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   Let’s talk now about choice. Let’s talk now about necessity. Let’s talk now about pain, pride, love, hate, PSI, physicals, glory and defeat. Let’s talk now about

 

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5. Tracy vs. Paula  (101)

By James

 

   I’m not looking to start tooting my own horn, but judging from the response to Part IV, I figured there might be a less than royal reception from some 101 fans if this one wasn’t included.

   In retaliation to an attack on Twoson by the new leadership of Onett, Princess Paula confronts Tracy alone in Onett’s royal castle, and after a few words, the swords start swinging. Neither girl holds anything back; it doesn’t matter to Paula that Tracy’s apparently gone mad; it doesn’t matter to Tracy that Paula’s got every right to be ticked off. Perhaps surprisingly, it seems to be an almost even fight, and as it nears its end, the possibility of a rematch starts to look less and less likely. As it concludes, there’s only one sister left standin’.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

4. Destined Ones vs. Gabrielle  (EarthBound: The Horsemen Saga)

By Heartslaught

 

   Oh, how the mighty have fallen.

   Just one of the impressive battles to occur near the story’s zenith, this one takes place during the "Battles of the Archangels" arc, in which the heroes are determined to find weapons needed to vanquish the Horsemen of Apocalypse. Much to their frustration, however, they’re faced with incredibly strong guardians who end up presenting them with trials.

   Earlier on, Dave and Tom were confronted by a teenage-looking girl named Nyxx—quite possibly the single most powerful character in EarthBound: The Horsemen Saga. Put simply, she couldn’t be defeated…and she was a pacifist.

   Things are nearly as difficult when a group of the others—namely Mike, Nolan, and Ryan—come across a similar girl named Gabrielle, who’s not quite as hesitant in taking the offensive. What follows is one of the more epic group-against-the-super-tough-opponent struggles since the final days of Mother Alternate.

   After a lot of back-and-forth, one of the Destined Ones finally realizes the extent of what he’s really up against—and it’s a very painful lesson. Gabrielle flattens weapons-expert Nolan with an assault of Starstorm Omega, then unleashes a Fate called Gravity Shockwave, an attack that not only knocks her opponent out but breaks several of his bones in the process.

   Apparently dying, Nolan is only saved by a well-timed Horn of Life. As Mike turns and realizes the test has gone too far, he charges his foe in a rage, hitting Gabrielle with a barrage of strikes, pulling and swinging twin blades, and even augmenting his speed to intensify the attack. But Gabrielle endures, and there comes a time when Mike’s old weakness to hard-hitting physicals gets the better of him, as a well-placed one from his opponent eventually knocks him out of the air—and keeps him on the ground.

   While Mike lies in silence, only Ryan stands against the powerful guardian, and though he prepares to offer the same effort as his comrades, things start looking down once again when Gabrielle unveils yet another new move.

   As the attack flies at the last remaining Destined One, an uncertain moment begins. Can Ryan stop it? Will he really fall as well…or is there something Gabrielle failed to notice a moment ago?

 

 

 

  

 

 

 

3. Chosen Four vs. Koga  (EarthBound 200X)

By Flying Zamboni 2

 

   While conducting a search of Peaceful Rest Valley, Ness, Paula, and Jeff come across a battered Poo, lying unconscious in the stream after barely surviving the events of a conspiracy against him. Realizing he needs more help than they can provide, the three are about to take the prince to a hospital when suddenly, a knife flies through the air, heralding the arrival of Koga—the boy sent to finish the job.

   To be blunt, the short and sweet battle that comes next absolutely rocks. Exciting for its flair and style, engaging for its well-balanced mood (full of slick counters and quiet stare-downs), this scrimmage is also cool due to the little story-related hints surrounding it, making things not quite as simple as one might first expect.

   "Forgive me," says the scythe-wielding Koga, "but I have no alternative."

   Maybe that’ll change, but until then, bring it.   

 

 

 

       

    

 

 

2. SANCTUARY vs. Strong  (E. Revolution)

By Giampi

 

   Almost from the start, we knew there was a possible mole in SANCTUARY. On this day, the agency finally learned this individual’s identity.

   Following the advent of the newly developed PSI augmentation process, Strong reveals his true intentions by attacking one of two scientists to pressure the other into activating the required device. Just as he seems to be getting his way, he sees Jeff and Paula arrive across the room, and lashes out. The resulting struggle unveils Strong as yet another Giygas-possessed opponent, which finds everyone present needing the help of SANCTUARY’s newest member.

   Upon entrance, Ness doesn’t pull any punches, sending Strong crashing against the ceiling with a psychokinetic wave, and soon locking into a test of psychic strength with his foe while trying to shield Paula at the same time. Amidst a sense of desperation and confinement, the excitement builds as Paula herself becomes involved, a surprise pops up, and someone’s life appears to undergo a major change before it ends.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. Heroes vs. Kaatz and Giaguo  (EB: 202X)

By INouveaux18

 

   This showdown was a long time coming in 202X, a momentary culmination of several story elements that were both character- and plot-driven—including the mysterious power of Zain; the fabled strength of Karen; the enigmatic number added to the name Giygas; a rather disturbing possibility concerning Kaatz, and the bonds between certain heroes growing even more touching during the briefest of moments. All the while, things are driven by action, action, action.

   For 24 installments, the members of the Chosen Eight had roamed about—looking for Sanctuaries, smacking down most enemies who got in the way, and learning of their respective histories and collective destiny. Come Part 25, several of them are finally confronted by the alien leader, Giaguo, who’s joined by Kaatz—who some members of the group had met previously in battle. The response: a succession of melees in which brave heroes rise to the occasion in constant defense of each other, all amidst a remarkable struggle of PSI and swordplay. As the battle takes its toll on both sides, it becomes quite clear that the arrogant Kaatz—who didn’t have quite as much trouble last time—won’t be allowed to leave this struggle as well-off as before. And as things come to a head, it’s also quite clear that this will be one of the most memorable battles in all of "EarthBound" fanfiction.  

 

           

 

 

 

 

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    These are the kinds of characters who stay in your thoughts after the last line. The ones you’re waiting to see mentioned again on your next reading (if it’s a serial). The ones who, simply put, do the legacy of "EarthBound" proud. And they’re not the only ones, but they are indeed among the most noticeable.

   There are always two pools to choose from when putting together a cast—Original, and Author Character.

   The fine art of crafting an AC for the mythology of "Mother" has seen many successes over the years and is being refined to this day, from intense vagabonds to unusual brooders to radical newcomers like Miles Gravin. New spins on old favorites continue to entertain, and with both character categories, the Neo-"EarthBound" revolution has thrived.

   Now then, in case they’ve forgotten, shall we show Nintendo how it’s done?      

 

 

 

 

PROTAGONIST

Of The Year

 

Colin Strife  (EarthBound: Simple Gifts)

Created by Kent Bogar

 

   When Paula needed a hero to come to Ness’s aid, there could be only one choice: the skilled, courageous Colin Strife. He showed us just why he was famous before the War Against Giygas by flying across the country with little hesitation when needed, and later, by displaying some amazing abilities in battle (he can see situations in slow motion and counter before opponents have a chance). All the while, he’s there providing encouraging motivational support for Ness, while trying quite hard to remember his feelings for the girlfriend he left behind when tempted by the sight of another. Definitely a moral figure worth watching.

 

 

 

 

ANTAGONIST

Of The Year

 

Tracy  (101)

 

   Again, not to get all self-congratulatory but…come on. Princess Tracy of Onett stole the throne, incarcerated her brother, apparently executed her parents, and attempted to conquer another kingdom all within 24 hours. Not only that, but she presented all challengers with a highly dangerous reception in the time that followed, and remained eerily apathetic throughout. Of course, there was more to be found beneath the surface, but overall, Tracy was one of the last characters to want to tangle with during 2004.   

 

 

 

 

AUTHOR CHARACTER

Of The Year

Male

 

Miles Gravin  (Close to the Edge)

Created by Kumguats

 

   One of Ness’s parents wanted him to be a thoughtful, strong boy, and if you’re looking for someone else who fits that description, turn to Miles Gravin. But don’t ask if his parents had anything to do with it. After all, he doubts that the mom and dad he has are even his real folks. That’s just one interesting thing about the constantly training, philosophy-writing protagonist of Close to the Edge.

 

 

 

 

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Female

 

Angela  (EarthBound Omega)

Created by Bouvier21

 

   20 years after the events presented in the game, the Chosen Four’s heroics have become legendary. One of their biggest fans is Angela Barker, a kind, PSI-gifted girl in Threed who wants to do some adventuring herself someday, and gets the chance when an old friend comes knocking on the door with a problem. With telepathy and the ability to fly on her side, she’s one of the most intriguing characters yet in EarthBound Omega.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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   So the moment arrives. Resist any urge to skip ahead.

   Among others, 2003 brought us 202X, The Coming Darkness, and EarthBound: The Perpetual Adventures. In 2004, there were once again many great nominees for this category (can we say Unusual Species? How ‘bout Close to the Edge? Mother: The Complete and Documented Story? Etc.), so narrowing it down was indeed a challenge. The three leading the pack are as follows. Congrats to everyone who created a story this past year, but the real ones who deserve congratulations are us readers. Thanks to our fellow "EarthBound" fans, we’re the ones who benefit, so be sure to let ‘em know.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. EarthBound Omega

By Bouvier21

 

   And so the end begins. EarthBound Omega was the other big tale of tomorrow during 2004, a saga of teenage wanderers with budding PSI powers, and the violent antagonists who are searching for them and their retired predecessors—all on the verge of an apparent new conflict between freedom and oppression.

   The fanfic opened with somewhat humble beginnings that revealed only a little of the engaging treat to come, but by Parts 3, 4, and 5, the good writing—and sometimes surprising moments of action—left readers with a lot of reason to keep following the exploits of disciplined Mako, mysterious Trevor, driven Kayla, courageous Brian, well-trained Robert, and longtime Chosen Four fan Angela. Just as she flies after a squad of cyborgs in hopes of finding out where they’re heading, EarthBound Omega was tempting to follow for the very same reason.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. The Rush

By Michael DePalma, Fabricati Diem, Flying Zamboni 2, and Javer

 

   Just how many good things can be said about The Rush? Great concept, great dialogue, great moments (including the touching Chosen Four reunion in Scene 16), and—this is one of the parts that really stands out—great characterization. And if you’ve read it, you know that last one doesn’t necessarily refer to the Chosen Four.

   What are the effects that years of loneliness and brooding can have on a young man?

   If you’re a certain youngster called Apple Kid, then you enter a period of meekness and pessimism, overly surprised by any sign of things looking up. After all, "there are people whose failures are as grand as their successes and Apple Kid was the other kind."

   If you’re a certain youngster called Picky, you enter a stage of detachment and cynicism, spending your days pounding away at a punching bag in what’s probably the most fascinating point of your fanfic career.

   Then there are the other personal matters at hand, such as the consequences of getting swept up in the moment while allowing the heart to take command—something many of us can probably relate to. And as reality kicks in during the aftermath, certain issues begin to arise. In this case, "Not the issues of love, just the issues of marriage."

   Planned since last fall, announced in early summer, and released just recently, The Rush lived up to the hype and presented a slick, humorous, and oh-so engaging tale of a 1920s incident reemerging to make a difference in certain people’s lives today. But will the changes be for the better or worse?

   That breeze you feel is several "EarthBound" fans rushing to their computers to find out.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. EarthBound: Simple Gifts

By Kent Bogar

 

   In EarthBound: Simple Gifts we find a rather unique approach—a retelling of the game’s story with author characters included—that ends up as a winning formula due to some very heartfelt writing.

   In general, it’s usually a fun read when following a well-known "EarthBound" happening or two in a fanfic, but it’s not often that we’re treated to the kind of insight that was offered here during Paula’s stay of captivity in Happy Happy Village. Observe the various emotions that blossom as she counts down the hours until her slated execution. Witness the desperation as she nearly escapes and regretfully kills two of her captors in the process. Witness the frustration as she begins questioning why things have turned out the way they have and why it’s her of all people who’s in this situation. Witness the panic as she starts breaking down…shortly before there’s a hopeful sight at the door.

   Is it strong on action? Oh yeah. Simple Gifts boasts a few memorable fight scenes, including the exceptionally tense battle that breaks out with Carpainter and co. during the rescue attempt, and Colin showing us what he can do by single-handedly taking on around 30-40 Sharks in a well-detailed melee.

   While some of its original characters may still be getting there as far as making us take interest in them personally, Simple Gifts does indeed feature a likable enough cast due to some lively dialogue—not to mention some enticing possibilities being hinted at, such as Colin’s at-home girlfriend Casey expressing concerns over whether he’ll remain faithful…right around a time when Colin’s starting to wonder that himself in the face of Paula’s noticeable allure (and there’s also that whole matter with a certain lady in Threed…).

   As it’s an "EarthBound" story, the fanfic is not without humor. What happens when a certain telepath realizes a couple of guards are having naughty thoughts about her? They get a rather icy response. What happens when Adam comes through with another spectacular supply of weapons for our heroes? Kent replies, "I just wanna tell you I love you. In a distant, hands-off sort of way."

   On that note, the progression of this story itself is a well-balanced, smooth ride; the side-quests of the ACs here provide some interesting new spins on the familiar adventure playing out, while the parts that are unchanged generally move at a brisk pace, skipping some moments that don’t really need to be gone into. In other words, the story very much lives up to its name in this respect.

   It’s a morale-testing experience, writing an "EarthBound" fanfic, as very few of them are quick to get the public recognition they deserve. But as sleeper hits tend to be, Simple Gifts was, by consequence, a treasure just waiting to be found—one of the top "EarthBound" stories of 2004 and one of the most well-done retellings of the game to date.        

 

 

 

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