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Mr.
F and Bob Dylan are Cool as Hell
Spencer
Taylor
ENGL 1100.47
My favorite English teacher, Mr. F, taught
me in eleventh grade at Cardinal Gibbons High School in
Raleigh, North Carolina. He was more that just an ordinary
teacher to me because he not only taught me how to be a
better writer, but also changed the way I look at literature,
like poetry, plays, and song lyrics. One of the main ways
he influenced me was in the way I write. By telling me not
everything has to go by a certain formula and encouraging
me to try new styles of writing, he let me know that it
is okay to write in my own style.
Every day when I came into class, there would be a topic
on the blackboard that he wanted the class to write about.
There was no specific way he wanted us to write. We could
write free-verse poetry, dialog between people, a play,
song, or anything someone wanted. By doing this assignment
every day, I noticed that I got more comfortable with writing,
and it became easier to put down on paper what I had in
my head. Another way Mr. F helped me get more comfortable
writing papers was by giving assignments with a wide range
of topics to choose from. This would mean that I could write
about something that I was interested in. It is always easier
and more fun to do a paper on something I care about because
it does not seem as much like work when I actually have
something to say about the topic. Even if I do not know
that much about the topic, if I am interested in the subject,
I enjoy learning more about it.
The
most obvious way my English teacher influenced the way I
write was by teaching better grammar. He spent a fourth
of the year on it, and even though I am still not too good
at grammar, it did help a lot. There was also a huge amount
of time spent on sentence structure and condensing our thoughts.
We would be given a full page of sentences and have to shorten
them to as few words as possible. This was a fun game that
helped me to have more substance in my papers and less "filler."
Again, even though I still have a lot of filler, it is better
that it was before.
Mr. F not only influenced the way I write, but also how
I feel about writing. Before, I hated any kind of writing,
and I still hate writing papers, but now, after having Mr.
Freidman as a teacher, I have found a new interest in poetry.
He loved poems a lot and would read them to the class on
a weekly basis. I had never listened to poetry before, and
they had always seemed stupid to me, probably because my
teachers before never read poems that I could relate to.
After listening to a few of Mr. F’s favorite poems,
I found myself wanting to read, and possibly even write,
more poems. I had never before written poems just for fun.
During the writing process, I realized that it was, in some
ways, therapeutic and relaxing. Now, sometimes when I am
bored or in a bad mood, I will actually write some poetry
or songs, all thanks to my eleventh grade English teacher.
My newfound love of poetry made me broaden my musical interests
as well. Before, I would only listen to the beat of the
music and how good the artist's voice was, but now I find
the lyrics to be far more meaningful. My favorite days in
that English class were the ones when Mr. F would bring
in some of his music and pass out the lyrics. He would mainly
bring in CDs from musicians like Bob Dylan and Neil Young.
Then, after he played the songs, we would interpret what
the artist was trying to say to the listener. Now, I can
see why some writers like Shakespeare and Dylan are said
to be so talented, and I can appreciate them more. I think
these lessons are the reasons why I am so into music lyrics
now, and why I like Bob Dylan. Because Mr. F introduced
me to Dylan, he can take some credit for the effects Bob
has had on me.
No matter the situation the listeners find themselves in,
there is always one of Dylan’s songs that make it
seem like he was in the exact same situation when he wrote
that song. For example, after my boss has been an ass, I
can listen to "Maggie's Farm" when I get home
and somehow when I hear the words
I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no more.
No, I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no more.
Well, I try my best
To be just like I am,
But everybody wants you
To be just like them.
They sing while you slave and I just get bored.
I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no more.
it just seems to make things better because I know that
I am not the only one who has felt that way about work.
One of my favorite lines in all of his songs that always
makes me feel good when I hear it is, "Don't think
twice it's alright." It's simple, but it keeps me from
stressing out. It makes me feel like no matter how bad things
are, they will always get better. I know that this is not
how it is supposed to be taken, but when I take out of context,
that's how it is to me. I even used that for my senior quote
in the school yearbook. One of my favorite Dylan songs is
"Like a Rolling Stone." It is a rebellious song
that shoots down people who think they are better than others
just because they are rich, or something like that. When
I hear lines like
You've gone to the finest school all right, Miss Lonely
But you know you only used to get juiced in it
And nobody has ever taught you how to live on the street
And now you find out you're gonna have to get used to
it
You said you'd never compromise
With the mystery tramp, but now you realize
He's not selling any alibis
As you stare into the vacuum of his eyes
And ask him do you want to make a deal?
How does it feel?
How does it feel
To be on your own
With no direction home
Like a complete unknown
Like a rolling stone?
it makes me realize that I should never act like I am better
than anyone else, even if I think I am. Nobody likes people
like that, and just because they may have more money than
someone or a better education, it does not mean that they
can treat others like shit. Things can also change. You
never know if one day you will need their help on something.
So, by listening to this song, it makes me realize that
people should be nice to everyone, no matter the circumstances.
There is another Dylan song that is about dealing with people
who are not nice like they should be. It's called "Rainy
Day Women #12 & 35." When I first heard this song,
I did not understand what he meant by "getting stoned."
Now I know that he means getting criticized, and it all
makes sense now. The song goes like this:
Well,
they'll stone you when you walk all alone.
They'll stone you when you are walking home.
They'll stone you and then say you are brave.
They'll stone you when you are set down in your grave.
But I would not feel so all alone,
Everybody must get stoned.
After listening to it a few times, I finally got what he
was saying. No matter who you are, sometimes in your life,
you will have to deal with criticism. Dylan uses the word
"stoned" because he is relating the criticism
to how it was in Biblical times when people would get stoned
as a punishment for having done something wrong. It may
be because they are jealous or they are in a bad mood or
they are trying to help. It will happen to everyone, and
listening to this helped me to take criticism better because
it does not seem so personal. I do not even think Mr. F
knows how much of an influence Dylan has had on me, or even
that he was the one who introduced Dylan’s music to
me. I am glad he did, though, because Dylan is one of my
favorite artists now.
Mr. F did not only have a big influence on me because of
the things he did, but mainly how he did them. I think he
got me to pay attention and come to class because we had
a lot of things in common. It is easy to learn when a teacher
puts things in a way that students can relate to. For example,
we have the same kind of personality. Both of us are very
laid back and mellow. He would never raise his voice and
would not have to because he earned his respect from his
smarts and kindness. The cleverest idea he used to teach
his classes is be using music and movies to teach high school
kids rather than books. Nobody wants s to go to a class
and read from the book all day. I looked forward to his
class because we would listen to music that I would listen
to outside of class. I also think he had a big influence
on me because I went to a private school. That means he
had very little restriction in the ways he could teach us.
We were allowed to see movies and read books that public
school students would never be able to read, and Mr. F did
not have to go by such a strict curriculum. All in all,
he was, by far, my favorite teacher, and I am glad I got
the chance to write a paper on him.
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