Heart of Kaos
Poems
loser
this is more than i can take
is there anything left to break
what happens when i am all gone
nothing left, just you all alone

just doesn't make sense at all
why did you cause yourself to fall
wasted a year or more in pain
what exactly did you hope to gain

You're just a coward and afraid
maybe my loyalties were mislaid
You say now that you felt the same
doesn't change that you're to blame

Maybe now I am seeing the real you
the blinkers are off and i have a clue
you just played me in a hurtful game
your the loser and I'm not so tame
2006-07-31 20:09:12 GMT
Comments (4 total)
Author:Anonymous
Ooh you were right I do like it very much indeed. Are you saying what I'm thinking your saying after reading that?

xx
--Frances
2006-07-31 20:40:27 GMT
Author:Anonymous
oh my gosh hunnie,
that is truely amazing,
and fits so well with what im feeling right now,
=]
youre really really talented love
<3!
--libbie
2006-07-31 20:49:52 GMT
Author:Anonymous
Amazing, just like the rest.
I also like the way this one rhymes. =]
Very good, keep writing.

x
--Laura
2006-08-02 14:42:38 GMT
Author:Anonymous
A very good one
xx
--> Nina
2006-10-11 14:48:37 GMT


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