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            INT. STAIRWELL - TRINITY CATHEDRAL

            A dusty staircase leading up to the roof.  Mitch sees an old
            desk stuffed into the narrow space and scoots it up, placing
            it in front of the door.

            He starts up the stairs after Claudia.

            INT. SANCTUARY - TRINITY CATHEDRAL

            The Cops converge on the door with Kemper right behind.  They
            try the door, but can't get it open.

                                COP
                      He blocked it!

                                KEMPER
                      Well, break it down!

            Wes grabs Kemper's arm and turns Kemper around to face him.

                                WES
                      Just let Mitch handle this.  If you go up
                      there it can only end badly.

                                KEMPER
                      Don't you tell me what to do!  Your job
                      is done here.  Go home and I'll send you
                      a goddamn commendation.

                                WES
                      You take that commendation and you shove
                      it up your ass.  If you fuck this up,
                      you're going down.  I'll see to it.

            The Cops start breaking through the door.

            INT. ANOTHER PART OF THE STAIRWELL

            Mitch continues to run up the staircase.  He looks down
            briefly and balks at how high up he is.  He finally reaches
            the top and opens the door.

            EXT. ROOF - TRINITY CATHEDRAL - NIGHT

            Mitch runs out into the cold night air.  An enormous bell
            rests in its awning nearby.  Mitch searches for Claudia.

                                MITCH
                      Claudia!  Claudia, where are you?

                                CLAUDIA (O.S.)
                      Go away!  Leave me alone!

            Mitch spots her on the far end of the roof.  She is looking
            over the edge, tears streaming from her cheeks.

                                MITCH
                      Claudia, I'm trying to help.

                                CLAUDIA
                      Shut up!  You lied to me!  You set me up!

                                MITCH
                      This was not my idea.  I want to help
                      you.

                                CLAUDIA
                      Just leave me alone!

                                MITCH
                      There are cops coming up those stairs
                      right now.  I am your only chance. 
                      Please!

                                CLAUDIA
                      I trusted you...

                                MITCH
                      You still can.  I can keep them away from
                      you.

                                CLAUDIA
                      No.  You'll hand me over.

                                MITCH
                      No, I won't.

            Kemper and his men come through the door and spot them.  They
            run over, guns drawn.  Mitch is standing in between Kemper
            and Claudia.

                                KEMPER
                      Mitch, get out of the way!

                                MITCH
                      Walter, stop it.  You don't know what
                      you're doing.

                                KEMPER
                      I know goddamn well what I'm doing.  Now
                      shut up and get out of the fuckin' way!

                                MITCH
                      I can't do that.

            While Kemper and Mitch have been talking, Claudia has climbed
            up on the ledge and is looking over side.  Mitch turns back
            to her and his eyes go wide with horror.

                                MITCH (cont'd)
                      Claudia no!

                                CLAUDIA
                      I....have...to....

            She is bawling hysterically, looking over the edge,
            contemplating her fate.

                                MITCH
                      No you don't!  I can help you!  PLEASE!

                                CLAUDIA
                      I'd rather die on my own terms.

                                MITCH
                      They won't hurt you.

                                KEMPER
                      Miss, step away from the ledge and come
                      down with your hands up!

                                MITCH
                      KEMPER SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!

                                KEMPER
                      She's not gonna do anything.  She's
                      playing you Mitch.

                                CLAUDIA
                      I can't take this anymore...

                                MITCH
                      Claudia no!

            Instinctively, he moves closer to her.

                                CLAUDIA
                      DON'T COME NEAR ME!!

            Mitch stops and holds his hands up in surrender.

                                MITCH
                      I'm stopping.  Claudia, don't do this.
                      Please let me help you.

                                KEMPER
                      Claudia, if you don't come down from
                      there right now, I will come and get you
                      myself.

                                CLAUDIA
                      NO! YOU STAY BACK!!

                                KEMPER
                      Fuck this.

            He starts walking towards her rapidly.  Mitch tries to stops
            him, but Kemper pushes him aside.

                                MITCH
                      Kemper, NO!!

            Before Kemper can reach her, Claudia jumps off the roof and
            out of sight.  Mitch rushes to the edge.

            He sees Claudia flying through the air, gracefully.  Her
            dress flows in the wind giving her an angelic look.

            Mitch closes his eyes and hears the sickening THUD.

            Tears of sadness and anger fill his eyes.  He looks over the
            edge and grimaces when he sees Claudia's crumpled lifeless
            body.

            Kemper walks away from the edge shaking his head.

                                KEMPER
                      Crazy bitch did it.

            Mitch rushes him.  He tackles Kemper and flips him over to
            face him.

                                MITCH
                      You sonofabitch!! You fuckin'
                      sonofabitch!!

            He punches Kemper hard and keeps doing it until Wes pulls him
            off.  Mitch collapses and Wes holds him.

                                MITCH (cont'd)
                      She was just a kid...Jesus, she was just
                      a child....

            Kemper slowly sits up, bloodied and beaten.  He nurses his
            busted lip.

            The sound of sirens converging on the scene can be heard.

            INT. LIVING ROOM - MITCH'S HOUSE

            Mitch is sitting on the couch, being held by Laura.

                                MITCH
                      It's not right.

                                LAURA
                      I know.

                                MITCH
                      I could have helped her.

                                LAURA
                      Yes you could've. But it's not your fault
                      she died.

                                MITCH
                      I still feel like shit.

            There is a knock at the door.  Wes comes in and sees them on
            the couch.

                                WES
                      I'm sorry.  I didn't mean to interrupt.

                                LAURA
                      You didn't.  Come on in.

            Wes sits down on the opposite couch.

                                WES
                      I thought you might wanna know what we
                      found in Claudia's room.

                                MITCH
                      What?

                                WES
                      A lot of items from the different murder
                      scenes.  The toupee from the first
                      one...things like that.  We never did
                      find the murder weapon though.

                                MITCH
                      You couldn't find the knife?

                                WES
                      She coulda dumped it somewhere.  Also,
                      the escort that came to Josh's room?  She
                      was hired over the phone and cash was
                      sent. 

                                LAURA
                      It's all so horrible.

                                WES
                      I know.  She's got no family.  We
                      checked.  I don't know how they're gonna
                      do the funeral.

                                MITCH
                      I'm paying for it.

                                LAURA
                      What?

                                MITCH
                      It's the least I can do.  I owe her that.

                                WES
                      They released Brian this morning.

                                MITCH
                      How's he taking it?

                                WES
                      As well as can be expected I guess.

                                MITCH
                      I hope he's okay.

            INT. MITCH'S OFFICE - DAY

            Mitch is sitting at his desk, trying to grade papers, but his
            mind keeps wandering.

            Janice walks in with a stack of papers.  She sets them on the
            desk.

                                JANICE
                      Here's some more papers for you.

                                MITCH
                      I hate the end of the semester.

            She laughs but gets a serious expression.

                                JANICE
                      Ummm....

                                MITCH
                      Yes?  Just say it.

                                JANICE
                      I just wanted to tell you I think you
                      tried to do a good thing with Claudia.

                                MITCH
                      How do you know about that?

                                JANICE
                      You can't keep something like that quiet
                      around here.

                                MITCH
                      I see your point.

                                JANICE
                      I feel terrible for her.  I can't imagine
                      the terror of having a force like that
                      controlling me.

            Mitch suddenly perks up.

                                MITCH
                      Really?

                                JANICE
                      Yeah, it must be awful.

                                MITCH
                      It all comes down to control, doesn't it?

                                JANICE
                      I'm sorry?

                                MITCH
                      Janice, could you excuse me for a moment? 
                      I have to make a call.

                                JANICE
                      Uh, okay.

            She walks out looking bewildered.

            Mitch picks up the phone and dials quickly.  He waits
            impatiently for an answer.

                                MITCH
                          (into phone)
                      Coroner's office please.

            INT. LECTURE HALL - COLLEGE

            Mitch walks in distracted.  The class is waiting for him.

                                MITCH
                      Hello everybody.  I know this is a hard
                      day.  I'll be back in a minute, and we'll
                      talk about it.  But first, uh, Brian? 
                      Could I talk to you out in the hallway
                      for a moment?

            Brian nods and gets up, a little unsure.  He follows Mitch
            out of the classroom.

            INT. HALLWAY - OUTSIDE LECTURE HALL

            Mitch stops Brian a little ways down the hall and looks him
            over carefully.

                                MITCH
                      It's a tough thing to lose a loved one.

                                BRIAN
                      I know.

                                MITCH
                      I know you really cared for Claudia.  She
                      was a great girl.

                                BRIAN
                      Yeah.

                                MITCH
                      You had no idea she was coming to me for
                      help, did you?

                                BRIAN
                      No, I didn't.

                                MITCH
                      We arrested you on a gut feeling, and I'm
                      sorry for that.

                                BRIAN
                      Hey, it's all right.  We all make
                      mistakes.

                                MITCH
                      We didn't make a mistake.

                                BRIAN
                      What?

                                MITCH
                      You fit my profile perfectly, but I
                      couldn't put the pieces together.

                                BRIAN
                      What are you talking about?

                                MITCH
                      In my profile, I said that the killer
                      didn't kill for any kind of sexual
                      gratification, and I was right.

                                BRIAN
                      Sexual....what?

                                MITCH
                      It was all about control.  Controlling
                      the escorts, controlling the men....and
                      controlling Claudia.

                                BRIAN
                      You're not making any sense.

                                MITCH
                      You had chloroform in your room.  None of
                      the victims had any trace of chloroform
                      in their systems.  I checked the autopsy
                      reports myself.

                                BRIAN
                      What does that have to do with anything?

                                MITCH
                      I had the coroner do an autopsy on
                      Claudia this morning.

            This shakes Brian a little.  His tone becomes more panicked.

                                BRIAN
                      You what?

                                MITCH
                      She had chloroform in her system.  That
                      surprise you?

            No answer from Brian, but his eyes are growing more hateful.

                                MITCH (cont'd)
                      That's why she was always sleeping late,
                      and why she was nauseous all the time. 
                      You used the chloroform to knock her out,
                      and then you went out and committed the
                      murders.  You used her own dark fantasy
                      against her.  You put evidence in her
                      room, and played with her mind.  With
                      what you pulled, I might've been fooled.

                                BRIAN
                      You're stepping onto dangerous ground.

                                MITCH
                      But you fucked up with Josh.  You did
                      that out of revenge. The escort was just
                      a decoy.  The rest of the murders were
                      nothing.  You have no score to settle.
                      You kill because you like it.  When did
                      you find that out?  Five?  Ten?

                                BRIAN
                      You think you know so much about me.

                                MITCH
                      I do!  You're all the same.  Mad at the
                      world but you don't know why.  But why
                      Claudia?  She was just an innocent girl
                      who loved you.

                                BRIAN
                      I was helping her deal with her past. 
                      Making the wrongs right.

                                MITCH
                      BULLSHIT!!  You're not that noble.  You
                      killed, and you blamed it on her because
                      you couldn't stand the thought of her
                      leaving you.

                                BRIAN
                      Shut up.

                                MITCH
                      You figured that if she were scared
                      enough, that she wouldn't leave your
                      side.  Because you're the one that's
                      really scared.

                                BRIAN
                      SHUT THE FUCK UP!!  Don't try to council
                      me Doctor.  I don't want to end up
                      splattered on a sidewalk somewhere.

                                MITCH
                      She wouldn't have needed my help if you
                      hadn't fucked with her head.  Admit it
                      Brian.  You killed the one woman who
                      loved you.

                                BRIAN
                      STOP TALKING!!

                                MITCH
                      Where's the murder weapon Brian?  Police
                      couldn't find it and I know you didn't
                      get rid of it.  You like using it too
                      much.  The police will be here any
                      second.  If you hand over the knife, I'll
                      do what I can to help you.  I can help
                      you change your life around.

                                BRIAN
                      Go fuck yourself.

            Mitch takes a step forward.  With a quick motion, Brian
            sucker punches him, sending him sprawling on the floor. 
            Brian takes off running down the hall.

            Mitch picks himself up, and wipes blood away from his lip and
            runs after him.

            EXT. COURTYARD - COLLEGE - DAY

            Mitch bursts out of the door of the main building just in
            time to see Brian disappear inside the theater, still under
            construction.

            He bolts across the courtyard towards it.  Laura is walking
            down the sidewalk and hurriedly blocks his path.

                                LAURA
                      What's going on?

                                MITCH
                      Stay out here!  When the police come,
                      send them to the theater!

                                LAURA
                      But Mitch-

                                MITCH
                      JUST DO IT!

            He continues running towards the theater, leaving Laura in
            state of confusion.

            INT. THEATER LOBBY - UNDER CONSTRUCTION

            Mitch enters the dark entry way.  Flaps of plastic cover the
            high windows, and blow in the wind, sending occasional
            streaks of dim light inside.

            He moves silently past the tools and debris on the ground. 
            He stops momentarily, listening for any sound.

            Three entrances are ahead of him on the far left, center, and
            far right.  After a moment of thought, he enters the right
            entrance.

            INT. THEATER - UNDER CONSTRUCTION

            Mitch strains his eyes to see in the dark.  The stage at the
            front is dark and forboding.  Scaffolding is raised near it
            reaching almost all the way up to the high ceiling.  

            The three sections of seats are all in stages of
            construction.  Some rows are still missing.  

            He slowly moves down the right aisle, looking down each row.

            CLOSE - BRIAN'S HANDS

            Brian moves aside a plank from the floor with stealth and
            reaches into a dark hole.  He emerges with a wicked looking
            hunting knife.  

            His shadow quietly moves away.

            Mitch continues his search, trying not to make any noise. 
            Suddenly a soft CLANGING of something metal falling on the
            floor perks his attention up.  

            He creeps towards the origin of the sound, still squinting in
            the dim light.  He stops near the scaffolding and strains to
            listen.

            He doesn't see the shadow rising behind him.  Brian raises
            the knife.

            A gust of wind blows through, raising the plastic flaps. 
            With the light coming in, Mitch sees Brian's reflection in
            the scaffolding bars.  

            He jerks to the side as Brian comes down with the knife, but
            the blade slices him across the arm.  He grunts in pain and
            turns to face his attacker.

            Brian brings the knife back up, but Mitch moves under
            scaffolding, taking refuge behind the bars.  They square off.

                                BRIAN
                      I'm gonna gut you like a fish.

                                MITCH
                      It doesn't have to end this way.

                                BRIAN
                      Yes it does.

            He jabs the knife between the bars, and Mitch dodges him.  

                                MITCH
                      You're a smart kid.  Why this?

                                BRIAN
                      Like you said, I like it.

            He reaches around the scaffolding and comes through, slicing
            into Mitch's shoulder.  Blood flows freely from the wound.

            Mitch tries to run up the aisle, but Brian blocks his path. 
            Seeing no other way out, Mitch starts scaling the
            scaffolding.

            Brian eagerly goes after him.

            Mitch reaches the top and is surprised to see that Brian has
            gotten up at the same time.  They circle each other on the
            platform.

            Brian slices at him, and Mitch moves out of the way.  The
            knife comes down again, but Mitch catches his arm and slams
            it down the scaffolding bars.  

            With a painful yell, Brian releases his grip on the knife and
            it clatters noisily on the floor.  

            Mitch punches Brian hard across the cheek sending him back to
            the end of the platform.  The bars catch him and he remains
            standing.

            Enraged he runs forward and pushes Mitch to the other edge of
            the platform.  He wraps his hand around Mitch's throat and
            begins squeezing.  Mitch chokes and struggles to breathe.

            Mitch slams his fists into Brian's stomach, but it barely
            fazes him.  Mitch falls to his knees, almost to the point of
            passing out.  In a last ditch effort he grabs Brian by the
            balls and puts his own squeeze on.

            Brian howls in pain and releases Mitch from his grip.  He
            punches Mitch in the face and stumbles back holding his groin
            in agony.

                                BRIAN (cont'd)
                      You son of a bitch!

            Brian rushes him, but Mitch rears back and with a sharp CRACK
            connects his fist to Brian's jaw.   

            Brian flies up, and with a scream of rage plummets over the
            edge of the scaffolding. 
            He falls on the unfinished stage and breaks through the
            flimsy boards, disappearing into the darkness.

            Mitch sinks down on the platform, catching his breath. He
            nurses the cut on his shoulder and sighs in pain.  He closes
            his eyes.

            He opens them when the platform begins slightly shaking. 
            Puzzled he painfully gets to his feet.  He looks over the
            edge.

            Brian is at the bottom, bloodied from his fall.  He is
            rocking the scaffolding, an evil look in his eyes.

            The rocking becomes more violent, and Mitch is struggling to
            hang on.   With a final CREAK, the scaffolding gives way and
            tips over.

            The scaffolding falls across the center section of chairs. 
            At the last minute, Mitch jumps off, but lands against a row
            of seats, breaking his arm.  The scaffolding hits the chairs
            sending up a big cloud of dust.

            Mitch clears the dust from his eyes, and tries to move, but
            is too beaten.

            Brian picks up his knife from the floor and advances slowly
            up the aisle.

                                BRIAN (cont'd)
                      I'm going to enjoy this.

                                MITCH
                      So you kill me.  Then what?  The police
                      are on their way.

                                BRIAN 
                      You shrinks are all the same.  I'm gonna
                      do the world a favor and cut your tongue
                      out first.

            Brian is almost upon him.  Suddenly the doors to the theater
            burst open.  Wes and a horde of cops are standing there.  A
            scowl crossed Brian's face.

                                WES
                      There he is!

            The Cops advance, guns drawn.

                                COP
                      Put the knife down.  Now!

                                BRIAN
                      Fuck you!

                                COP
                      I mean it!  Do it now, or I will shoot
                      you!

                                BRIAN
                      So shoot me.

                                MITCH
                      He's for real! 

            The Cops keep their distance, but stand ready.

                                WES
                      Mitch?

                                MITCH
                      I'm all right!  Keep your distance!

                                BRIAN
                      Still trying to protect me?

                                MITCH
                      It doesn't have to end this way.  All it
                      takes is the will.

                                BRIAN
                      Fuck you.  You can't change who I am. 
                      You wanna see real willpower?

            With great speed, Brain slices deeply across his own throat. 
            Blood spurts out of his neck.  He falls to his knees and
            shoots Mitch one more nasty look before falling to the ground
            face first.  A dark pool of blood spreads out from under him.

            The Cops run up to him, kicking the knife away.  Wes talks
            into his radio.

                                WES
                      I need an ambulance here now!

            He runs down to Mitch, who is laying there expressionless.

                                WES (cont'd)
                      Mitch.  Are you all right?

                                MITCH
                      I think my arm's broken.

                                WES
                      We have an ambulance on the way.

            Laura is at the entrance of the lobby, trying to get past all
            the cops.

                                LAURA
                      Mitch!

            Wes turns to the cops blocking her.

                                WES
                      Let her in.

            They let her by and she runs down the aisle to Mitch. She
            hugs him, tears streaming down her face.  He winces in pain.

                                WES (cont'd)
                      His arm's broken.

            Laura immediately lets go.

                                LAURA
                      Jesus, I'm sorry!

                                MITCH
                      It's all right.

            She holds him around the neck.  Cops swirl around them.

                                                            DISSOLVE TO:

            INT. MITCH'S OFFICE - DAY

            Mitch's wounds have been dressed.  He is sitting with Laura
            on the couch.  Wes walks in.

                                WES
                      We just got a confirmation on the murder
                      weapon.  Brian was the man.  Your profile
                      was dead on.

                                MITCH
                      At least I know I haven't lost it.

                                WES
                      So what now?

                                MITCH
                      Semester's over.  I take a vacation and
                      then I'm back.

                                WES
                      By the way, Kemper sends his apologies.

                                MITCH
                      He's probably already gone back.  Gotta
                      secure those book deals.

                                WES
                      Random House.  They called this morning.

                                MITCH
                      Huh.  I turned 'em down a couple of days
                      ago.

                                WES
                      That's life I guess.  You take care now. 
                      Diner on Monday?

                                MITCH
                      You bet.

            Wes walks out.  Laura turns to him.

                                LAURA
                      Mitch....why did Brian kill himself?

                                MITCH
                      I don't know.  I think he was right.  You
                      just can't change people sometimes.  I
                      never thought a person was born
                      evil...but I'm not so sure anymore.

                                                            DISSOLVE TO:

            EXT. GRAVEYARD - DAY

            It's raining again.  Mitch and Laura are standing near the
            Minister who is giving his eulogy.  Some students are
            gathered near as well.

            Mitch takes a rose from his coat and places it gingerly on
            the grave as the Minister finishes.  As Mitch and Laura walk
            away, the gravestone FILLS THE SCREEN.  It reads:

            CLAUDIA ENGLE  BORN APRIL 2, 1977, DIED DECEMBER 11, 1998.

            The inscription below it is now what FILLS THE SCREEN.

            FOR A SHORT TIME....AN ANGEL WALKED AMONG US....

                                                               FADE OUT.
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