Heart of Kaos
Poems
Ignored
the day is almost here
never thought I'd get there
one step felt like ten
you treadted me so unfair

i always aimed to please
smiled as i went on ignored
carried on when i was crying
but leaving i couldn't afford

my life has really changed
not that you'd ever know
never heard my pain
now i just have to go

I've nothing left to lose
gotta follow my heart
take a chance at life
now it's back at the start
2006-08-07 16:34:08 GMT
Comments (2 total)
Author:Anonymous
Quite sad this one aswell, but it's good. It shows your feelings and gets the point across clearly.

x
--Laura
2006-08-07 18:50:51 GMT
Author:Anonymous
I think this was really good, just like the other ones! It's difficult to write something different on each comment, they're all GOOD!
xx
--> Nina
2006-10-11 14:57:54 GMT


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