tina's thigh. 

                                          RICKS 
                         We can keep looking, Sheriff.  Just for 
                         a little bit. 

                                          TINA
                         Yeah, keep looking.  You never know 
                         what you may find. 

          She giggles again.  The Sheriff sends a look over his 
          shoulder, then appraises Cathy again.  He eases the car 
          over to the shoulder.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Well, I don't see a road.  But we can 
                         get out here and look around for your 
                         brother if you want. 

          Cathy snaps her phone together. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Sure. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - DAY 

          Jarnell and Garet linger over what's left of their food.   

          SAM WHITE (60s), a weathered Native American with a shock 
          of white hair and a leather face, enters the diner.  He 
          takes a seat at the counter directly behind them, where 
          Vince greets him warmly. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Look what the cat drug in.  Howya doin, 
                         Sheriff? 

                                          SAM 
                         Now, Vince.  You know I haven't been 
                         Sheriff for a good six months now.   

          He slams his hand into Sam's.   

                                          VINCE 
                         So how's retirement treating ya? 

                                          SAM 
                         Same ol, same ol.  Garden won't grow 
                         nothin but weeds and the ol lady has a 
                         list as long as her arm of odd jobs to 
                         do around the house. 

                                          VINCE 
                         See, that's why I don't retire.  Sheryl 
                         will nag me into an early grave. 

          They both laugh.  Vince pours Sam a cup of coffee.  He 
          watches Vince tend to other tasks as he takes a sip. 

                                          GARET (OS) 
                         Maybe we should try him again. 

                                          JARNELL (OS) 
                         If he was where he could use a phone, 
                         he'd have called us.  He's gonna kick 
                         both of our asses for leaving him out 
                         in those woods all night, I tell ya 
                         that. 

                                          GARET (OS) 
                         It's his own damn fault.  Stupid ass 
                         never knows when to play it straight.   

          Sam looks over his shoulder at the two guys sitting in 
          the booth, both sullen and worried and quite frankly, 
          annoyed. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         We're missing a good day from our trip 
                         because of him.  

          Sam slips off the stool and heads over to the guys. 

                                          SAM 
                         Sorry, I couldn't help but overhear.  
                         You folks lost someone? 

          Garet and Jarnell share a nervous glance, before Garet 
          nods. 

                                          GARET 
                         Yeah, like - I dunno - a half an hour 
                         from here.  Out in the woods. 

                                          SAM 
                         What were you doing in the woods? 

                                          GARET 
                         We skid out onto a dirt road that kept 
                         us lost in them all night long. 

                                          SAM 
                         You're pulling my leg, right? 

                                          GARET 
                         No.  Why? 

                                          SAM 
                         There ain't no road out there in those 
                         woods.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Tell that to J.T. That's where we left 
                         him. 

          Sam nods, but he remains skeptical. 

                                          SAM 
                         Well.  I hope you find your friend. 

          He ducks back to the counter.  Garet turns to Jarnell. 

                                          GARET 
                         Weird fucking town. 


          EXT. WOODS - DAY 

          McFarlane walks behind Cathy in between the trees on the 
          median.  Both ways they look, there are no woods.  

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         You sure you weren't over there?  Or is 
                         this some fancy college prank? 

                                          CATHY 
                         We were here.  And something was out 
                         here.  And now my brother is missing.  
                         Besides.  I don't have a sense of 
                         humor.  Ask anyone. 


          BACK IN THE CAR 

          The Deputy's hands slide up Tina's bare legs as she 
          straddles him and kisses him passionately.   

                                          RICKS 
                         Man, you're a feisty one.  You'd do it 
                         right here in a cop car wouldn't you? 

                                          TINA
                         What do you think I am?  A hooker? 

          She nibbles his lip.   

                                          TINA
                         If you want me you gotta work for it. 

                                          DEPUTY 
                         Oh yeah?  And how do I work for it? 

                                          TINA
                         Meet me.  Out here.  Tonight.   

                                          DEPUTY 
                         What are you talking about? 

                                          TINA
                         The deadbeats I'm riding with will come 
                         back out here to try and find J.T.  
                         They're noble and wouldn't dream of 
                         continuing the trip until they find 
                         him.  So you come out here and keep me 
                         company while they look for their 
                         needle in a haystack. 

          She holds up his left hand and slips off his wedding 
          ring.  With a smile she puts it on her thumb. 

                                          TINA
                         I bet I'm a lot more fun than how you 
                         usually spend your evening.   

          She gives him one last scorching kiss before she slides 
          off of his lap, just in time to spot McFarlane and Cathy 
          emerge from the forest. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - DAY 

          The girls have rejoined the guys and they sit around a 
          booth full of food.  Mostly Jarnell's. 

                                          GARET 
                         Look.  Last night we were all a 
                         little... compromised.  Maybe we did 
                         spin out to the right and it was on the 
                         other side of the road. 

                                          CATHY 
                         You forget.  I didn't get high or 
                         drink. 

                                          GARET 
                         No, but you were tired.  We're all 
                         tired.  I think the best thing to do is 
                         just get some sleep, get our bearings 
                         and try again when we're all a little 
                         clearer headed. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I don't know how you can think about 
                         sleep. 

          Jarnell yawns. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I don't see how you can't. 

                                          GARET 
                         Look.  We're all fried.  Let's just get 
                         a room, get some sleep and go back 
                         later.  You can't help J.T. if you're 
                         not firing on all cylinders, right?  
                         Besides.  It's daylight.  If I know 
                         J.T. he'll find his way back here all 
                         on his own.  I think it'll serve him 
                         right to have to hike out of the woods 
                         since it was his dumb idea to fuck 
                         around out there.

                                          CATHY 
                         Unless he can't hike out of there.  
                         What if he's hurt?  I need to do 
                         something.  Maybe if I go back to the 
                         cops -  

                                          GARET 
                         The cops weren't any help. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What else is new? 

                                          TINA
                         We'll go back out there tonight. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Tonight?  Why? 

                                          TINA
                         Because that Deputy Ricks will join us. 

          She smiles and waves at Ricks who eats nearby. 

                                          CATHY 
                         How do you know that? 

                                          TINA
                         I made him an offer he couldn't refuse. 

                                          CATHY 
                         If you didn't have sex, where would you 
                         be? 

                                          TINA
                         I'd be you. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - DUSK

          HAGGERED HUSBAND (40s) sits at a table with his WEATHERED 
          WIFE (40s) and their two BRATTY KIDS who play with Native 
          American souveniers.  The parents eat in relative 
          silence, the family trip not going so well.

          Tina struts past from the ladies room on the way back to 
          table where Garet, Jarnell and Cathy sit.  

          Haggered Husband watches her wiggle, then turns back to 
          catch his wife's glare.

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND
                         What?

                                          WEATHERED WIFE
                         Just pay the bill and get a room.  I 
                         suddenly have a raging headache.

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND
                         What a coincidence.  I've been riding 
                         with one since Tampa.

          Tricia slides into the booth with her group.

                                          GARET 
                         You gotta admit.  Going back out there 
                         is going to be like some B horror 
                         movie.  Even if the cop comes out 
                         there. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What choices do we have, Garet?   

                                          GARET 
                         Easy for you to say.  You're the 
                         uptight virgin.  You're going to 
                         survive just by default.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         If it's all the same to you, I think 
                         I'll just stay here.  I've seen a few 
                         horror movies.  It never works out for 
                         the brothers. 

                                          GARET 
                         If we go, we all go.  There's no point 
                         backtracking once we find J.T. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         If we find him. 

          Cathy sends him a look. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Sorry. 

          He dives into a chicken leg. 

                                          TINA
                         Look.  The sooner we find J.T. the 
                         sooner we can all get to California.  
                         What other plans do you guys have for 
                         the night? 

                                          GARET 
                         Surviving would be tops on my list. 

                                          TINA
                         Then don't die.   

                                          GARET 
                         Well when you put it like that... 

          He holds up his glass to everyone, and one by one they 
          all toast in, even Jarnell with his chicken wing.

                                          ALL 
                         To not dying. 


          EXT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - DUSK 

          Jarnell, Tina, Garet and Cathy head to the car. 

                                          GARET 
                         I hope you all brought your compasses.  
                         We found that detour by accident.  It's 
                         not on a map.  How the hell are we 
                         supposed to find it again? 

          He climbs in the driver's seat. 


          IN THE CAR 

          Everyone else climbs in. 

                                          GARET 
                         Fuck me. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What? 

          She follows his line of vision to the tripometer that 
          reads 028.2.   

          Jarnell and Tina catch it from the back seat, where 
          Jarnell opens the door to scramble out.  Only he doesn't 
          quite make it. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Aw, hell.  I knew I shouldn't have had 
                         that second piece of pie. 

          Cathy glances over to Tina. 

                                          CATHY 
                         You sure that this cop guy is going to 
                         show? 

          Tina gives her a confident grin and flashes the wedding 
          band still on her thumb.  

                                          TINA
                         Never lost one yet. 

          Tina opens up her cell phone. 


          EXT. HIGHWAY MEDIAN - DUSK 

          Two cop cars sit next to each other, facing opposite 
          directions.

          Ricks sits in one, where he smooths his hair and preens 
          for the rearview mirror. 

          McFarlane studies him from the other. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Hot date? 

                                          RICKS 
                         Maybe. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         That girl's a little younger than you 
                         like em, ain't she? 

                                          RICKS 
                         She's old enough.  'Sides.  She's gonna 
                         show me their secret road. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I bet she's got a secret road all 
                         right.  More like a well known express 
                         way. 

                                          RICKS 
                         You should come with me, Ian.  That 
                         other girl seemed kinda sweet on you. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         No, thanks.  I actually go home to my 
                         wife. 

          Ricks laughs.   

                                          RICKS 
                         Your loss. 

          He sets his car into gear. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Hey.  How you gonna find them if we 
                         couldn't find no road? 

          Ricks holds up his cell phone.   

                                          RICKS 
                         The miracle of modern technology.  She 
                         just sent me a text message.  Twenty-
                         eight point two miles from the Rusty 
                         Spoon.  If I don't come back by 
                         midnight, you'll know where to look. 

          Both men laugh before Ricks pulls out onto the now now 
          dark highway. 


          EXT. HIGHWAY - NIGHT 

          High beams glare ahead as Garet's car moves along the 
          road. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          No one says anything as the tripometer flips to 28.1.  
          Cathy and Garet share a look.   


          ON THE ROAD - CONTINUOUS 

          The car eases over to the side of the road.  There, 
          barely visible, a turnoff into the woods.   


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          The tripometer rests at 000.0. 

          Tina leans in between Garet and Cathy.  The girls look at 
          each other. 

                                          GARET 
                         What's wrong? 

                                          CATHY 
                         This wasn't here before.  When we came 
                         with the cops.   

                                          GARET 
                         Maybe you missed it.  It is kind of 
                         obscure.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Maybe. 


          ON THE ROAD  

          The car eases onto the turnoff and disappears behind the 
          trees. 


          INT. DEPUTY CAR - NIGHT 

          Ricks taps his hands on the steering wheel to the blaring 
          music coming from his radio.   

                                          RICKS 
                              (singing) 
                         Honky tonk woman!  Gimme, gimme, gimme 
                         those honky tonk blues.   

          The radio crackles and fades. 

                                          RICKS 
                         Aw, damn.  Come on! 

          More crackling.  Then static.  His tripometer flips over 
          to 27.8.   


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          The clunker slows to a stop in the middle of the inky 
          forest. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Garet throws the car into park. 

                                          GARET 
                         You sure this is the right spot?  
                         Everything looks the same. 

                                          CATHY 
                         It's as good a place as any.   

          She opens her door. 


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Garet also emerges from the vehicle. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What are you doing? 

                                          GARET 
                         Haven't you seen any horror movies?  
                         People who go out alone never come 
                         back.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Tina can go. 

          Tina hangs out the open window. 

                                          TINA
                         Can't.  I gotta be here when the cop 
                         shows up. 

          She glances at Jarnell. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Don't look at me. 

          Cathy sighs as Garet rounds the car to stand by her side.  
          He holds out an arm. 

                                          GARET 
                         After you. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Karma bites.


          EXT. HIGHWAY, NIGHT

          The deputy car eases over to the side. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Ricks stares at the obscure opening to the wooded road.  
          His brow furrows, and he reaches for his CB radio. 

                                          RICKS 
                         Sheriff McFarlane? 

                                          MCFARLANE (FROM CB) 
                         Yeah.   

                                          RICKS 
                         I found the road. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          McFarlane sits in front of his dinner.  He holds his 
          radio receiver to his mouth. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         What?  Where? 

                                          RICKS (FROM CB) 
                         28.2 miles exactly.  Just like they 
                         said.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Go ahead and find them kids, then bring 
                         em back to the diner.  Then you and I 
                         can go back and do a proper search.   

                                          RICKS (FROM CB) 
                         Yessir. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Radio if you have any problems. 


          INT. DEPUTY CAR - NIGHT 

          Ricks nods. 

                                          RICKS 
                         I will, sir.   

          He slips his mouthpiece back into place and then turns 
          the car toward -  


          EXT. HIGHWAY - CONTINUOUS 

          The deputy car slips into the entrance to the road. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          McFarlane wears a worried expression as he puts his mouth 
          piece back on his hip.  Sheryl wipes some tables behind 
          him and Vince comes to take his plate away. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Somethin wrong, Sheriff? 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         What do you know about a road out by 
                         Bloody Creek? 

                                          VINCE 
                         Don't know nuthin.  It's as dead out 
                         there as Sheryl's grits this mornin. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         I heard that. 

                                          VINCE 
                         I meant for you to hear, woman. 
                              (back to McFarlane) 
                         Why do ya ask? 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Those kids that were here earlier today 
                         said they lost a friend out there on 
                         some road.  I told them there wasn't a 
                         road.   

                                          VINCE 
                         Damn right.  You and I hunted out there 
                         when we was kids.  If there was a road, 
                         we'd have known about it. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         That's what I thought too.  I could 
                         smell the pot on em.  Figured they were 
                         just pulling our leg and that they 
                         never really had another friend at all. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         No, they had one.  He was here last 
                         night.  Good lookin rascal, full of the 
                         dickens.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Ricks confirmed that there's a road out 
                         there.  I told him to bring those kids 
                         back here and we can go look. 

                                          VINCENT 
                         I'll go out with ya, if you want. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I appreciate ya.  Now how bout some 
                         more of that pie? 


          INT. DEPUTY CAR - NIGHT 

          Ricks stares down the long stretch of road, no sign of 
          life anywhere to be found. 

          He reaches for his CB but gets nothing but static. 

                                          RICKS (INTO CB) 
                         Hello?  Sheriff?   

          No answer.  He slows to a stop on the side of the road, 
          then looks in his rear view mirror.   

          It's exactly the same as what stretches out in front of 
          him. 

                                          RICKS 
                         What the fuck? 

          He wrenches behind him and stares out the back window.  
          He glances down at the tripometer.  It reads 000.0. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Cathy pushes through the brush, Garet casually follows 
          her lead.   

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T.! 

                                          GARET 
                         I just have to wonder.  If it had been 
                         me that got lost, would you be out here 
                         looking? 

                                          CATHY 
                         What do you think? 

                                          GARET 
                         I think you would.  I think you like me 
                         more than you like to let on.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Oh, please. 

                                          GARET 
                         Come on.  I was nearly The One.  You 
                         can't forget that. 

                                          CATHY 
                         No, but I'd like to.  In case you've 
                         forgotten, we're out here to look for 
                         J.T., not play twenty questions. 

                                          GARET 
                         I'm out here to protect you. 

          She stops and twirls around. 

                                          CATHY 
                         The only protection I need is from your 
                         gigantic ego.  It's passed the breaking 
                         point.   

          Garet approaches where she stands, arms crossed. 

                                          GARET 
                         That's not the only thing. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Gimme a break. 

          She turns but he holds her by one arm.   

                                          GARET 
                         Gimme a chance. 

          He leans in for a kiss.  She doesn't fight him at first, 
          until he tries to deepen it. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Stop being a pig!  Can't you ever be 
                         serious? 

                                          GARET 
                         I was once.  About you.  

                                          CATHY 
                         Yeah right.  That's why you had that 
                         cute little redhead on the side, right?  
                         Or was it a blonde?  Oh I remember now.  
                         It was both. 

                                          GARET 
                         You told me to get lost, Cath.  What 
                         was I supposed to do?  Die lonely, 
                         mourning our lost love? 

                                          CATHY 
                         You could have felt something, dammit. 

                                          GARET 
                         I did. 

          He takes her hand. 

                                          GARET 
                         Still do. 

          She turns her head away and blinks away a tear. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Come on.  Let's just find J.T. 

          She pulls her hand from his and turns back into the 
          forest. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD, CLUNKER CAR - NIGHT 

          Jarnell digs a candy bar out of his jacket pocket.  Tina 
          stares out the back window.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Wonder where your cop is at? 

                                          TINA
                         I dunno.  He should be here by now.   

          She fidgets in her seat. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What's wrong with you, girl? 

                                          TINA
                         I gotta go.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         J.T. was right.  You got the bladder of 
                         a mouse.  Just don't think of anything 
                         wet.  Like an ocean or a lake, or a 
                         waterfall... 

                                          TINA
                         You're not helping. 

          She booty dances in the seat.   

                                          TINA
                         Ugh, I gotta go.  Come with me? 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Someone should stay with the car.  Just 
                         in case your cop shows up. 

          She glances over to the inky forest.   

                                          TINA
                         Fine.  Just wait until it's your turn. 

          She opens up the door, gets  


          OUT OF THE CAR 

          And walks around to the forest.  Jarnell leans out the 
          window. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I can just hang out the window.  You 
                         won't catch me in them woods. 

          Tina flips him off and then disappears behind the trees. 


          INT. DEPUTY CAR - NIGHT 

          Ricks navigates the narrow road at a steady 20 miles per 
          hour.  He glances back down at the tripometer, it still 
          reads 000.0.   

          He grabs the radio and tries it again.  It's useless. 

          Something big and blurry darts out across the road, Ricks 
          slams over to the side of the road.   

                                          RICKS 
                         What the...? 

          He stares off into the woods.  The trees sway and rustle.   


          EXT. DIRT ROAD, DEPUTY CAR - CONTINUOUS 

          Ricks emerges from his car, gun drawn. 

                                          RICKS 
                         Hello? 

          His greeting is met with the rustling of leaves in the 
          wind.  Clouds roll overhead. 

                                          RICKS 
                         This is Chenoquah County Deputy Marty 
                         Ricks.  My weapon is drawn.  If you do 
                         not come forward, hands raised, I will 
                         have to respond with force. 


          INT. DEPUTY CAR, THROUGH THE DASH CAMERA - SAME 

          A grainy screen shows Ricks pass in front of the car, his 
          pistol raised.  He walks out of our view. 

                                          RICKS (OS) 
                         Fuckin' hell! 

          Sounds of gunfire blast through the country silence.   

          We pull out to view through the windshield.  Everything 
          is still. 

          With a loud SLAM, Ricks hits the windshield face first, 
          cracking the glass.  His eyes are open wide, his hair is 
          stark white, and he is clearly dead. 

          Blood smears down the windshield as he slides down onto 
          the hood and is ripped away out of sight. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Cathy and Garet disappear further into the tangled dead 
          trees. 

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T.! 

          She grows more desperate. 

                                          CATHY 
                         It's no use.   
                              (breaks down) 
                         He's gone. 

          Garet takes her arm and gives her a sympathetic look. 

          She glances up at him through her tears and he smiles. 

                                          GARET 
                         We'll find him. 
                              (calls out) 
                         J.T.! 

          Garet takes the lead. 


          SOMEWHERE ELSE IN THE WOODS 

          Tina stands from her squatting position and adjusts her 
          underwear.  A hand with a class ring falls on her 
          shoulder.  She grabs it. 

                                          TINA
                         Oh thank God.  J.T.... 

          She pulls the arm and it tugs loose from the tree trunk, 
          a bloody stump, torn right at the shoulder.  Tina screams 
          and throws it down, then takes off in the other 
          direction. 

          Wind kicks up and stirs all the dust under her feet.   

          Beside her leaves on the trees rattle and flutter as if 
          something very big runs just parallel out of sight. 

                                          TINA
                         Jarnell! 


          BACK AT THE CAR 

          Jarnell sits in the backseat.  He sings to himself as he 
          rolls a joint. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I was gonna go to L.A., but then I got 
                         high.  Didn't wanna be in the boonies 
                         all day, but then I got high.  Now 
                         we're all jacked up, and I know why... 
                         cuz we got high, cuz we got high, cuz 
                         we got high. 


          BACK IN THE WOODS 

          Tina sails along the forest floor, her smeared eyeliner 
          streaks her face with her tears. 

          The inky blackness of night follows behind, and the 
          clouds roll along overhead.   

          Her high heel snaps and sends her tumbling to the ground. 

          Everything grows still, the clouds even slow to a stop.  
          Tina gulps in shaky, tearful gasps of air. 

                                          TINA
                         Who are you?  What do you want? 

          A crazy loon screams nearby. 

          She brushes her bloody knee, rips off her shoe and 
          scrambles to her feet, running lopsided. 


          IN ANOTHER PART OF THE WOODS 

          Garet steps cautiously over a big branch, then offers his 
          hand to Cathy to follow suit.  They hear the loon's 
          distant cry. 

                                          GARET 
                         You know, in Indian folklore loons used 
                         to represent spirits from the other 
                         side. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Is that so? 

                                          GARET 
                         I dunno.  But it sounds true, doesn't 
                         it?   

          She smiles at him, then glances down, where she notices 
          something on the ground.  

                                          CATHY 
                         Garet.  Look. 

          He does.  It's a red footprint. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Is that blood? 

                                          GARET 
                         I think it's mud.   

                                          CATHY 
                         It's going that way. 

          She points to the next footprint, a trail that would lead 
          them through the trees.   

          They follow. 


          BACK AT THE CAR 

          Tina stumbles from the brush and heads straight for the 
          car.   


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          She dives into the driver's seat and revs the car into 
          gear. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What are you doing? 

                                          TINA
                         We gotta get outta here.  I found J.T.  
                         Part of him at least. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         But what about Cathy and Garet? 

          She turns around and points out the blood stain on her 
          shirt. 

                                          TINA
                         Maybe I wasn't clear.  This is blood 
                         from J.T.'s torn off arm.  

                                          JARNELL 
                              (beat) 
                         I wasn't really close to them anyway. 


          OUT ON THE ROAD 

          The car kicks up dust as it flies into gear and onto the 
          road. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          McFarlane stares out of the window.  Sheryl brings the 
          pot of coffee around. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Refill, Sheriff? 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Yes, Sheryl.  Thank you. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Your Deputy should have been back by 
                         now, shouldn't he? 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         At least. 

          Sheryl nods, fills Vince's cup and goes back to the 
          counter.   

                                          VINCE 
                         Unless he busted a nut with that pretty 
                         young thing who was here earlier. 

          McFarlane sends him an amused glance. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Still.  After that five minutes, then 
                         what? 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Cathy follows Garet on the red footprint path.  They end 
          up beside a dry creek bed full of red mud.   

                                          GARET 
                         Bloody Creek I take it. 

          Cathy kneels down and picks up a handful of mud.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Aptly named.   

          They walk down the edge. 


          INT. GARET'S CAR - NIGHT 

          Jarnell leans forward between the driver and passenger 
          seat.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         What do you think tore off J.T.'s arm? 

                                          TINA
                         I don't know and I don't wanna know. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         This is some crazy Wes Craven shit, 
                         that's what this is.  I guess this 
                         isn't the time to bring up that I'm the 
                         black guy and you're the slut? 

          Tina sends him a glance through the rear view mirror. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON - NIGHT 

          McFarlane gets up and grabs his jacket.  Vince emerges 
          with a shotgun.  Sheryl stands by and wrings her hands. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Vince Finn, you crazy ol coot.  You 
                         don't need to go traipsing through 
                         those old woods.  You'll break your 
                         other hip. 

                                          VINCE 
                         You hush up, woman.  I know what I'm 
                         doing.   

          He follows McFarlane out the door.  She glances at the 
          clock.  It's one minute after midnight. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Cathy and Garet follow Blood Creek.  Animals twitter in 
          the distance, and the clouds slide easily overhead.   

                                          GARET 
                         Well this has been interesting.  
                         Walking forever and nothing but a dried 
                         up creek bed.  If J.T. is out here 
                         still, he's probably passed out from 
                         boredom. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I don't know how you can joke.  If J.T. 
                         was able he'd have called one of us by 
                         now. 

                                          GARET 
                         Cell phones don't work out here, 
                         remember?  He's probably just lost and 
                         waiting for us to find him. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I hope so. 

                                          GARET 
                         You forget.  I was in the same Boy 
                         Scout troop.  One thing J.T. always 
                         was, was self reliant.   

          Cathy nods.  She tosses him a shy glance. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Thank you. 

                                          GARET 
                         For what? 

                                          CATHY 
                         Coming back out here.  I know you 
                         wanted to get to California. 

                                          GARET 
                         I didn't take this trip because of 
                         California, Cath.   

          She stops and rests against a tree.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Then why did you come? 

                                          GARET 
                         You really have to ask? 

          He leans an arm against the tree trunk.   

                                          GARET 
                         I've been crazy about you since the 
                         second grade.  I kinda hoped... 

                                          CATHY 
                         Hoped what? 

                                          GARET 
                         That you'd remember how good we were 
                         and forget about your Internet Romeo. 

          She gazes into his eyes for a moment.  With a small smile 


          -  

                                          CATHY 
                         You mean Lance? 

          He smiles big. 

                                          GARET 
                         That'd be the one. 

          He leans in for a kiss.  Just as it begins to deepen a 
          loon screeches nearby and they jump apart. 

                                          GARET 
                         Damn J.T.  He would have to get lost 
                         thirty miles from the nearest motel.  

          They press forward, and Cathy grabs his arm. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Oh my God.  Look. 

          Just ahead is a figure in the mud. 

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T... 

          She sprints ahead with Garet close behind. 


          INT. SHERIFF CAR - NIGHT 

          The tripometer reads 28.2.  McFarlane and Vince look over 
          to see the very faint entrance to the forest.   

                                          VINCE 
                         I'll be damned. 

          McFarlane turns the wheel toward the entrance. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Cathy fights through bare tree limbs, pressing on toward 
          the figure.   

          Closer and closer they come until the figure becomes 
          distinguishable as a man slumped over unnaturally.   

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T.!  J.T.!! 

          She slips down the riverbank and into the mud and pushes 
          the figure over onto its back.  She screams and scrambles 
          back. 

          It's Ricks, eyes wide, hair white, most definitely dead. 

          Garet grabs Cathy by the arms and hoists her onto the 
          bank.  She's covered with mud and slips back down.   

          A loon screeches, closer now.   

                                          CATHY 
                         Garet! 

          He tugs harder.   

                                          GARET 
                         I got you.  Come on.   

          He pulls her free from the mud and they fall back on 
          their backs in the brush.  Cathy sobs quietly.  He 
          reaches for her.  

                                          GARET 
                         Hey, it's okay.  It's not him. 

          She nods, but still gulps back her sobs.  Garet stands 
          and then helps her do the same.   

          That's when they notice the big red footprint, three 
          times as big as the footprints they were following 
          before. 

                                          GARET 
                         Oh, shit. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Garet?  What...? 

          Another crazy loon screech. 

                                          GARET 
                         Let's go.   

          He points off the direction opposite the footsteps. 

                                          GARET 
                         That way. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          Sheryl sits at the counter and stares into a cup of 
          coffee.   

          The bell rings announcing a visitor.  She turns around 
          quickly.   

          Sam enters. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Oh, Sam.  It's you. 

                                          SAM 
                         I thought you had given up the all 
                         night thing. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         We did.  But I don't think the coffee 
                         has grown legs yet if you want some. 

                                          SAM 
                         That sounds fine. 

          She gets up, gets a cup from the counter and pours him 
          some. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         What are you doing out so late? 

                                          SAM 
                         Lois is driving me crazy.  If I get one 
                         more Honey Do list I swear I'm going to 
                         back to work for the peace and quiet. 

          She just shakes her head with a small smile and puts the 
          coffee away.  She's clearly distressed. 

                                          SAM 
                         So why are you burning the midnight 
                         oil, if I may ask. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         That damn Vince.  Off on one of his 
                         lame-brained schemes with Sheriff 
                         McFarlane. 

          Sam chuckles. 

                                          SAM 
                         I thought Ian was more the 9-5 type of 
                         law around here. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         He was, till tonight.   

          She sits opposite him in the booth. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         These kids came through here last 
                         night, youngsters - probably college 
                         aged.  They claim that there is some 
                         kind of road twenty some odd miles from 
                         here and that's where they lost 
                         someone.   

                                          SAM 
                         I remember them.  Talked to a couple of 
                         them this afternoon.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         Well, apparently that deputy - that 
                         Ricks kid - he went off gallivanting 
                         after one of the pretty girls.  Found 
                         the road.  Never came back. 

                                          SAM 
                         Wait.  He really found the road? 

                                          SHERYL 
                         You know it? 

                                          SAM 
                         Know of it is more like it.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         Back when you were a sheriff? 

                                          SAM 
                         Back when I was in short pants.  This 
                         was back when I was still Sam 
                         Whitefeather.  I must have been five or 
                         six when my grandmother told us all the 
                         legend.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         What legend? 

                                          SAM 
                         Eh, it's nothing.  Just silly Indian 
                         superstition.  What we did before there 
                         was television, you know?  Greatest 
                         storytellers you'll ever find are the 
                         ones who spin their yarns over a 
                         campfire. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Still.  The road is real enough.  What 
                         do you think is out there, Sam? 

                                          SAM 
                         Dead trees and a dried up river bed.  
                         You got some pie to go with this 
                         coffee? 


          INT. GARET'S CAR - NIGHT 

          Tina drives on the endless road.  Jarnell props himself 
          up between the two bucket seats. 

          The car beeps at them and the oil light comes on.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         I told Garet to get rid of this piece 
                         of shit before we made this trip.   

          She eases over to the side of the road. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What are you doing? 

                                          TINA
                         You wanna burn the engine up out here?  
                         Last time I checked there wasn't a gas 
                         station anywhere nearby.   

          She turns off the ignition. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Let's just hope it starts again. 

                                          TINA
                         You know, you really need to be quiet.  
                         You've jinxed this little journey from 
                         start to finish. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Hey I'm just tellin it like it is. 


          OUT OF THE CAR 

          Tina opens the trunk.   

          Jarnell squeezes out of the back seat.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         I think you're the one that needs to 
                         shut up.  Now I gotta go. 

          He heads over to the edge of the forest.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Ah, hell no. 

          He looks back at Tina.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         No peeking. 

          Tina digs a quart of oil out of the trunk and then heads 
          over to pop the hood.   

                                          TINA
                         You don't have anything I haven't seen 
                         before. 

                                          JARNELL 
                              (to himself) 
                         I bet.   

          As he proceeds with his activity he stares off into the 
          dark forest.  He whistles to himself as he takes a whiz.  
          A loon screeches.  He jumps and the urine ceases for a 
          moment, but then he resumes, and whistles a little 
          louder. 

          Overhead clouds begin to tumble over themselves, touching 
          the tops of the trees.  A breeze rustles through the 
          leaves in a rolling wave, like it was coming to life.   

          Something moves off to his right, and Jarnell stops 
          whistling.   

          He peers into the forest. 

          Something passes in the woods just ahead and rustles the 
          tops of the trees.   

          Jarnell backs up toward the car, where Tina slams the 
          hood shut.   

          

                                          JARNELL 
                         We gotta go. 

          The figure passes by again, closer, and we get a hint of 
          faint pink bulk rising high in the trees. 

          This time Tina sees it too.  Both of them jump into the 
          car and peel out onto the road. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Neither say anything but stare straight ahead.  She 
          glances at Jarnell, who looks decidedly pale. 

                                          TINA
                         Fly's open. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          Cathy and Garet emerge from the woods to the empty road.   

                                          GARET 
                         Fuck me running. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Where'd they go?  Why'd they leave? 

                                          GARET 
                         Maybe we came out at the wrong spot. 

          They look both ways down the empty road. 

                                          CATHY 
                         We'd still be able to see them, Garet.  
                         There's nothing. 

                                          GARET 
                         Let's look at the bright side.  There 
                         are no red footprints out here.  Come 
                         on. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Garet and Cathy are dog tired as they trod on.   

                                          GARET 
                         I spy with my little eye... 
                         something...brown. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What isn't brown, Garet? 

                                          GARET 
                         Fine, fine.  Let's see.  I spy with my 
                         little eye... something pink? 

          Cathy's eyebrow furrows.   

                                          CATHY 
                         What?  Where? 

          Garet motions over by the side of the road.  They draw 
          closer to investigate. 

          It's a small woodland animal, completely skinned.   

                                          GARET 
                         Oh, that's just gross. 

          Cathy puts her hand to her stomach. 

                                          CATHY 
                         I've seen enough dead things today.  
                         Let's move on. 

          They walk a bit further.   

                                          GARET 
                         I spy with my little eye... 

          He pauses, then squints his eyes. 

                                          GARET 
                         Something black... 

          Cathy follows his line of vision.  It's a car pulled over 
          to the side of the road. 

          Both of them break out into a run. 


          UP UPON DEPUTY RICKS' CAR 

          They peer at the windshield, cracked and bloody.   

                                          GARET 
                         I guess that explains what happened to 
                         Deputy Whatshisname. 

                                          CATHY 
                         And that would be? 

                                          GARET 
                         He got into an accident, bumped his 
                         head, wandered off in the wood and 
                         collapsed and died. 

                                          CATHY 
                         There are two things wrong with your 
                         hypotheses. 

                                          GARET 
                         Other than the fact you want to call 
                         them hypothesis?  Hypothesises?  
                         Hypothesi? 

                                          CATHY 
                         One.  This windshield was cracked from 
                         the outside in.  This blood is on the 
                         wrong side of the windshield for it to 
                         be an accident. 

                                          GARET 
                         Maybe he hit an animal. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Then where is it?  

          They look around.  No animal. 

                                          GARET 
                         Very good, Colombo.  And two? 

                                          CATHY 
                         He had to have seen something really 
                         bad to scare his hair completely white. 

                                          GARET 
                         You got me there. 

          Garet sits in the car and fiddles with switches.  The 
          overhead lights turn on and swirl, which splashes red and 
          blue over Cathy's face. 

          Garet picks up the radio and presses the button on the 
          mouthpiece.   

                                          GARET 
                         Hello?  Ten-four, good buddy?  Roger 
                         Wilco, over and out? 

          He grumbles and puts it back up.   

          Cathy goes over to the passenger side and gets  


          IN THE CAR 

          Garet slams the door shut on his side.   

                                          CATHY 
                         What do we do now? 

                                          GARET 
                         We wait.   

                                          CATHY 
                         For what? 

                                          GARET 
                         Whoever comes looking for this car. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Why don't we just drive? 

                                          GARET 
                         No key.  Unless you want to walk back 
                         out to Bloody Creek and search Deputy 
                         Whozits for it. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Waiting's good. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          Sheriff McFarlane's car eases down the dirt road.   


          INT. SHERIFF'S CAR - CONTINUOUS 

          Both McFarlane and Vince stare out opposite windows, 
          Vince holds tight to his rifle. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Kinda spooky out here at night. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Never known you to be easily scared, 
                         Vince. 

                                          VINCE 
                         I didn't say I was scared. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         No, of course not. 

                                          VINCE 
                         I'm just saying it's kind of spooky.  
                         Not that I was spooked. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Naturally. 

          McFarlane looks down at his tripometer that now reads 


          000.0.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I'll be damned... 

                                          VINCE 
                         Look out! 

          McFarlane jerks his head up to see the shadow of 
          something in the middle of the road that stands over 
          seven feet tall. 

          The headlights splash brightly over the splotchy pink and 
          red carcass before the Sheriff's car lurches over to the 
          side of the road and into a small ditch. 


          INT. DEPUTY RICKS' CAR - NIGHT 

          Cathy leans her head against the window, staring out into 
          the woods. 

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T. had it right, you know. 

          Garet steals a glance her direction. 

                                          GARET 
                         What do you mean? 

                                          CATHY 
                         He lived life for the moment.  He never 
                         believed in regret.  He wanted 
                         something, he went for it and never 
                         looked back.   

                                          GARET 
                         Just because we found that cop doesn't 
                         mean J.T. isn't okay, you know. 

          She nods, but is unconvinced. 

          Garet sighs, then slides closer.   

                                          GARET 
                         Come here. 

          She doesn't resist as he pulls her into his embrace.  He 
          strokes her hair, his lips against her forehead.   

          Her hand reaches for his and draws his arm closer around 
          her.   

          He kisses the side of her temple, her eyes close.  She 
          moves his hand up to the side of her breast.   

          He buries his face in the side of her neck.  She lets out 
          a groan and turns into his kiss.   

          They kiss with all the fire and passion of an urgent 
          situation.  She pulls his shirt from his pants and lifts 
          it impatiently over his head, while he undoes the buttons 
          of her blouse. 

          She throws the garment from her shoulders while he 
          unfastens her jeans and slides them over her hips. 

          In just her underwear she straddles him in the car.  His 
          fingers cup her behind, just barely covered in skimpy 
          panties.  He groans. 

                                          GARET 
                         You sure you know what you're doing? 

                                          CATHY 
                         If I'm gonna die tonight, I'm not going 
                         to die a virgin. 

                                          GARET 
                         So you're using me? 

                                          CATHY 
                         Yes. 

                                          GARET 
                         Oh.  Okay.  Just checking. 

          He crushes his mouth to hers. 


          INT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          It's nearly 2:00am.  Sheryl paces now, and Sam watches 
          her from where he sits.  He drains his coffee and then 
          squeezes out of the booth.    

                                          SAM 
                         If it'll make you feel better, I'll 
                         head out there and take a look. 

          Sheryl considers him for a moment before going back 
          behind the counter.  She digs around underneath and then 
          pulls out a hefty shotgun.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         I'm coming with ya.  That way if Vince 
                         ain't dead, I can kill him. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          Steam rises from the Sheriff's hood, and McFarlane and 
          Vince stumble from the vehicle, weapons drawn. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Did you see that thing? 

          McFarlane nods and surveys the area.  There is nothing 
          out of the ordinary.   

          A loon screeches loudly, both men jump. 

                                          VINCE 
                         What the fuck was that? 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Dunno.  Bird?  Maybe a loon? 

                                          VINCE 
                         That ain't no loon I ever heard.  That 
                         sounds like... I dunno.  Three or four 
                         animal cries combined into one. 

          He cocks his rifle.  

                                          VINCE 
                         Whatever it is, it's gonna look mighty 
                         good mounted on my wall. 


          EXT. GARET'S CAR - NIGHT 

          Tina stands from her squatting position behind the car 
          and straightens her skirt.  She races back to the car, 
          which is still running, and hops in. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Jarnell munches on a big slab of jerky.  He sends her a 
          look. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         You seriously need to go to a doctor. 

                                          TINA
                         And you seriously need to go on a diet. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What?  This is protein.   

          She shakes her head with a smile and pulls the car back 
          out into the road. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - DEPUTY RICKS' CAR - NIGHT 

          The car rocks and the windows fog over. 


          INSIDE DEPUTY RICKS CAR - SAME 

          Cathy lies under Garet.  Tears run down her face.  Garet 
          notices. 

                                          GARET 
                         What's wrong? 

                                          CATHY 
                         Nothing.  It's fine.  It's - good. 

          Her face speaks another story.  Garet lifts away. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What are you doing? 

                                          GARET 
                         I don't know.  But I'm not doing this. 

          He sits over to the side and eases up his jeans.  Cathy 
          sits up, in her panties only, and covers her bare chest 
          with her hands.   

                                          CATHY 
                         This is all new to me.  We're lost out 
                         here in the fucking woods.  We just saw 
                         a dead man, and my brother could very 
                         well be dead too.   

          Garet doesn't even look at her. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Look, I'm sorry I'm not like Tina okay? 

          Garet sighs and looks at Cathy, who has reached for her 
          shirt. 

                                          GARET 
                         If I wanted Tina I'd be with Tina.  I 
                         want you. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Yeah, right.   

          She tugs on her shirt. 

                                          GARET 
                         I do!  But not like this.  Like you 
                         said.  No regrets. 

          Cathy grabs her clothes and reaches for the doorknob. 

                                          CATHY 
                         The only regret I have was thinking I 
                         could ever sleep with you. 

          She wrenches open the door and storms out into the night, 
          in her shirt and panties, barefoot. 

                                          GARET 
                         Goddamnit! 


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Garet hops out, fastening his jeans as he goes.  He runs 
          around the side of the car and nearly trips over 
          something as he hits the grass. 

          It's Ricks' gun. 


          INTO THE FOREST 

          Cathy charges forward, her clothes clutched to her bosom, 
          tears flying off of her face. 

                                          GARET (OS) 
                         Cathy! 

                                          CATHY 
                              (in tears) 
                         Fuck you! 

          Her bare feet mash over the dead leaves and broken limbs 
          on the ground.   

          A loon screams long and loud nearby. 


          IN ANOTHER PART OF THE FOREST 

          Vince and McFarlane advance into the forest, guns drawn. 

                                          VINCE 
                         It's that way.  Bout a mile or so. 

          They head off that direction. 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          Garet sprints forward, a gun in his hand.   

                                          GARET 
                         Cathy!   


          IN CATHY'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          Cathy gulps in tearful breaths as she runs further into 
          the inky black forest.  Clouds overhead tumble over each 
          other, and the wind begins to circle the tops of the 
          trees.   

          The loon screeches again, louder now.  Closer. 

          Cathy stops.  

                                          CATHY 
                         Garet? 

          Twigs break off behind her.  She twirls around, screams 
          and drops all her clothes. 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          Garet hears her scream. 

                                          GARET 
                         Cathy!! 

          He pushes through the trees. 


          IN CATHY'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          Cathy sobs as she reaches for J.T.'s armless body as he 
          weaves and sways on his feet.  His head lolls to the side 
          and he groans.   

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T...  Oh my God... What happened to 
                         your arm? 

          He groans again, dazed.   

                                          CATHY 
                         I thought you were dead.  I was so 
                         scared. 

          She hugs him, sobs harder.   

          His arm snakes around her back and his head turns toward 
          her.   

          His eyes open.  They're black as coal.  He emits a 
          guttural sound. 

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T. I have had enough of the jokes, 
                         okay?  Let's just get you back to the 
                         car and get out of here. 

          She tries to move away but his hand sneaks up her back 
          and grasps her neck. 

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T.?  J.T. that hurts! 

          His mouth opens almost unnaturally and the crazy loon 
          animal sound explodes forth. 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE WOODS  

          Garet stops short.  The sound is deafening.   

                                          GARET 
                         Cathy! 


          IN CATHY'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Cathy glances into J.T.'s face and sees his black eyes.  
          Her own eyes widen with fear and she begins to struggle.   

          He keeps her in a locked embrace, despite her efforts.  
          Finally she jams her elbow into the empty socket where 
          J.T.'s arm used to be and he backs away.   

                                          CATHY 
                         J.T. I'm sorry!  I'm sorry! 

          J.T. staggers backward, his eyes roll back in his head 
          and he begins to convulse. 

          Pink and red fluid bubbles from his mouth. 

                                          CATHY 
                         What's happening to you? 

          A puddle forms at his feet, blood red mixes with the 
          dirt.  The ground writhes underneath. 

          J.T.'s skin starts to peel open.  Cathy turns tail and 
          runs the other direction.   

          Red mud races toward her, growing more form as it goes. 

                                          CATHY 
                         Garet! 


          GARET'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Garet tears through the forest toward her voice. 

                                          GARET 
                         I'm comin, baby!  Hold on! 


          IN CATHY'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          Cathy trips and lands stomach down, on the ground.  Her 
          hair now is streaked white.  

          Out of sight we hear a munching, growling, grunting sound 
          - amplified as if it were several animals in one. 

                                          CATHY 
                         God, no.... 

          Dirt jams up her fingernails as she claws at the ground, 
          through the red dirt, rocks and limbs. 

          Whatever is behind her then drags her through the mud by 
          her legs.  

                                          CATHY 
                         Garet!! 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          He hears her scream and the grunting/growling sound.  He 
          keeps his gun pointed out, crying a little himself, as he 
          pushes through the dead trees. 


          IN MCFARLANE'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          Vince and McFarlane hear her scream as well.   

                                          VINCE 
                         What in blazes...? 

          McFarlane doesn't say anything, just runs faster toward 
          the sound. 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          The wind dies, along with all other sounds and noises.  
          He gulps, an audible sound.   

          Every step, every breath, is amplified in sound.  He 
          steps cautiously; pulls back branches with one hand, 
          holds the gun with the other.      

                                          GARET 
                         Cathy? 

          He moves along further into the woods. 

                                          GARET 
                         Cathy, if you can hear me, please... 

          A loon screeches an explosive nearby sound that dies away 
          as if sucked into a vacuum. 

          Garet gulps and heads that direction. 


          IN MCFARLANE'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          McFarlane and Vince pull back dead skeletal limbs from 
          the trees.   

                                          VINCE 
                         What the hell? 

          They're back at the road. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Is this another road or the same road? 

          McFarlane looks both ways on the empty road. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I don't know. 

          The men cross the road to the other side, and just as 
          they disappear out of sight Garet's car comes into view. 


          INT. GARET'S CAR 

          Tina's head dips onto her shoulder, losing the battle 
          with road fatigue. 

          A jittery Jarnell jerks her awake. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What the hell are you trying to do?  
                         Wreck?  Wake up! 

                                          TINA
                         In case you haven't noticed I haven't 
                         gotten any real sleep in two days.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         This ain't right.  Nothing about this 
                         shit is right.  We drive in a straight 
                         line but it feels like a circle.  We 
                         ain't seen Garet or Cathy or J.T.   

                                          TINA
                         Maybe you should get out and look for 
                         them in the forest, then. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Hell no.  Did you see that thing moving 
                         around in the forest?  You want to get 
                         eye to eye with it?  I know I don't. 

                                          TINA
                         I never thought I'd see the day when 
                         Big Man on Campus Jarnell Johnson would 
                         be afraid. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         And you're not? 

                                          TINA
                         I don't get scared.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Yeah right. 

                                          TINA
                         When you grow up with a daddy like I 
                         had, you get scared beat right outta 
                         you real quick. 

          Jarnell looks at her. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Your daddy beat you? 

          She shrugs. 

                                          TINA
                         Whatever.   

          He hesitates for a moment, studying her. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What happened? 

                                          TINA
                         I ran away when I was fourteen and 
                         never looked back.  But I'll give the 
                         ol' man this.  He taught me everything 
                         I need to know about surviving on the 
                         streets.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         So you're a hustler. 

                                          TINA
                         Who isn't? 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Were you hustlin' J.T.? 

          She shrugs again. 

                                          TINA
                         He got what he wanted out of the 
                         relationship and I got what I wanted.  
                         A one way ticket to somewhere else. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         'Cept now J.T. is gone and we're lost 
                         in the country. 

          Tina sighs. 

                                          TINA
                         Yeah. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Garet's hand trembles as it holds up the gun.  His eyes 
          dart from side to side, every sound amplified. 

          Something rustles behind him and he twirls around, gun 
          shaking. 

          Another screech, so loud Garet has to cover his ears with 
          his hands.   

          He glances up.  The clouds roll.  He trots the same 
          direction. 


          FURTHER IN THE WOODS 

          McFarlane and Vince come upon Bloody Creek.   

          They see the red human footprints. 

                                          VINCE 
                         I'll be damned.   

          McFarlane looks around. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         This ground is disturbed.  Those kids 
                         have been here.   

                                          VINCE 
                         That way. 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Garet runs on.  The wind seems to follow him.   

                                          GARET 
                              (singing) 
                         I'm gonna be an airborne ranger... 

          His bare feet plow through the debris on the ground.  
          Twigs, rocks, red dirt - staining the bottom of his feet 
          with red mud and his own blood.   

                                          GARET 
                              (singing) 
                         Gonna live a life of danger... 

          The inky black night tries to swallow him as he races 
          along, slapped in the face by razor sharp tree branches. 

                                          GARET 
                              (singing) 
                         Gonna find that woodland creature.  
                         Gonna kill him this time, I'm sure. 
                         Sound off.  One, two.  Sound off.  
                         Three, Four.  Bring it on down.  One, 
                         two, three, four.  One, two...   

          He pushes aside more and more brush, and finds a skinned 
          body. 

                                          GARET 
                         Three - Fuck! 

          He stumbles back and falls right on his ass.  A human 
          being, laid open from the inside out, lays on the ground 
          like a gory area rug. 


          EXT. HIGHWAY - NIGHT 

          A tattered old truck putters down the highway. 


          INSIDE THE TRUCK 

          Sheryl consults a map, then peers at the side of the 
          road.    

                                          SAM 
                         How many miles did you say? 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Twenty.  Thirty.  Lord, I can't 
                         remember.  Wait.  What's that? 

          Through the windshield the faint entrance can be seen. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Sweet Lord above. 

          The truck grinds to a halt. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Maybe you need to tell me about your 
                         legend, Sam. 

                                          SAM 
                         It's not any different than many other 
                         legends, really.  According to the 
                         fable our tribe made their home in this 
                         area, by woods that were full of game, 
                         bustin with life.  Everyone claimed the 
                         tribe was blessed by the spirits.   

          They look around at the dead trees. 

                                          SAM 
                         Apparently the clan's shaman had 
                         special mystical powers where he could 
                         control the weather and the seasons.  
                         He was positioned very high, but ended 
                         up angering the spirits when he fell in 
                         love with his brother's wife.  He used 
                         his powers to kill him.  Everything 
                         dried up, including the creek.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         Bloody Creek. 

                                          SAM 
                         That's how it got it's name.  'Cordin 
                         to legend anyhow.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         Vince said it's been dead out there 
                         since he was a boy. 

                                          SAM 
                         Sounds bout right.  The legend has to 
                         be nearly a hundred years old.  The 
                         White Man came, and that was that.  
                         Considered a curse, the shaman was 
                         driven out and took shelter in the 
                         forest.  But the spirits weren't done.  
                         They decided to slap him around a bit 
                         with karma, and sent a big bolt of 
                         lightning to kill him in the same way 
                         he killed his brother.  Unfortunately, 
                         it backfired big time.  The legend says 
                         the Shaman survived somehow, and after 
                         that could fuse himself to every dead 
                         thing in that forest.  Now he's cursed 
                         to walk somewhere between this life and 
                         the next. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Wait a minute.  You're talkin about a 
                         skin-walker? 

                                          SAM 
                         Nothing so simple.  If you believe that 
                         kind of thing that is.  This thing is 
                         more evil and more cursed.  The spirits 
                         tried to kill him but instead his 
                         vengeance lives on, feeding off of the 
                         prey he hunts and then using their 
                         carcasses like a suit.  Grandma said if 
                         it weren't for The Dead Woods to 
                         contain it, it'd be unleashed on all of 
                         us to pick us off one by one.  The 
                         ultimate revenge. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Those woods? 

                                          SAM 
                         Yup. 

          Sheryl clutches her gun further up on her lap and Sam 
          turns the vehicle in that direction. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          He glances up again and the clouds have rolled to a stop.  
          He holds up his shaking gun backing away  

          A slow, crackling sound comes from the tree.  Garet 
          stares in disbelief.  Bark chips off, and blood oozes 
          from the bare pink underneath.   

                                          GARET 
                         What the... 

          He scrambles to his feet.  A root from the tree untangles 
          from the ground and snakes toward his bare foot.   

          He runs backward away from the root and backs himself up 
          against another tree. 

          The loon sounds again, this time so loud it shakes the 
          ground.   

          He nearly stumbles over himself as he takes off running 
          in the other direction. 

          He breathes hard as he barrels through the woods.  The 
          loud cry of an undeterminable animal follows him - 
          screaming out with menace. 

          Clouds boil and move overhead, and the trees tangle above 
          him.   

          He trips and sprawls flat on his back.  He looks up and 
          waves his gun.   

                                          GARET 
                         Stay back! 

          He shoots off a couple of rounds just to make his point.   

          Everything grows quiet.  He pulls himself back up and 
          walks backward, the gun brandished. 

          Something moves over to the left.  He shoots off another 
          round. 

          Something moves off to the right.  He shoots yet again.   

          Up ahead he sees a faint line of pink pass through the 
          trees.  He aims, points and pulls the trigger.   

          A loud SCREAM comes from right behind him.  He screams 
          and takes off running again. 


          AT BLOODY CREEK  

          Vince and McFarlane track the prints along the bank of 
          the dried up creek, pausing only to assess the direction 
          of the faint cry of the loon.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         How far would you say it is now? 

                                          VINCE 
                         Three, maybe four miles?  Hard to say.  
                         Sounds like it's coming from a vaccuum. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         This whole place is a vaccuum.  Think 
                         about it.  We've never seen this river 
                         this red in what?  A good forty years? 

                                          VINCE 
                         At least. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         And the forest is unending.  We could 
                         go as far as we could in any direction 
                         and we'd still be in this crazy place. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Come on now, Sheriff.  You know that 
                         ain't possible.   

          McFarlane stops dead in his tracks and Vince bumps into 
          him.   

                                          VINCE 
                         What? 

          McFarlane nods ahead a creek bed that is slowly beginning 
          to fill with water that runs red. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Jesus, Mary, Joseph... 

          A body lays slumped in the bed.

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Call em all, Vince.  We're gonna need 
                         em. 


          IN GARET'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Garet's legs churn over a downhill terrain.  He stumbles 
          but manages to stay upright.   

          Growls and gnashing teeth follow close behind.   


          INT. GARET'S CAR - NIGHT 

          Tina fights off sleep, as does Jarnell.  She jumps with a 
          start and then turns to Jarnell, whose head tips forward.   

          She swats him slightly. 

                                          TINA
                         I thought you were supposed to keep me 
                         awake. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What am I?  An alarm clock?  Keep your 
                         own damn self awake. 

                                          TINA
                         You want us to wreck?  Come on.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Fine.  Fine.   

                                          TINA
                         Ninety nine bottles of beer on the 
                         wall, ninety nine bottles of beer... 

          Jarnell beat boxes along with her. 

                                          TINA
                         Take one down, pass it around, ninety 
                         eight bottles of beer on the wall... 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Garet runs faster, bare tree limbs tear at his bare 
          chest. 

                                          TINA (VO) 
                         Ninety eight bottles of beer on the 
                         wall, ninety eight bottles of beer... 

          OVER: Jarnell's beatboxing 

          Garet grabs limbs to propel him forward, his feet sliding 
          over dead leaves and mud. 

                                          TINA (VO) 
                         Take one down, pass it around, ninety 
                         seven bottles of beer on the wall. 


          INT. GARET'S CAR - NIGHT 

          Tina taps her fingers in time with Jarnell. 

                                          TINA
                         Ninety seven bottles of beer on the 
                         wall, ninety seven bottles of beer... 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Garet pushes through a barricade of trees and winds up 
          next to the road.   


          INT. GARET'S CAR - SAME 

          Tina sees him just as he darts into the road. 

                                          TINA
                         Shit! 

          She wrenches the wheel far to the left and the car wrecks 
          into a ravine. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What the fuck? 

          Tina flips off the ignition and throws open the door. 


          ONTO THE ROAD 

          Garet stumbles toward them. 

                                          TINA
                         Where were you?  Where's Cathy? 

          Jarnell climbs out of the car just in time to see Garet 
          shake his head. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Oh, man. 

                                          TINA
                         I found part of J.T. too. 

                                          GARET 
                         We gotta get outta here.  There's 
                         something out there.  It's not natural.  
                         It's got control of the trees and the 
                         wind and God knows what else. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         You're talking crazy, man.  Come on 
                         over here and just sit down. 

                                          GARET 
                         This whole thing is crazy, Jarnell!  
                         We're lost on a road that doesn't 
                         exist, in a place where cell phones and 
                         radios don't work and anyone who goes 
                         out in the forest ends up missing.  Or 
                         dead.   

                                          TINA
                         Okay, okay.  Let's just calm down.  
                         Panicking isn't going to get us out of 
                         here.   

                                          GARET 
                         No, but this might. 

          He holds up the gun. 

                                          TINA
                         Where'd you get that? 

                                          GARET 
                         From your cop.  Found him too.  After 
                         the bogeyman did anyway.  

                                          JARELL  
                         Stop it, man.  You're freaking me out.  
                         Let's just roll. 

                                          GARET 
                         Sounds good to me. 

          He takes the keys from Tina and heads to the car.   


          INT. GARET'S CAR - CONTINUOUS 

          Jarnell squeezes in the passenger seat and Tina climbs 
          over to the back seat.   

          Garet sits in the driver seat, puts the gun on the dash 
          and puts the key in the ignition.  He turns it, but it 
          only clicks.   

                                          GARET 
                         Fuck me running.  Not now. 

          He tries it again, but nothing happens.   

          He reaches down for the hood release, but the crumpled up 
          hood doesn't budge.   

                                          GARET 
                              (sighs) 
                         Of course. 


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Garet gets out, looks around, looks up, then heads toward 
          the front of the car.   

          He tugs and pulls at the hood, but can't get it to open.   

                                          GARET 
                         Jarnell.  Pull the hood release. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Jarnell grumbles as he leans across to tug on the lever.   


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          With one final tug, the hood gives way. 

                                          GARET 
                         Finally.   

          He reaches in to wiggle the wire, but the lights only 
          flicker.   

                                          GARET 
                         Come on.  Come on.   

          He wiggles it again, still no lights.   

                                          GARET 
                         What the fuck, man. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Jarnell ambles back up into a sitting position.  He 
          glances into the  

          REAR VIEW MIRROR: A long pink face as though the skin is 
          worn inside out, and black, vacant eyes stare back. 

          Jarnell reaches up with a quick hand to cover the rear 
          view mirror. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Tina. 

          Tina lays down in the back, her arm over her eyes. 

                                          TINA
                         Yeah. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I want you to look out the back window 
                         and tell me what you see. 

          Tina sighs and pulls herself up into a sitting position.  
          She glances out the window.   

                                          TINA
                         I see a road, Jarnell. 

          Jarnell nods, his hand shaking as it drops from the 
          rearview.  Nothing is behind them.  He sighs and eases 
          back into the seat. 

          From his window we see the same face, closer and much 
          more frightening.   

          Close on Jarnell, whose eyes are closed.  Relief gives 
          way to worry, which gives way to terror.  He peers 
          through one eye.   

          The face is right in the frame of the window.  With a big 
          huff of breath, it fogs the window over. 

          A DEAFENING roar escapes the Creature. 

          Jarnell lets out a scream before he scrambles across the 
          car toward the open driver's door. 

          Tina screams as well, hops into the front seat and 
          squeezes Jarnell, who gets stuck. 

          They're both screaming as she tries to push him through. 


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Garet pulls Jarnell who is halfway through the car door.  
          Everyone is screaming. 

          The car rocks. 


          INSIDE THE CAR 

          Tina braces her foot on the window on the passenger side 
          and pushes Jarnell's butt with her shoulders.  The window 
          cracks and she nearly loses her footing. 

          With one final push she propels Jarnell 


          OUTSIDE THE CAR 

          Tina climbs out just as the car starts to tip forward, 
          barely clearing it as it slams onto its side.   

          Without looking back, the three make tracks into the 
          woods. 


          INTO THE WOODS 

          Jarnell huffs behind Garet and Tina. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What the hell was that? 

          Garet slows just a step to grab Jarnell's arm to pull him 
          along. 

                                          GARET 
                         Something that runs faster than you.  
                         Come on. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          McFarlane stands up from his kneeling position.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Yeah, she's dead all right. 

          They both look down at Cathy's body. 

          Vince turns his attention toward the unnaturally huge 
          footprints.   

                                          VINCE 
                         It's heading that way. 

          Vince cocks his gun and sets off after the trail.  
          McFarlane follows.   


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          The beat up truck slows to a stop behind the Deputy car, 
          still spilling lights across the woods. 

          Sheryl and Sam emerge to investigate the scene.  

          They round the car and inspect the cracked, bloody 
          windshield. 

                                          SAM 
                         Well, this would explain why the Deputy 
                         never came back. 

          He climbs in and tests the radio.  Nothing but static.   

          Sheryl touches the blood on the windshield. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Looks like he hit an animal. 

          Sam gets out of the car. 

                                          SAM 
                         Or something. 

          He heads back to his truck and Sheryl follows. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Vince leads the charge, following the footprints. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Walks upright, has to be a man.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         A man with really big feet. 

                                          VINCE 
                         From this stride I'd say well over six 
                         foot.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         You think it's one of the kids? 

                                          VINCE 
                         Dunno, don't care.  Whatever it is it's 
                         gonna be stuffed and mounted by dawn. 


          OTHER PART OF THE WOODS 

          Jarnell huffs and puffs and comes to a halt near an 
          overturned tree.   

                                          GARET 
                         Come on, man.  We can't stop. 

          Garet keeps looking up at the clouds. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Can't go on.  Go without me. 

          Tina, who is far ahead, turns back.  She sees Jarnell 
          sitting on the stump, fighting for breath.   

          She trots back to him. 

                                          TINA
                              (sings) 
                         Ninety nine bottles of beer on the 
                         wall... 

          He shakes his head and doesn't look up. 

                                          TINA
                              (sings a little louder) 
                         Ninety nine bottles of beer on the 
                         wall... 

          He glances up at her face.  She raises her eyebrows at 
          him.  Slowly he starts to beat box.  

          Garet watches with interest, in between looking up and 
          looking behind.   

                                          TINA
                              (singing) 
                         Ninety nine bottles of beer on the 
                         wall, ninety nine bottles of beer... 

          Jarnell hoists himself up and occupies himself with his 
          musical contribution to the song and they press on. 


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          McFarlane and Vince find Garet's overturned car.  It's 
          covered with red, slimy mud.   

          On the road, the footprints have changed from two, to 
          four. 

                                          VINCE 
                         I'll be. 

          He scratches his head and sends a quizzical look to 
          McFarlane, who is staring off into the inky black woods 
          on the other side.   


          INTO THE WOODS 

          Tina and Garet run on either side of Jarnell, whose 
          beatboxing is a lot less enthusiastic.   

                                          GARET 
                         We can't keep this up.  It's just gonna 
                         chase us till it wears us out. 

                                          TINA
                         Then we gotta make the chase more 
                         challenging. 

                                          GARET 
                         What do you mean?  Split up? 

                                          TINA
                         No, that's suicide.  The absolute thing 
                         we can't do is split up.   

          Tina scans her surroundings.  She spots a hill and then a 
          drop into a small gully. 

                                          TINA
                         How close is it? 

          Garet looks up.  The clouds are now starting to tumble 
          over themselves. 

                                          GARET 
                         Too close for comfort would be my 
                         guess. 

                                          TINA
                         Then we don't have much time.  Come on.  
                         Help me gather some limbs. 

          Both guys rush to gather leaves and limbs. 


          IN MCFARLANE'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Vince and McFarlane are hot on the trail.  They press 
          through the tangle of trees.  Red mud drips from the 
          higher branches.   

          They look up. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Holy Moses! 


          INT. PICKUP TRUCK - NIGHT 

          Sheryl stares out the windshield and off to the side.  
          Sam hangs one elbow out his open window.  In the 
          distance, they hear the loon scream. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         What in heaven's name was that? 

          Sam surveys the dark woods on his side. 

                                          SAM 
                         I don't think heaven has anything to do 
                         with it. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Come on, Sam.  You're scaring me. 

                                          SAM 
                         Good.  Glad to know we're on the same 
                         page. 

          He guns the motor and speeds along. 


          EXT. WOODS - NIGHT 

          Garet, Jarnell and Tina race along, the sound of the 
          crazy loon distant behind them.   

                                          TINA
                         That doesn't sound too close.  Maybe it 
                         found our surprise. 

                                          GARET 
                         Or some other prey.   


          IN MCFARLANE'S PART OF THE WOODS  

          Vince and McFarlane run through the woods, no longer on 
          the prowl.   

          Above them the clouds boil and rage, and the woods behind 
          them seem to open into a black mouth of nothingness. 


          IN ANOTHER PART OF THE WOODS 

          Garet, Jarnell and Tina reach an inpenetratable tangle of 
          trees stretching as far and long and tall as the eye can 
          see.   

                                          TINA
                         No! 

                                          GARET 
                         Now what? 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Hey guys, shut up. 

          They all listen.  Very faintly they hear a police radio. 


          ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE WALL OF TREES 

          A highway.  A semi sits to the side of the road, a 
          HIGHWAY PATROLMAN in a trooper car behind him, writing a 
          ticket. 


          BACK ON THEIR SIDE OF THE WALL 

          Garet, Tina and Jarnell hold their ear against the trees.  
          It's faint, but they can hear it. 

                                          GARET 
                         Hey! 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Hey, man! 

                                          TINA
                         Help us!  Someone! 

          They all continue to scream and holler. 


          BACK ON THE HIGHWAY SIDE OF THE TREES 

          No sound comes from the wall, just the sounds of the 
          highway. 

          The patrolman gets out of his car and heads toward the 
          semi. 

          The lights spill across the woods on the side. 


          BACK AT MCFARLANE'S PART OF THE FOREST 

          McFarlane and Vince tear through the trees.  The loon 
          screeches behind them, an ear piercing sound. 


          BACK AT THE WOODS SIDE OF THE WALL OF TREES 

          Tina, Garet and Jarnell still scream for help.  The more 
          scared Tina gets, the more determined she gets.   

                                          TINA
                         Fuck this. 

          She climbs up the first few branches in the tangled 
          trees. 

                                          GARET 
                         What are you doing?  You see how high 
                         this goes? 

          Actually they can't, the clouds hang many feet over head. 

                                          TINA
                         Don't care.  I'm not going to stay here 
                         and scream like a little girl. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I dunno.  I find it a little 
                         therapeutic. 

          He continues to scream, which gets deafened by the ever 
          present scream of the loon. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         On the other hand, therapy is 
                         overrated. 

          Both guys jump up on the tree limbs and start climbing. 


          IN MCFARLANE'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Feet pound the ground and hit a hill running, one person 
          running slightly off to the left and the other running 
          right off the middle. 

          The guy up the middle then disappears into the 
          camouflaged booby trap. 

          Vince runs a bit further unaware, but happens to glance 
          over his shoulder. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Sheriff? 


          IN THE RAVINE 

          McFarlane holds his leg, it's bent unnaturally. 

          Vince peers over the edge. 

                                          VINCE 
                         You all right? 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Peachy.  I thought I'd take a break.  
                         Got a doughnut? 

          McFarlane's hand moves, revealing blood on his pants. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Shit.   

          He holds his hand down. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Can you reach me?  Can you stand? 

          McFarlane braces his weight against his palms in an 
          attempt to stand, but crumples in agony.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Can't.  You're gonna hafta go on. 

                                          VINCE 
                         No way.   

          He glances around.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Go on!  You gotta save them kids. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Maybe if I throw something down, you 
                         can climb up? 

          McFarlane shakes his head.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I can't even move.   

          Vince hesitates.  The loon screeches and Vince looks up. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Think it through, Vince.  If you drag 
                         me along it'll just slow you down. 

                                          VINCE 
                         I really don't feel right bout leavin 
                         you alone. 

          McFarlane holds up his gun. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         I'm not alone.  Look, you're those 
                         kids' only hope.  You go out there, get 
                         them to safety.  I'll be fine. 

          Vince nods and turns to go. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Hey Vince. 

          Vince turns back.  McFarlane tosses him something. 

          It's his badge.   

          Vince's hand closes over the metal and he takes off. 


          AT THE WALL OF TREES 

          Tina, Garet and Jarnell fight up the branches toward the 
          clouds.  The spiny thorns impede their progress, but Tina 
          leads the charge even though they cannot see the top.   

          The further up they get, the less the trees are tangled.  
          They can see out to the other side, the lonely stretch of 
          highway where semis roll through at a breakneck speed. 

                                          TINA
                         Hello!  Hello, can anyone hear us? 

                                          GARET 
                         There's no one out there, Tina.   

                                          TINA
                         It's worth a try.  No one can hear us 
                         here if we don't make some noise. 

          Close on her foot as it slips in between the branches, 
          which sag under her weight. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         In case you're forgetting that black 
                         eyed thing attacked us at the car.  I 
                         don't mind if it doesn't know where we 
                         are. 

          Close on his foot, the branches creak and moan. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Damn, I'm hungry. 

                                          GARET 
                         I don't think I'll eat again.  You 
                         didn't see what I saw. 

          Tina glances down at him. 

                                          TINA
                         Don't think about it.  Just think about 
                         getting over this wall.   

          She takes another step. 

                                          TINA
                         Climbing out of something isn't about 
                         not looking down.  It's about not 
                         looking back. 

          Jarnell then looks down. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Aw, why'd you have to say that? 

          Garet smiles his direction. 

                                          GARET 
                         Come on, big man.  


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          The old truck sits just behind Garet's overturned car.  
          Sheryl and Sam circle the vehicle, and Sam runs a finger 
          along the muddy prints on the side. 

          Sheryl holds her gun a little tighter to her body when 
          she spots the footprints leading into the woods.   

          He spots them too, and together they head into trees. 


          IN THE RAVINE  

          McFarlane gasps with pain as he tries to move around the 
          confined area.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Well this is a fine how-do-ya-do. 

          He lays back on his back and stares up into the trees.  
          The clouds roll over themselves.  His brow furrows. 

          Somewhere outside the hole something crunches in the 
          twigs, as though someone is walking in the area. 

          His hand tightens around his gun and he holds it to his 
          chest, keeping watch.   

          The steps come closer.  Someone groans.  McFarlane gulps 
          and surveys the opening.   

          With great effort and great pain he pulls himself up.   

          The footsteps stop just above, kicking rocks and dirt 
          down over McFarlane. 

          When the loon cries McFarlane jumps. 

          The steps stumble away and kick more debris onto 
          McFarlane. 

          He spots a lawman patch on a tan shirt.  He pulls himself 
          even straighter. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Ricks! 

          Ricks walks just in view but looking the other way.  He 
          rubs his head, he's disoriented. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Sure am glad to see you.  Come here and 
                         give me a hand.   

          Ricks staggers out of view.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Ricks! 

          He waits.  The loon cries again.   

          Ricks hand appears right in front of McFarlane's face. 

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Dammit, boy. 

          He grabs the hand and uses another hand on the ground to 
          propel him forward.  He grimaces.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         C'mon.  Pull like you mean it! 

          Ricks pulls hard and slams McFarlane against the side of 
          the ravine.   

                                          MCFARLANE 
                         Goddammit.  Knock it off.  

          McFarlane grabs Ricks' arm with his other hand and Ricks 
          slowly hoists McFarlane  


          OUT OF THE HOLE 

          McFarlane leans against Ricks, who holds him chest to 
          chest.   

          His face contorts with pain as he looks up at Ricks, and 
          realizes his eyes are as black as coal.  His mouth opens, 
          his jaw unhinges and a ear piercing screech explodes out.   

          We watch McFarlane's hair grow out completely white. 

          Close on his one good leg as his body begins to shake and 
          toss about to loud growls and munches. 


          IN VINCE'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Vince stops short at the ungodly sound.  He turns back 
          when a branch drops from the clouds to clunk him on the 
          head.   

          Vince looks up.  He can see nothing but rolling clouds. 

                                          VINCE 
                         Who's up there? 


          UP ON THE WALL, IN THE CLOUDS 

          Tina, Garet and Jarnell hang on the wall in a soundless 
          vacuum.  Tina glances down at Jarnell, who has nearly 
          fallen.   

                                          TINA
                         You okay? 

          He nods, his breath uneven. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         No fear.  Right? 

          She nods and takes another step up.  Her bare feet are 
          bleeding from the sharp spines on the dead, dry branches, 
          but she doesn't slow down. 

          The branch sags and bends to the point of snapping.  She 
          loses her grip and slides down a bit.   

          Her fingers hang onto the branch for dear life, bleeding. 

          She steps a bit further and this time the branch slides 
          easily from under her feet and wraps itself around her 
          ankle.   

          Garet watches with horror. 

                                          GARET 
                         Look out! 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Holy shit! 

          The limb slides around and around her leg, up her calve 
          and then bites into her creamy thigh.   

          She kicks and screams as it disappears up her skirt. 

                                          TINA
                         Do something! 

          The guys start for her but every branch they reach for 
          slides away before they can grab it. 


          DOWN AT THE BOTTOM OF THE WALL 

          Vince comes to the end of the forest.  He peers through 
          the branches as another semi roars by.   

          Another branch falls and hits him on the head.   

          He glances up, this time he points his gun. 

                                          VINCE 
                         What the fuck are you? 


          UP INSIDE THE CLOUDS 

          Tina screams louder as the branch winds itself around her 
          midsection and up under her shirt, around her breasts.   

          She lets go of the branches to fight it with both hands, 
          growing angrier the more scared she gets. 

                                          TINA
                         Get off me, you fucker!  Get off me! 

          Jarnell's face sets in a determined line and he steps to 
          the side.  Just as he applies his weight another branch 
          drops him down.   

          She continues to struggle with the branch and bends it 
          beyond the point of breakage.  It easily snaps back, as 
          if made of rubber. 

          It wraps around her neck, then her jaw.  She opens her 
          mouth to scream and it slides around her face. 

                                          GARET 
                         Tina! 

          She bites down hard and blood oozes from the branch.  An 
          unholy screech of pain shakes the wall and causes both 
          men to lose their grip and slide down the wall. 

          The branch shrieks with pain as it unwinds around her 
          body and drops her down through the clouds. 


          ON THE GROUND 

          Limbs and debris shower onto Vince who hunkers down, gun 
          drawn upward, unloading shot after shot. 

          From the clouds Jarnell slides down the wall and Garet is 
          soon to follow.   

          The sound of a scream precedes Tina spilling from the 
          clouds.  She crumples Vince under her weight and knocks 
          his head on a rock and breaking his neck. 

          Jarnell eases up with a groan.  He sees Tina laying over 
          Vince. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Tina! 

          He crawls over to her.  She moans a little as she comes 
          to.  They both glance at the man underneath her. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         This is the guy from the diner.  What's 
                         he doing out here? 

                                          GARET 
                         Target practice. 

          They both look over to where he's sprawled on the ground.  
          Blood spills from a bullet hole in his side. 

                                          TINA
                         Oh my God.   

          Tina and Jarnell scramble to where Garet lays, and he 
          holds a hand to the wound. 

                                          TINA
                         What are we gonna do now? 

                                          GARET 
                         You gotta go on.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Not a chance.   

                                          TINA
                         Splitting up is suicide. 

                                          GARET 
                         No, taking me with you is suicide.  
                         I'll slow you both down.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         I can carry you, man.  I've done it in 
                         every football game, I can do it now. 

                                          GARET 
                         No.  I'll lose too much blood and be 
                         dead anyway.  If this guy's here, then 
                         maybe there's someone else.  Go find 
                         them, then come back for me.   

                                          TINA
                         What if...? 

          She doesn't finish, but they all know what she means. 

                                          GARET 
                         Gimme his gun.   

          Jarnell grabs the gun and gives it to Garet.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         I don't like leavin ya.   

                                          GARET 
                         Yeah, well I'm not that crazy about it 
                         either.  But what other choice do we 
                         have? 

          Jarnell nods.  He reaches out a hand and they do a buddy 
          handshake. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Stay breathin, man.   

                                          GARET 
                         You too. 

          Tina says nothing as Jarnell lumbers to his feet.  They 
          take off into the trees in the opposite direction. 


          IN SAM'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          The loon screeches again.  Sheryl glances at Sam 
          nervously. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         So this legend.  This creature sounds 
                         pretty much impossible to kill.   

          Sam makes a knick on a tree with the knife he wears on 
          his hip. 

                                          SAM 
                         That'd be my guess. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         So how exactly are we supposed to kill 
                         it, Sam? 

                                          SAM 
                         Dunno.  Grandma never got to that part. 

          Sam puts another mark on another tree. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         What are you doing? 

                                          SAM 
                         Marking the way.  Don't wanna get lost, 
                         do you? 

          She shakes her head and follows him further into the 
          forest. 

          Back on the tree: blood oozes from the mark. 


          IN JARNELL'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Tina follows a sullen Jarnell. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         This is some fucked up shit.  That's 
                         what this is.  

          She says nothing. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I've lost all my friends and I'm out 
                         here with fuck knows what all.  And I 
                         ain't got nothin.  Not even a gun.   

                                          TINA
                         You got me. 

          He glances at her.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         No play? 

          She shakes her head.   

                                          TINA
                         No play.   

          She walks over to him and puts her hand in his.   

                                          TINA
                         We're in this together.  All the way. 

          He touches her face where the blood has dried.  He gives 
          her a small smile, which she returns.   

          They continue on. 


          BACK AT THE WALL 

          Garet sits up, his hand cupped to his side where the 
          bloody wound is.  He breathes heavily and watches the 
          woods through heavy hooded eyes.   

          The woods seem to warp and spin. 

          A figure moves in the distance.   

          He aims the gun, but does so weakly.  When he does speak, 
          it's in gasping breaths. 

                                          GARET 
                         Who's there? 

          The figure moves further into view.  It sways and 
          staggers. 

          As it moves from the shadows, Garet peers to see and he 
          catches a glimpse of bare female legs and white panties. 

                                          GARET 
                         Cathy? 

          Cathy stumbles toward him and falls to her knees close 
          by.  Her hair tangles over her face and he reaches up a 
          hand to smooth it.   

                                          GARET 
                         Oh baby. 

          She groans.  Tears run down his face. 

                                          GARET 
                         I thought I lost you.   

          She inches forward on her hands and knees.  She straddles 
          his legs and leans against him.   

                                          GARET 
                         I love you.  I love you.  I love you. 

          She moves his hand away from the wound and blood pumps 
          steadily from it. 

          He cups her face with his bloody hand and pulls her close 
          for a kiss. 

          Their lips meet, a small kiss.  He opens his mouth under 
          hers and as her face lifts away we see a long, unhuman 
          tongue protrude from her lips and disappear into his 
          mouth. 

          His eyes widen as he chokes on her tongue.  Their eyes 
          meet.   

          Her eyes are vacant and black. 


          IN SAM'S PART OF THE WOODS 

          Sheryl follows Sam as he marks the different trees.  They 
          head up a small hill and he sends out an arm to hold her 
          back.   

          She looks down at the ravine below them.   

          Just off to the side is Rick's discarded body and a half 
          eaten Sheriff McFarlane. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Dear Jesus... 

                                          SAM 
                         I think we should go back to the truck. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         No!  My husband's out here.   

          He nods and guides her away from the carnage and further 
          into the forest. 


          DIRT ROAD  

          Tina and Jarnell make it out of the forest. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Was it just me or did that seem shorter 
                         on the way out? 

                                          TINA
                         It must be close to daylight now. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         So? 

                                          TINA
                         So that's when we got out of this place 
                         last time.  It's like this place 
                         shrinks before daylight and disappears 
                         altogether when the sun comes up. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         After the night we've had, I'm ready to 
                         believe just about anything. 

                                          TINA
                         Do you believe that our chariot awaits? 

          He gives her a puzzled glance.  She points to the beat up 
          old truck sitting just behind their car. 

          They race toward it. 


          EXT. RUSTY SPOON DINER - NIGHT 

          A loaded down station wagon pulls into the parking lot.  
          The lights are still on and the open sign is flipped 
          over. 

          Haggered Husband gets out of the car, Weathered Wife 
          yawns as she follows.   

          She opens the car to the backseat where Bratty Kids both 
          sleep. 

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         Come on.  Time to wake up.  Your 
                         brilliant father has decided we have to 
                         hit the road at the ass crack of dawn 
                         and needs a cup of coffee.  That means 
                         we have to eat breakfast no matter if 
                         we're hungry or not. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         Or you could stay in the car.  I'd 
                         enjoy the time alone. 

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         It was your idea to drive across the 
                         country, wise guy. 

          They continue to argue as they walk to the door.  The 
          kids whine and rub their eyes as they follow. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         You know, I've about had enough of your 
                         mouth. 

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         You haven't even begun to hear my 
                         mouth. 

          He pulls the door, but it's locked.   

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         You gotta be kidding me. 

          He tries it again, but the door won't budge.  He pounds 
          on the door.   

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         Hello?  Hey, your sign says open.  
                         Hello? 

          Weathered Wife sends him an angry glance before ushering 
          the kids now in the middle of a sleepy tantrum back to 
          the car. 

          He turns to follow. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         I suppose this is my fault.  Does that 
                         sign say open or doesn't it? 

          She climbs into the car and says nothing. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         You won't hurt my feelings with the 
                         silent treatment.  I wish you had 
                         gotten mad at me sooner. 

          He gets in the door and slams the door behind him.   


          EXT. WALL OF TREES - NIGHT 

          Sam and Sheryl come upon the bodies of Cathy and Garet.  
          Vince's is no where to be found.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         Oh dear God.  What is this thing? 

          They hear a groan from the trees. 

                                          SAM 
                         Hello?  Who's there? 

          Vince falls out of the shadows.   

                                          SHERYL 
                         Vincent Albert Finn! 

          She rushes to catch him, and Sam rushes to help. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Oh thank God you're all right.   

          She hugs him. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         You son of a bitch, I dunno what I 
                         would have done without you.  Don't 
                         ever scare me like that again. 

          She pulls back and looks into his face.  His eyes burn 
          black. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         Oh my God... 

          Sam reaches for her but Vince effortlessly knocks him 
          back several feet.   

          He opens his mouth and screeches.  Sheryl squirms to get 
          free. 

          As Vince and Sheryl struggle, Sam inches forward 
          unnoticed and then plants his knife firmly into Vince's 
          foot.   

          He screams again in agony and thrusts Sheryl away to 
          concentrate on Sam.   

          With stilted movements he reaches down and pulls the 
          knife from his foot and advances on Sam.   

          Sheryl shakes her head and cries as she points the gun at 
          her husband. 

                                          SHERYL 
                         I'll shoot, I swear to God I'll shoot. 

          But she doesn't shoot.   

                                          SAM 
                         Shoot im, Sheryl!  It's not Vince! 

                                          SHERYL 
                              (tearfully) 
                         But it looks like Vince... 

          Vince and Sam struggle.   

                                          SAM 
                         Sheryl... please... 

          She waivers as Vince plunges the knife into Sam's chest.   

          Sam falls away.  Sheryl cries harder.   

          Vince turns to her.  His eyes fall back in his head and 
          red and pink liquid bubbles from his mouth and he 
          convulses.   

          The skin on his scalp tears apart as a creature much 
          taller and bigger than Vince emerges from the skin.   

          Sheryl stumbles back, drops the gun and grabs her chest.  
          She gasps and falls over on her back.  The seven foot, 
          pink and bloody creature looms over her. 

          With one final gulp of air, Sheryl drops to the side in a 
          lifeless lump.   


          EXT. DIRT ROAD - NIGHT 

          The engine sputters to life and the hood of the truck 
          slams shut, Tina wipes her hands on her skirt and heads 
          around to the passenger side. 


          INSIDE THE TRUCK 

          Jarnell sends her a glance. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         You are handy. 

                                          TINA
                         He was a bastard, but I did learn a lot 
                         from dear ol dad. 

          They laugh and pull onto the road.  Up ahead they finally 
          see the end of the forest just a few miles up.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         This doesn't feel right.  Us leavin.   

                                          TINA
                         This time we know where to come.  We 
                         have to go to town and get help before 
                         daylight.   

          They both sigh and make a beeline. 

          Just before they hit the end of the woods, Garet stumbles 
          out into the road.   

                                          TINA
                         Oh my God! 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Not again! 

          The truck screeches to a halt.   


          BACK OUT ONTO THE ROAD 

          Tina and Jarnell hop out and rush around to where Garet 
          slumps on the road.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Garet! 

                                          TINA
                         Are you okay? 

          Garet groans.  The wound on his side no longer bleeds.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         Come on, man.  We got a truck.  There's 
                         the exit.  Let's get outta here. 

          Tina takes one side, Jarnell the other.  Garet makes a 
          gutteral noise as he is hoisted up.   

          She turns to look at him and sees his black eyes.  She 
          backs away with a sharp cry.   

                                          JARNELL 
                         What's wrong with you, girl? 

          She shakes her head, unable to speak.  She just backs 
          away.  He carries Garet toward the truck, speaking as he 
          goes. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         See, now I knew you was playin.  Once a 
                         hustler, always a hustler. 

                                          TINA
                         Jarnell, no! 

          Jarnell lifts Garet up into the truck's passenger seat. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         What's wrong with you?  There's room 
                         for everybody.   

          Her hand trembles as she points at Garet.  Jarnell 
          hesitates a moment, then slowly turns his eyes toward 
          Garet and his black eyes. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Fuck this shit! 

          He tries to bail but Garet holds him back in a death 
          grip.  Tina screams. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         Run! 

          She shakes her head. 

                                          JARNELL 
                         I said go!  Get out of here! 

          She instead runs toward them and tries to separate them.  
          Garet knocks her back and the two men twist and turn over 
          the road.   

          Pink now streaks the sky.

          Tina runs at them again, Garet has now almost strangled 
          Jarnell. 

                                          JARNELL 
                              (gasps) 
                         Get out.  While you can. 

          His eyes close and he slumps in Garet's arms.   

          She backs away, she shakes her head and sobs.  When Garet 
          releases Jarnell and starts to approach, she turns and 
          runs into the exit of the woods, just mere feet away. 


          EXT. HIGHWAY - DAYBREAK 

          Tina darts out into the highway right in front of the 
          station wagon. 

          The car hits her and swings into the entrance of the 
          woods. 

          Her body slumps off the hood.   

          Haggard Husband jumps out of the car, Weathered Wife not 
          far behind.   

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         I told you to watch where you were 
                         going! 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         She appeared out of no where.  It ain't 
                         like I got a crystal ball. 

          They kneel toward her.  They inspect the bloody clothes, 
          the white streaks in her hair, the muddy scratched feet. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND
                         This is that girl from the diner 
                         yesterday.  

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         Is she dead? 

          He gives her a look before reaching out a head for her 
          pulse. 

          A defeaning thundering screech reverberates over the 
          surroundings and both the husband and wife back away, 
          hands over their ears.  It takes a moment to die away. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         What the hell was that? 

          Tina groans. 

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         Oh my God, she's alive. 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         Help me get her up. 

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         What are we going to do with her? 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         Take her back to town.  What is it?  
                         Like twenty five, thirty miles away? 

                                          WEATHERED WIFE 
                         Where are we going to put her?  On the 
                         hood? 

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         The kids can scoot over.  It's not like 
                         she's as big as a house.  She's not 
                         your mother. 

          This time she gives him a look, but says nothing as she 
          bends to help them.   

          They help the barely conscious girl to the car and set 
          her in the back seat. 


          IN THE CAR 

          Haggered Husband gets in after Weathered Wife.   

                                          HAGGERED HUSBAND 
                         Look at it this way.  The diner might 
                         be open.  The sun's coming up. 

          He motions out the windshield.  The car sits where the 
          road used to be, but is now gone, as are Garet and 
          Jarnell and the truck.   

          All there are are trees, and the sun peaking through. 


          EXT. THE HIGHWAY - CONTINUOUS 

          The station wagon turns around and heads back in the 
          direction from which it came.   

          It merges onto the highway and speeds up along the road.  
          A sign reads: CHENOQUAH - 28 MILES  

          CLOSE ON THE BACK WINDOW: Tina leans her head against the 
          glass, her eyes closed.   

          They snap open. 

          They're coal black. 

          FADE TO BLACK 


                      
                                                        


                                      


                                      

                                                                    
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