Preface to "The Examination"
���� I've pretty much always been a Libertarian.� In high school I got in trouble for merely referring to birth-control devices in an essay on the topic of Over-Population in the school newspaper.

���� And another of my student essays there titled "The Case Against Conformism" - was written at a time of life when most kids are jumping off cliffs to be like the other guys.

���� So you can imagine my reaction when I ran into the poem "The Examination" in college.� It has remained my all-time favorite poem both for content and style.� The poem is supposedly about the examination procedure for a college degree.� But it so well depicts the totalitarian types who would crush the individual down to the lowest common denominator - that I cannot help but love it.
BUNI

T H E��� E X A M I N A T I O N

by
W. D. Snodgrass

Under the thick beams of that swirly smoking light,
� The black robes are clustering, huddled in together.
Hunching their shoulders, they spread short, broad sleeves
�� like night-
Black grackle's wings and reach out bone-yellow leathery

fingers, each to each.  They are prepared.  Each turns
� His single eye - or since one can't discern their eyes,
That reflective, single, moon pale disc which burns
� Over each brow - to watch this uncouth shape that lies

Strapped to their table.  One probes with his ragged nails
� The slate-sharp calf, explores the thigh and the lean
�� thews
Of the groin.  Others raze, red as piratic sails,
� His wing, stretching, trying the pectoral sinews.

One runs his finger down the wheat of that cruel
� Golden beak, lifts back the horny lids from the eyes,
Peers down in one bright eye, malignant as a jewel,
� And steps back suddenly, 'He is anesthetized?'

'He is.  He is.  Yes.  Yes!'  The tallest of them, bent
� Down by the head, rises, 'This drug possesses powers
Sufficient to still all gods in this firmament.
� This is Garuda who was fierce.  He's yours for hours.

'We shall continue, please.' Now, once again, he bends
� to the skull, and its clamped tissues.  Into the cran-
ial cavity, he plunges both of his hands
� like obstetric forceps and lifts out the great BRAIN,

Holds it aloft, then gives it to the next who stands
� Beside him.  Each, in turn, accepts it, although loath,
Turns it this way, that way, feels it between his hands
� Like a wasps' nest or some sickening outsized growth.

They must decide what thoughts each part of it must think;
� They tap at, then listen beside, each suspect lobe,
Then, with a crow's quill dipped into India ink,
� Mark on its surface, as if on a map or globe,

The dangerous areas which need to be excised.
� They rinse it, then apply antiseptic to it.
And silver saws appear which, inch by inch, slice
� Through its ancient folds and ridges, like thick suet.

It's rinsed, dried, and daubed with thick salves.  The smoky
� saws
�� Are scrubbed, resterilized, and polished till they gleam.
The brain is repacked in its case.  Pinched in their claws,
� Glimmering needles stitch it up, that leave no seam.

Meantime, one of them has set blinders to the eyes,
� Inserted light packing beneath each of the ears
And caulked the nostrils in.  One, with thin twine, ties
� The genitals off.  With long wooden-handled shears,

Another chops pinions out of the scarlet wings.
� It's hoped that with disuse he will forget the sky
Or, at least, in time, learn, among other things,
� To fly no higher than his superiors fly.

Well; that's a beginning.  The next time, they can split
� His tongue and teach him to talk correctly, can give
him memory of fine books and choose clothing fit
� For the integrated area where he'll live.

Their candidate may live to give them thanks one day.
� He will recover and may hope for such success
He shall return to join their ranks.  Bowing away,
� They nod, whispering, 'One of ours; one of ours.  Yes.
�� Yessssssssss.'


Phi Beta Kappa poem, Columbia University, 1961



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