Right now Debbie, Tesla, Randy, and Vlod are at the dance. Aparently Vlod has come up with some sort of food posining, how- I gess well never know. :> but An evil plot to take over the ten gardians has just started to form, and Atom, now finding out that his friends at school are the same ones who abandond him as Blue Flame, is in serch for some way to help his trobbled friends, Who seem to be turning more evil by the moment.
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(Still at dance- Vloid is still sick.)
Tesla- Hey guys, Im all alone now becausse, Atom had to go. Where's Vlod?
Randy- I think we accedently served him some punch.
*Hide out*
Caitlin is sitting all by herself in the hide out fliping fuoreusly through a magizeen, She sighs thinking to herself, STUPID BLUE FLAME! She stood up and began throwing darts. No sooner had she thrown the first dart then Blue Flame stuck his head in the door.
Blue Flame- Nice Shot! (He said admiring her bullseye, which had just missed his head.)
FireStar, who's costume had apered as soon as the door opend, blushed.
Fire Star- Your late! you Supsed to be hear an houer ago!
Blue Flame- Sorry I was a little tied up in, um in sort of Family buissness.
Fire Star- Family Buissnes? What kind of, 'family buissness... You minus well tell me, I 'can' read your mind.
Blue Flame- It's nothing, and you wont read my mind, unless you want to get torched (He created a blue ball of fire that hoverd gracfully in his right hand.)
Fire Star smiled but didnt read his mind.
Fire Star- why did you want to meet hear?
Blue Flame- There's a school dance tonight at tustin high.
FireStar- i know very well that theres a dance to night, you helped me set up the sprinklers for it. to bad nightstar wouldn't levitate me so i could set them off. i ended up haveing to use all that pickle juce as punch.
Blue Flame- i would have loved to see nightstar's face when she drunk that.
FireStar- so what about the dance?
Blue Flame- why arn't you there?
FireStar- something called pride. i've got to much. and i don't have a date.
Blue Flame- how many people asked you?
FireStar- (she reeled them off her fingers as she spoke fake names) timmy, bob, toby, rick, the entire football team, and a couple of band members.
Blue flame- well i guess none of them are as good as me.
FireStar- who ever said that? i just didn't want to go to the dance.
Blue Flame- (Blue Flame turned to leave) oh well, i guess i wasted my time.( he paused as his hand reached the door nob) hey FireStar you want to go to the dance with me?
FireStar- (rolls her eyes) why would i want to go there when im perfictly content here?
Blue Flame- (smiled slyly)i was hoping you would ask that, and ill answer it if...
FireStar- if what?
Blue Flame- (he leaned over her and pulled her to the center of the room) if you dance with me.
FireStar- (smiling) theres no music and i can't dance. (she protested lamely)
Blue Flame- (smiled and walked over to teslas new computer and in a few momments music was playing in soft verse.)
Blue Flame- ive seen you dance before.(he pulled her to him and they danced freely without knowlge that this was a drain storm or that they might be enemies one day. firestar held him close afraid to loose him because of some stupid prophocy. for her page two had said something extra. something she shuddered to think about.)
"two shall keep the power lasting, though some maybe unaware. if at a choice one is alone, the other lives in dispair"
(she felt her eyes prickle with tears, if she only knew who he really was she could protect him so much easer.
blue flame stoped danceing as her tears hit his shoulder.)
Blue Flame- what's wrong? did I step on your toes?
(firestar shook her head and couldn't help but smile.)
FireStar- it's just i don't want anything to happen to you. you lazy bum.
(she turned and sat on a chair. blue flame looked at the clock on the computer nervously.)
Blue Flame- i told you im not a lazy bum!(he yelled) i work hard and- (He stoped abruptly as if relising what he'd just said. Whell at the same time going three shaides pailler. Fire Star looked up as if remembering something, and glared at him whall reading his thoughts.
Blue Flame- Dont read my mind!!! (he yelled, but it was too late. Fire Star glared at him in uncontrolible anger.
Fire Star- How dare you!
(She had just finished reading his thoughts and relised who exactly he was.)
Blue Flames thoughts~ IM NOT ATOM!
Fire Star-( backing away) how could you? (She looked at him unbelievingly, his black eyes were watering.)
Blue Flames thoughts- Please dont leave me... I have no one left.
(Fore Star felt her bottem lip tremmble.)
Fire Star- I think your "dates" wateing for you "Blue Flame."
Blue Flame closed his eyes and tried to breath more calmly.
Fire Star- Did you know who I was?
Blue Flame- I ust figured it out.
Fire Star- WHEN!
Blue Flame shook is head.
Blue Flame- It doesnt matter, what matters is your friends are in troble and we need to stop it.
Frie Star- Why should I believe you?
Blue Flame-(Looked at the clock on the computer.) Because I couldnt, I didnt want to louse the friends I have legt because of something I did in another life, Please dont tell them. They wont let me near you if you tell them! and you know it!
Fire Star- How would I know I know aomething like that? I only do what my "MASTER" tells me to!
~Dance~
(Vlod still gone, Debbie and Randy are dancing. Tesla is dancing with some guy she met. When the room begins to tremble and the ground shakes.)
Tesla pulls away from the boy and grabs Debbie as the glass from the windows shater and two motercycle's rored inside.
~Hide out~
Blue Flame- I cant beieve you!
Fire Star- Me! your the one who's been lieing to me for a week!
Blue Flame - Lieing, what would you have done? Tell "master Night Star?"
Fire Star- "Misstress, and no! for your infromation I wouldnt have if you didnt want me to! But you had to be all secretive about it! You know what? Just Go! I dont want to speek to you!
Blue Flame- (rolls his eyes) Fine Don talk! but Im not leaving untill you come with me!
Fire Star- Fine then you can stay hear by yourself!
(She turned and ran out, Blue Flam ran after her.)
~Dance~
Tesla an Debbie have changed into Night Star and Morrning Star, after stealing away to the shadows.
The moterists are circling the dance floor around the gym.
Tesla grabs a flag pole near by and hands the other half of it to Debbie. Then they both run out and jump to eather side of the motercyclists- holding the bar between them.
Motercyclists- OUUFFFFF!
The bar hits both of them right in the gut and they are dismounted from there bikes, which hurl into the nearest wall.
Debbie runs up to the bigger on who tries to get up- she slams him to the ground with one kick. Tesla had gone over to the second one, who appeared to be a girl, and held the flag pole to her neck so she couldnt get up.
~Hide out~
Fire Star- Shutup Atom!
(Fire Star yelled as she coverd her ears)
Blue Flame- (getting lowder) JOHN JAKUP JINGLE HIMER SMIT! THATS MY NAME TOO! WHEN EVER I GO OUT THE PEOPLE ALWAYS SHOUT! THERE GOES JOHN JAKUP JINGLE HIMER SMIT!
Fire Star- SHUT UP ATOM!
Blue Flame- Thats not my name! JOHN JAKUP JINGLE HIMER-
Fire Star- BLUE FLAME!!!
Blue Flame-(stops singing) yes?
Fire Star- SHUTUP!!!!
Blue Flame- will you come with me?
Fire Star- YES! anything just shut up!
(Blue Flame smiles and pulls her hand.)
~School~
(Night Star just vilently pulled off the moterists helmet to reviele that the boy had blond hair and green eyes, but his face was covered with a silver mask that held a green leaf across the front. Tesla, who had done the same to the girl, had found she had blonde hair and hazel eyes. she too wore a black mask with the picture of a rose on it.)
Morning Star- night star... their... gaurdians.
Night Star- gaurdians?
(she glared down at the two of them with unknown hatred.)
Night Star- more like traders.
(the boy on the ground stared at her with hatred.)
Revolution- the name is revolution. (he spat) and your the traters!
Night Star- revolution? (he nodded) and who's your friend.
Revolution- hope spirit. we fight for earth and the beings on it. and we will KILL you!
Morning Star- why do you want us dead? were the good guys.
Hope Spirit- you can't trick us morning star. we know you helped blue flame kill blaze. and you were going to kill us too.
(night star rolled her eyes)
Night Star- i should have known that this had something to do with that idiot.
Blue Flame- did i came at a bad time?
FireStar- shutup blue flame.
Night Star- what are you doing here? (glares at him across the room. blue flame looks back at her.)
Blue Flame- im here because i wanted to save you. is that a bad thing?
Night Star- well as you can see we don't need your so called help.
(revolution grabbed night stars ankle and pulled her to the floor.)
Blue Flame- i see.
FireStar- i said shutup blue flame. (firestar smacks blue flame over the head.)
~hide out~
(The group is standing in the hide out circled around the two "traters" neather one of the two would say a thing. Fire Star felt a cense of dizzyness washover her. And by the look of it, Tesla had felt the ame thing she had. Fire Star moved to the corner qietly and picked up an old metal bace ball bat as Night Star yelled at the two Gardians.)
Night Star- Who do you think you are trying to kill us like that! You totally ruened the dance! And accusing us of being his friend! HOW DARE YOU! I told you he was No Good Fire Star! I told you to stay away from him!but no, you had to go off on your own!
Blue Flame- Hey watch it Night Star Lady! Why are you always so down on me? It was an accedent and if I didnt kill him he would have killed me!
Night Star- Better to die fighting then live a murderer.
Blue Flame- Im NOT a murderer. (his vioce was dangerously low and Night Star smiled, she was happy that dispit her nice streak that had happend to apeared that night, she was able to get on his nerves.
(SLAM!!! Night Star fell to the floor, Fire Star had hit her over the head with the metal bat! Morrning Star, right afterwards had slamed Night Star against the wall.
Fire Star looked down on Night Star with a look that was totaly different then any look she had given her before, a look that reminded Night Star of someone she'd seen before, someone from her past.)
Fire Star- You should have stayed home.( She hit Night Star over the head with such a force, that she was nocked unconcious.)
Morrning Star- Well Blue Flame, what do you have to say for yourself? I told you to stay away from them, to keep to your own business and out of mine! But you couldnt even do that. (Morrning Star lifted Blue Flame up and slamed him against the wall again. His head struck the stone and he let out a regretfull mone of pain.)
Blue Flame- WHO. ARE. YOU?
Fire Star- You know me, Blue Flame, think back, long ago, to when darkness ruled, before you and your gaurdians were reaquanted. Perhaps you dont remember me because we never met face to face.
Morrning Star- do you even know what you 'gardians' are supposed to be gaurding?
(Morrning Star and Fire Star were both speeking in the same tone, Atom new they had been posessed by something, it was speaking as one moveing back and forth from one of them to the other, He knew it couldnt be in both of them at once. Revolution, and Hope Spirit were both unconcious in a near by chair, no doubt nocked out from having too much power corsing through them at one time.)
Blue Flame- Of corse I know. We protect good people and pure souls from the demons and evil spirits that lie beyond the emortal gate.
Morning Star- And how exctly do you know such a tail, only those with the power of the god's, or the knowlage of them, truly know what you gaurd. The old gaurdians didnt even know, until I killed them. Alas, in a fight to the death with the last one, I too- NO!
Blue Flame- What?
Fire Star- Do you really think Im that stpid, I'v seen enough tv to know that the bad guy should never reveal any of his plans before he reveals his past first. It's improper.
Blue Flame- I thought it was you never reveal your plan, because thats the only way well learn how to defeat you, wasnt it?
Morrning Star- No! You fool, That rule is only for amitures who think there plan is perfect, however, I dont think that, I know it.
(Blue Flame rolled his eyes.
Debbie felt herself wake slowly, her head was in so much pain, what had happend?She looked up at Fire Star and Morning Star staying quiet, not wanting anyone to know she was awake untill she knew exactly what was happening.)
Fire Star- (As she hit's Blue Flame in the stomach with the metal bat.) I need to get through that gate. (hit's him again. Blue Flame groans.) SHUT UP! Im talking... Now where was I? Oh yes, I was just about to tell you what my plan is. But First, I wish to know why I can not go into you. Explane...
Blue Flame- I think you broke my spine.
Morning Star- Why cant I go into you?!!!
Blue Flame- ummmm, do you have any tylenal I think I'm bleading internaly in my brain. (Tesla kenetically smashed his head into the wall again.)
Blue Flame- enough with the beating me up already, Im NOT A PINYATA!!!
Morning Star- TELL ME WHY I HAVE NO POWER OVER YOU!!!
Blue Flame- YOU DO, YOU HAVE THE POWER TO BEAT THE HELL OUT OF ME!
Fire Star- TELL ME! (She hit him with such a force that the bat fell from her hands and claterd to the floor.)
Blue Flame- (breathing hard) I... dont... know...why.
Fire Star- Your telling the truth, I see it in your mind.
Blue flame- (struggling to speak) Couldnt you have done that in the first place?
(Debbie looked up at blue flame as FireStar picked up the bat. Morning Star suspended him in the air as if he realy was a pinyata. Night Star stood up. what had happened, she felt so weak, she didn't move but kept listening to what they were saying. they hadn't noticed she was up.)
FireStar- i told you not to interfear boy. (she raised the bat and stuck him in the stomach.) you should have listened.
Blue Flame- ouff, groan.
FireStar- but no you had to (hit) but in! and try to help them!
Blue Flame- your not firestar, but whoever you are (cough, groan) you wont last long against all of us!
(FireStar falls to the ground and passes out.)
Morning Star- what do you mean i wont last long? the gaurdians drop like flys against me and your all alone.
Blue Flame- then why havn't you taken me over? or night star for that matter?
Morning Star- i have plans for night star. but you, your different, your not human as far as i can tell. i have no power controlling you, your worthless. a flea on a dogs back. and once i have you all weak enough, night star will open the gate, and let me through. after all, you are the gaurdians of the gates and i am family.
(night star felt her mouth drop. no, it couldn't be, that bitch! she firmed her stance and balled her fists. she had a cut on her lip that was bleeding badly, but she ignored it. now things had gotten personal.
a slight wind had picked up, which was strange since they were underground. night star was calm and looked directly at the back of teslas head. her feet lifted off the floor, her powers seemed to flow throught her vains, and a light began to shine from somewhere in the room. a chain around her neck appeared with a silver star on it. then she could hear a small wisper as if someone was talking to her.)
small wisper- call the ancients by the word, the staff appears from which you know. let the words come, you'll know them well....
(her feet touched the floor and yet morning star still hadn't seen her. she touched her finger to her necklace.)
Night Star- i need you now. (she wispered. as if it had heard her the necklace disapeared into a band of glitter that floated around her, then it formed a long staff that fitted nicely in her hand. at the top of the black wood was a silver star with a crystal orb which had a mystical look to it. night star held her staff proudly, able to feel it's power in her hands. she look to see Morning star was about to flatten blue flame with the desk again.)
Night Star- NOOO!!!! (as if on command a strong wind picked up pushing the desk against the wall. morning star turned as a sort of frustrated fury in her look. blue flame looked up in surprise.)
Blue Flame- night star? i thought you hated me?
(night star wasn't listening, her eyes were glowing a strange silver, and her hair had also changed. it had gotten silver streaks through it.)
Morning Star- hello debbera.
Night Star- my Name is Night Star. im leader to the gaurdians of the gates.
Morning Star- let me cross then if you are what you say.
Night Star- i warn you only once. leave my friends alone.
Blue Flame- im your friend? i thought you hated me?
(FireStar came awake just enough to slap blue flame over the head and fall unconcious again. blue flame rubs his battered and brused head.)
Blue Flame- jeeze!
(he looks at firestar fearfully wondering if she is going to get up again. but relaxed when she didn't move. the other two took no notice.)
Morning Star- you don't have friends... you don't know what the meaning of the word friend is... let me cross and i'll teach you.
Night Star- i don't know who you are, and if you thing im letting you back your stupider than i thought.
(firestar starts to wake up but no one notices.)
Blue Flame- is stupider a word? (he scratches his head.
firestar wakes up totaly at that and stands up. she smacks blue flame so hard that she nocks him to the ground.)
FireStar- I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU TO SHUTUP!!!!!
Blue Flame- ERRRRR. WILL PEOPLE STOP BEATING ME UP!!
FireStar- would you shut up! their about to fight and your making stupid coments.
(blue flame stays on the floor because he can't do otherwise. he is to weak.)
Morning Star- very well, but think how happy you could be ruling by my side, father and daughter.
Blue Flame- did i miss something? (firestar kicks him.) humff
Morning Star- ill never leave you alone. ill be in your dreams till the day you die. let me back and it will all be over.
~Han'a High~
(in the library of the Japanese school called Han'a High, a young girl is studying for a test.)
young girl- (softly pounds her fist into the desk.) i don't understand!(she wispers loudly. another girl with chocolete brown hair is walking over to her as the blonde looks up at her) hey Kelly.
Kelly- hey Jayeta. you ok, you seem... angry.
Jayeta(young girl)- i just don't get this. trig just got a little confusing and im not taking it well.
Kelly- well i can't help you, i don't know the first thing about trigonomitry. my area is more in singing and writing. (kelly smiles at her friend.)
Jayeta- (smiles rufully back) i know. i'll get it... but it will take a while. by the way what are you doing for the dance this weekend?
Kelly- Shane asked me, (she rolls her eyes) finally, what about you.
Jayeta- i don't think im goi..n.....g. (she puts her hands to her head feeling a pulling effect on her magic. then she feels dizy.)
Kelly- hey are you ok jay?
Jayeta- (angrily) i thought i told you not to call me that.
(kelly shushed her friend.)
shush yourself. im going to kill my brother. i can't belive he just did that! GGRRRRRR. (jayeta grabs her stuff and walks rather clumsuly to the door. half waving to her friend and half trying to keep her balance.)
~outside Han'a High~
(jayeta sits behind a tree so no one would see or find her. she getts out a small miror and trys to scry her brother.)
Jayeta- my brother find, so i may see, what mess he has brought to me.
(the girl waits for her spell to take effect, but when a picture was supposed to form a swirl of colors came and the miror shattered. she jumped up away from the miror in shock.)
Jayeta- what have you gotten into brother? (she says softly before she collapses to the grass.)
~Back at the hide out~
Night Star- Let you back? I dont know who you are and your asking me to do something I would not even do for my father.
Blue Flame- didnt she just say she was your father?
FireStar- Hey I thought you were unconcious. SHUT UP ALREADY!
Blue Flame- (mumbling) ask me a question, then you dont even want the answer.
Night Star- I think it would be best if you left my friends body before you realy get hurt.
Morning Star- thats strange, i didn't know that you were a necromancer too.
Sea Spirit- she may not be but i am.
(both morning star and night star turned around to stare at the new person. the boy had light brown, spikey hair, he wore a blue and black mask with the picture of a rain drop on it. he was looking just above and behind morning star as if he saw someone or something night star couldn't see. he wore all black with small hints of blue in his cape lineing.)
Morning Star-who are you?
Sea Spirit- sea spirit and i believe your posessing the wrong person.
Blue Flame- hey! im the only guy super hero here! find your own girls to rescue!!
FireStar- (crosses her arms over her chest.) blue flame im warning you.......
Blue Flame- sorry! im sorry! gosh, can't blame a guy for trying.
FireStar- shutup!!!
Morning Star- what do you want with me?
Sea Spirit- speak to me yourself, i can hear you.
(morning star suddenly collapsed to the ground as if someone had dropped her like a rag doll.)
Night Star- who are you?
Sea Spirit- errrr. i already told you.
Night Star- well i missed it!
Sea Spirit- im sea spirit.
Night Star- oh.... and your here because?
Sea Spirit- errr, TO SAVE YOU FROM THE EVIL SPIRITS!WHY DO YOU THINK?!
Blue Flame- so basically he wants my job? (firestar hits blue flame) oww!
FireStar- i warned you. now i do worse to you if you don't stop making stupid comments!
(sea spirit looks at them strangly and night star follows his line of sight and shakes her head. sea spirit looks back to night star.)
Night Star- don't ask, just don't ask.
Blue Flame- hey were not that bad.
FireStar- ya, you gotta admit, the pickle juice was funny.
Sea Spirit- hu? pickle juice? (he thinks about the dance but says nothing.) hold on!
(a dark light appears in the center of the room where a tall man appears. firestar stared at him, he seemed to be giving off tons of negative vibes that vibrated. the man pointed at the desk in the corner which lifted up and zoomed tword firestar, who was pushed by blue flame, who got flattened against the wall, and passed out.
sea spirit looked as though he were a ghost himself. he was saying something under his breath and not moving.
firestar gets off the ground in time to see the flattened blue flame slide down the wall and hit the floor. she starts to run to him.)
FireStar-BLUE FLAME!! you idiot! why did you do that?!
(blue flame said nothing because he was just lying there.)
FireStar- (turned to the evil dude) you, you killed him.
Night Star- good ridence.
Sea Spirit- he's not dead, he just used too much energy. i'm surprised he's still alive.
~somewhere else~
(blue flame wakes to find himself in a black never ending place. he rubs his head as he trys to orient himself.)
Blue Flame- where am i?
(suddenly blue flame sees a girl with black and silver hair a little away from him. she groans but doesn't open her eyes. blue flame powers down.)
Atom- sis? is that you? ( he crawls over to the girl.) wow have you changed.
Jayeta- groans. ya, but so have you bro. ow,ow,ow,ow. my head. you didn't catch the lisence plate number on the bus that hit me did you? (she put the heels of her hands to her temples to try and stop the throbing.)
Atom- hey you ok?
Jayeta- (she glares at him) no, im not ok. and its because you insist on getting into trouble. man, it will take days to get back up to full strangth.(atom looks at her very confused.) what did you do this time to make yourself look like you just got beaten to death?
Atom- wait. you felt my pain?
Jayeta- yes, its the reason i collapsed outside my school too.
Atom- (looks around) where are we anyways? one minute im unconcious on the ground and then im here.
Jayeta- i think we created a privite mental plane for us to talk in when we were both knocked unconcious.
(she grimiced as fhe stood up still rubbing her fingertips to her temples. the pain was starting to slack off but it was still pretty strong.
atom followed her as she started walking feeling every hurt sting and stretch.)
Atom- ooooo. i'm not doing to well eather, am i?
Jayeta- you really don't want me to answer that question do you? (she grinned)
Atom- umm,......maybe not. forget it. i don't want YOU to answer that question. (he didn't smile back)
Jayeta- (fakeing a sad look) i'm hurt brother.
Atom- don't be, your just being yourself.
(jayeta stopped walking and turned to atom.)
Jayeta- atom i have to go back now. someone is trying to wake me up.(she starts to fade.) please don't get beat up anymore. it really gets annoying.(she faded out)
Atom- ok, that was wierd. now how do i get back to kansas? hmm......AHHHHHHHH!!!!!! (atom suddenly gets sucked into a vortex and thrown back into reality.)
~hide out~
FireStar- wake up!!
(blue flame was being vilently shaken, his head hurt like hell and he could bearly open his eyes without seing everything in double vision.)
Blue Flame- hu? hay! stop shaking me!
(firestar stopped shaking him.)
FireStar- your awake?! (she smiled widly and hugged him to her.)
Blue Flame- um... star... i... can't... breath.
FireStar- hu? (she lets him go) oh sorry.
Evil Dude- i can't believe you changed your name Debera. you should be ashamed.
Night Star- i warned you, you son of a bitch. now it's time for you to leave. (she holds up her staff and gold light seems to shin from within it. Her close too turn gold and her eyes shin strangely as she calls out.)
Night Star- Powers of ari, partner to the gardian's of the sky! charge the evil which thretens me this night! (the gold glowing turnes a bright gray and a low whisleing screech like a falcon. Silver ray's of light were shooting from the end of the staff diectly at he man, whe, to everyones surprise, screemed out in pain, and- after flicering a few times- he disapeared in a bunch of smoke.Debbies costume disapeared and she was back in her original "night star uniform" the staff turned back into a neckless and found itself on a chain around her neck... Debbies feet tuched the ground as she slowly floughted to the floor, she smiled a bit, and then... passed out.
Debbie and Atom were in the hospital for the next week. After that week, Debbie got to leave, but Atom was forced to stay, Caitlin had told the others he'd fallen down a flight of staires after drinking the punch, she wasnt shore if they believed her or not, but she promiced Atom she wouldnt tell them who he accually was.)
They new it wasnt over, thery still didnt know whoothat boy was who'd tried to save them and Debbie had taken to calling him Sea Serpint, which amused Atom wmencly. Vlod and Ddebbie broke up and Debbie relly didnt seem to care. She seemed to be whating for there next big edventure, which was sooner then they thought...
to be continued...
END OF COMIC #1