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Chapter five

The lights blazed on with no warning. Madelyn pulled the quilts over her head in an effort to retain her sleep, but she was instantly awake when she heard the key in the lock. Claire held the door for one of the serving girls. She came in and put a tray down on the desk. The familiar scent of coffee and toast filled the small room.

“Good morning!” Claire was smiling cheerfully. How could anyone be cheerful at this hour while wearing a tight leather corset? What was the hour anyway?

“Up and at it! We have lots to do today. Have a shower and eat some breakfast. You will find your training uniform in the drawer. I’ll be back to get you in about 30 minutes.” Before Madelyn could say a word, Claire and the girl were gone. Maddie heard the key turn in the lock again.

Madelyn pulled herself out of bed, and went to the bathroom. She had a hot shower and washed her hair. There was a razor along with the soap, so she shaved her legs and underarms. She was feeling more like herself when she finished brushing out her hair and left the bathroom wrapped in the towel. She looked around for the dress she had on last night. It was gone, along with her shoes and her underwear. They must have taken them back to the other room. She poured her coffee and munched on a piece of toast as she explored her room. Claire had said her training uniform was in the drawer. There was only one drawer in the whole room. It was in the small desk that was currently serving as her breakfast table. She opened the drawer and found the satin body suit. It was a lovely deep blue colour, she knew it would highlight her natural colouring, but it was pretty small. The training room better be warm, or she was going to freeze! Maddie reassured herself the other women would probably be wearing the same thing. Claire had called it a uniform after all.

Madelyn took a good look at the suit. It was actually quite an ingenious design. More than a corset, the suit was a series of stiff boned panels held together by a series of laces that could be adjusted to fit almost any figure. There was even a crotch piece most corsets do not have, connected by more sets of laces.

Maddie tried to get it on. She thought her corset from last night was complicated! She would need an engineering degree to get into this. But she was fascinated by the design and wanted to know how it would feel on. She loosened the front laces; and slipping it over her hips she pulled the shoulder straps up.

Her breasts were barely covered. She started to tighten the laces. The suit pulled tight across her belly making it look flat but the thong design cut sharply up through her ass. Her pulse started to race. She adjusted the crotch. There was something uncomfortable. A hard button built into the suit sat just on top of her clit. She was trying to get it comfortable and finish her breakfast when she heard the key in the lock again.

Claire came in again followed by Stephanie carrying a wooden box.

“You’ve found the suit, very good,” Claire said.

Madelyn got up. “It’s not too comfortable in the crotch. I think there is something wrong with it.” She started to pull the shoulder straps off.

“No, let me help,” Claire stopped her. “There is no way to do this yourself. Don’t worry, I know how it goes!”

She turned Maddie by the shoulders and smoothed the fabric across her back. She loosened the laces down the back a bit. Maddie felt a small thrill at Claire’s touch. Turning her around again, Claire reached in and pulled Maddie’s breasts up to enhance her cleavage. “There. Much nicer.”

She turned Maddie back around and tightened and tied off the two sets of laces that went down the back. Maddie felt the snug comfort of the suit as it was adjusted to her curves. Then Claire turned her again to the front and started to tighten the centre front laces. Maddie felt exposed and supported at the same time. Claire tugged the fabric a bit higher on her hips. “Good, just one more thing, lie down on your back for a minute.”

Madelyn lay down on the bed. With the brisk professionalism of a gynaecologist, Claire spread Madelyn’s thighs and slipped her finger under the crotch of the body suit. Claire gave the fabric a bit of a tug and then spread Maddie's outer folds, exposing her clit. Maddie thought wryly that all her modesty left with the birth of her children. Years ago she would have found this humiliating! Claire adjusted the crotch of the body suit so the button was sitting squarely and securely on top of her clit and her pussy was held open by the ribbon of fabric. Maddie’s belly began to burn. She loved being handled like this. Then pushing Maddie’s legs down, Claire started to tighten the laces that attached the crotch piece to the corset section.

“There. You can get up.” Maddie stood up and felt the crotch bite into her as Claire finished tying off the laces and adjusting the shoulders. “Yes, that’s how it goes. I know it’s tight, but you will appreciate the support when you get tired and still need to maintain your posture. No, don’t fuss with it. Accept it. You will find the irritation keeps your mind focussed on your tasks. One of the first things you will learn today is keeping your focus. Now slip your feet into the slippers and then there is one more thing we have to add. Stephanie, bring the box.”

The serving girl moved like a shadow across the room and gracefully sank to her knees, bowing her head and holding the box up to Claire. Claire found the key among the many on her ring and opened the box. Maddie’s belly flipped, and her ass contracted as she looked at the contents of the box; a tangle of leather and steel; cuffs and chains. She hadn’t worn cuffs since that afternoon with Judy.

Claire lifted the first cuff out of the box.

“Ok, Madelyn, this is one of the few choices you’ll be offered. You can accept the cuffs, or you can be returned to your husband with the explanation that you chose to withdraw and he can decide what to do with you. But remember what we spoke of last night. You will be driven into your submissive state. We have already started to do this. Everything you are experiencing has been designed to train you as a submissive woman. If you still want this, you will accept the cuffs but if you do take the cuffs you also accept the rules. Remember the rules? Honesty, trust and obedience?” Madelyn felt Claire’s eyes on her as the chatelaine picked up a length of chain and ran it through her fingers.

Madelyn licked her lips, which were suddenly very dry. “Yes, I remember.”

“First honesty. You will respond honestly to whatever happens. Don’t tell us what you think we want to hear. You must open your mind to your husband. This is honesty. To know who and what you are, accept it and offer it to him. Will you be honest?” Maddie wasn’t entirely sure what she meant, but she figured honesty should be easy enough.

“Sure, I’ll be honest.”

“Very good. Now trust. You must trust your husband and Master Stephen and I will do what is best for you even if you don’t agree with it. You must open your spirit to your husband and offer your respect, loyalty and dedication. This is trust. You put yourself in our hands and you must trust all will be well. You will be safe. You may also trust Master Stephen and I have complete self-control. We will never lose control and Ian is being taught this very skill. Will you trust?”

Maddie almost laughed. “Ian has a bit of a temper, but only when he is really provoked. Most of the time he is a rock. But I know he loves me more than anything. Will I trust you? I’m not sure. But I will easily trust Ian.”

Claire smiled. “Good enough. The trust must go beyond simply knowing he will not lose control. You must trust his decisions are the right ones. You will learn to trust us as trainers. We will not abandon you.

“That leaves obedience. This is fairly straightforward, but sometimes can be the most difficult. You do as you are told. Always. You must open your body to your husband and give it over to his use. This is obedience. Regardless of whether or not you agree with him. You trust Ian’s decisions; you obey his commands. While you are on retreat with us, you obey our commands. Will you obey?”

Maddie heard the words right down into her soul; honesty, trust and obedience. This was a powerful combination. She took a breath. Well, in for a penny …

“Yes, I will obey.” The words reverberated deep within her. She felt she had crossed a threshold and entered into a new world. Her body shuddered a bit and her pussy clenched around the fabric of the body suit. Claire nodded.

“Good. The disciplines are secondary to the rules but you will obey them if you accept the cuffs. You will not speak unless asked a direct question. You will acknowledge my commands by saying ‘Yes, Lady Claire.’ You’ll be taught more formal protocols later. You will not meet my gaze or that of any of the men and you will keep your lips parted. You will not cross your arms or your legs, or stand with your hands on your hips. These are aggressive postures that you are not allowed. Also your body is for the enjoyment and use of your husband; you will not touch yourself for your own pleasure without permission. If you break discipline, even unintentionally, you will be punished. You break the rules and you will be expelled. Simple. Do you accept the cuffs?” Claire held out the leather and waited.

Maddie looked at the cuff in Claire’s hand. The leather was thick and sturdy. It was died a dark blue that matched her suit, the buckles shiny and the attachment rings strong. There was a tiny lock that would require a key to undo. Her belly was clenched and she was finding it hard to breathe. Excitement was warring with fear and rebellion. Excitement won out. She had come this far; she would never forgive herself if she backed out now. She certainly didn’t want to be sent back to Ian as a failure. She reached out and took the cuff from Claire’s hand.

“I accept.”

Claire smiled. “Good. Now kiss it,” she ordered.

Madelyn put the leather to her lips. The recognizable scent of the new leather brought home the realization of what she was doing. The cold steel brushed her cheek. She closed her eyes briefly as she let the sensations wash over her. She kissed the leather. Claire took the cuff and strapped it on Madelyn’s wrist. She took a tiny key from the box and locked the cuff. The inside of the leather was surprisingly soft. Then Claire took three more matching blue cuffs and attached them to Maddie’s other wrist and her ankles, locking each one with the key. Madelyn noticed that there were many other things in the box just before Claire closed it and locked it replacing the keys on her ring. Stephanie rose and put the box on the floor in the corner of the room.

“Good. Stand up,” Claire directed.

Maddie stood up feeling the button rub against her clit as she moved. Wetness rubbed between her thighs. She remembered to lower her eyes, but still felt the sting of Claire’s hand on her ass. Her eyes flew up angrily to Claire’s face.

“You forgot to acknowledge the command,” Claire explained. “Say ‘Yes, Lady Claire.’”

“Sorry.” Maddie sighed and looked at Claire, raising a sarcastic eyebrow. She could play this game. “Yes, Lady Claire.”

She was slapped again. “Ouch! What was that for?”

Claire was almost laughing.

“Watch yourself, Maddie. Accept your situation. Anger is understandable but it will get you into trouble. You will be punished when you break discipline. You spoke without permission and you lifted your eyes to me. Come now, you just agreed to this not 2 minutes ago! I’m taking it easy on you for now. But once in the training room, it will be a different matter.

“Now before you earn any more punishments, follow Stephanie to the training room. We will start when everyone is assembled. Welcome to the Manor, Maddie.”


After their early morning run, the men had showered and then congregated in a small sitting room beside the training room. They sat in comfortable chairs looking through a one-way mirror into the training room. Their wives were oblivious to their presence. They were stretching, walking with books on their heads, moving from kneeling to standing, all dressed in corseted body suits of various colours. Claire moved among them with a small crop in her hands correcting and instructing. The men couldn’t hear what was going on in the other room, but they could watch everything. Ian had been a bit concerned about the crop. He didn’t like the idea of someone hitting his wife; but it was Paul who raised the question.

“Don’t worry.” It was Andrew, the horse trainer, who answered. “That crop isn’t going to do any damage. Claire’s not even putting any strength in her swings. It’s just going to be a bit of a sting. Personally, I kind of like seeing Susan with a red ass! Matches her suit so nicely.”

The serving girls moved silently among the men serving a light breakfast of fruit and pastries.

“Greetings, gentlemen. That was an invigorating run wasn’t it? Nothing like the view of the lake with the mist not quite burnt off yet.” Stephen took his chair, accepting a glass of fruit juice from one of the girls.

Ian was a bit chagrined to note the lake Stephen spoke of was a good five miles from the manor through the deep woods. Luckily the path was well trodden or he felt sure he would be spending the morning treating turned ankles! But Stephen was right, he felt great.

“Of course the view of the lake was nothing in comparison to the view at breakfast.” Stephan gestured through the glass at the women.

“I see Claire has your girls well in hand. She really is very good at what she does. Shall we listen in?” Stephen gestured to one of the girls who adjusted a monitor on the wall filling the breakfast room with the sounds of the training session. Stephen picked up the phone on the table next to him and spoke quietly.

“Good morning, Claire.”

Claire turned towards the glass and put her hand to her ear adjusting her pick up. She smiled, giving a small nod.

“The gentlemen are assembled my dear, you can start the acknowledgement training.” Stephen put the phone down.

Claire nodded again and the men fell silent.

“All right ladies, enough of this. Back to the mirror please.” Claire gathered her charges.

The women took their positions facing the mirror. Claire moved down the line.

“Stand straight. Heads high, be proud of what you are and that your husband wants you. If you are unhappy with your body you can deal with it when you get home and believe me, you will. You are all beautiful. Feel it.”

Maddie had been examining her body more closely this morning than she usually ever did. She was proud of her shape. She was strong and flexible. Her breasts might not be as big as they had been when she was nursing, but they were still a pleasant size and shape and this suit displayed them to their best advantage. The swell of her hips and thighs were more sensual and full than the skinny androgynous figure that was so in style. But she had never been much for fashion. Yes, she was beautiful and she did feel it.

“Right, now that we have done some of the more basic postures, the next lesson is the acknowledgement gesture. You will perform this gesture when you are told ‘acknowledge’. It’s a bit tricky so I’ll give you lots of practice. This is what it looks like.” Claire turned to the mirror. She stood tall and held her head high. She slowly crossed her hands at the wrists in front of her, right over left. Her hands were relaxed, fingers slightly bent and open. She brought her hands up until they just touched her chest. The movement was slow, deliberate, delicate. Then she started to bow. As she bent her head, she closed her eyes and opened her arms outward, her palms facing the mirror. She moved with such grace, Maddie was envious. There were no jerky movements; the whole gesture flowed as one. She held the lowered position for a moment or two and then with equal grace, she rose back to standing. She smiled at the mirror and then turned to the women.

“All right ladies, let’s give this a try. Start with your hands like this…” Claire started to drill the women in the gesture.

Maddie felt a bit foolish, dressed as she was; luckily the men were not around. Her dance training was definitely coming in handy though. Highland dance did not have too much in the way of graceful hand motions but her ballet days had left an indelible mark on her body and she found these movements flowed quite naturally.

Claire watched Maddie give it a couple of tries.

“Good girl, Maddie, very nice. You are ready to add the breathing. Take a breath in as you bring the arms up, close your eyes and hold your breath just for a moment, and then exhale as you bend over and open up. This is an opening gesture. You are signifying your willingness to obey and your openness to Ian. Visualize your centre opening up when you do this.”

Claire’s praise warmed Maddie. She smiled as she tried the gesture with the breathing and the visualization. It took one or two tries to get the timing right and then it clicked. Maddie performed it perfectly; breath, movement and visualization all together. The power blossomed within her. She swayed under the impact of the sensations; red and orange energy flooded upward from her centre. The feelings were so exquisite she didn’t want to let them go. She was open, vulnerable, graceful and beautiful all at once. She felt like she had when Stephen had held her in his gaze.

Claire’s hands gripped her shoulders and steadied her.

“Up you come, Maddie. Let it go.”

Maddie watched as the blossom of power subsided from her awareness and she regained her balance.

“Oh, my God!” Maddie looked at Claire with big and round eyes. “That was amazing! What happened?”

“Maddie, you are not permitted speech.” Smack, the crop landed on her backside, not for the first time, but this time it lanced through her and she collapsed on the floor. Claire helped her to her feet again.

“Steady now, you’re ok. That correction wasn’t nearly as hard as you have accepted all morning without flinching. Interesting. You have been operating in a submissive state since you put on the cuffs and you deepened it with the gesture. Now the correction has sent you even deeper. Nice isn’t it? Now do you know why you want to submit?”

Maddie was hugging herself tightly as she tried to hold onto the shadows of the sensations. That was the closest thing she had ever experienced to an orgasm outside of sex! If she could feel like this even occasionally, then submission would be a small price to pay. “Yes, Lady Claire. Oh yes.”

The other women were watching her.

“Ok girls. You’ve seen how it’s done. You get another fifteen minutes to practice it then we move onto something else. Remember to open. This gesture opens your spirit. Maddie, you will practice kneeling and waiting! Stephanie, put the bells on her.”

Stephanie clipped tiny silver bells to her cuffs. Then turned her to face the mirror. “Maddie, down.”

She responded instantly to the command from earlier in the morning and dropped to her knees without thought. The bells tinkled softly and then were still as she settled into her posture. She knelt in front of the mirror, her knees parted wide, her hands resting on her thighs. This was the same exercise she had done earlier; sit still and the bells don’t ring. She let her mind float. She imagined she could see Ian sitting in a chair watching her. She held herself higher and let a smile spread across her face. She imagined Ian getting aroused and having to adjust his trousers. She spread her thighs a bit more.

On the other side of the glass, Ian did indeed adjust his trousers. When Maddie had performed the gesture, Ian had felt it deep in his being. His love for her was intense, almost painful. But when Claire had smacked Madelyn with the crop, Ian had leapt to his feet ready to defend his wife. Stephen had quickly reassured him that Maddie would be fine, and to watch. Ian was transfixed by Madelyn’s face. The peace he saw there reminded Ian of how she had looked when she nursed their children. It was amazing to watch his wife sitting there open, vulnerable and submissive. It woke something in him. He wanted to take her by the hair and drag her to the back of his cave! She was by far the most beautiful of all the women, and she was his.

Stephen was watching his reactions.

“It seems Madelyn has reached her submissive state far faster than I expected. Congratulations Ian. You have a rare treasure.”

 

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