Introduction C

This has some features of an introduction, but it is not complete.

1. Definitions

The first sentence contains good definitions of both key concepts. The second sentence however seems unnecessary. If it is part of the definition it should be included in the first sentence. It appears to be a minor detail, which means it should be in the essay body, not the introduction.

2. Thesis Statement

The third sentence attempts a thesis statement, but it is not informative. It makes an obvious statement which shows neither ability to analyse or essay structure.

C.

Peasant farms consist of small-scale units mainly based on family labor while plantation farms are large and depend on hierarchical supervision to run the operations. Plantations may include both production and marketing processes (vertical integration). These farming systems have several differences.