| A new Story I am Writing Rating PG-13 Author:Scytal email. [email protected] Like it? Hate it? Post your feelings on the board |
| Here is a story I am writing, It is the first part. Tell me what you think of it. --------------------------------------------------------------------- While walking up Tibits Road, Ryan Waren casually looked through the latest issue of "Children of Ice", his favorite comic. It was about a superhero, Arctic Avenger, who could control ice. He fought against isotope biological terror caused by a radiation spill. Ryan was not your average 21-year-old. He was enthralled by the comics he read, and didn't like any of the girls at his collage, but loved aqua, the superwoman who could control water, and defended Paragon City with other superheroes. He also stated his opinion out loud and didn't care what others thought, that cost him though. Although he didn't notice it many people disliked him. As he walked home three men followed him. All of them members of the Anthrax gang, one of the most feared gangs in North Paragon City. as he walked further up the street one of the gangsters, Havoc, called out to Ryan, " Hey, you nerd freak what are you reading? The guide to not be a loser?" Ryan turned around and replied coolly "No but I can you tell where to find it. Knowing that you desperately need it" Havoc surged with anger, nobody insulted an Anthrax and got away with it. Seeing Havoc�s reaction Ryan put the comic away in his windbreakers map pocket and started to run seeing the gangsters were chasing him. Havoc quickly caught up with Ryan and shoved him to the ground, the other two caught up quickly. Ryan being not very strong took the full force of the shove and thankfully landed on some grass. "So geek boy not so tough now, huh?" said Havoc looking at Ryan's face contort with pain as Ryan notice his shin was broken. Ryan looked at his leg, the bone was jutting out, then at the gangsters, there was no way that he was getting out of this mess. "So what shall we do with the little puke?" asked havoc to the other two gangsters. "Why don't we just shoot him up with some Zolacion?" one of the gangsters asked. "No, you idiot. That might just deform him.....yeah lets do that." said Havoc. Havoc pulled something round out of his pocket, a vile. He then put it into a syringe." The cops will just think he ODed" chuckled Havoc. Havoc then brought the syringe down to inject Ryan. A million thing came through Ryan�s head. He couldn't think straight. He then became overcome with fear. and started mumbling. "I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I shall turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain. " Havoc then pissed at his mumbling kicked Ryan in the side of the head not too hard but enough to knock him out. Ryan then blacked out hearing "The cops won't suspect a thing red and blue lights filled the air as police choppers floated by the alley "Its too risky now, lets ditch!" yelled Havoc to the other gangsters. As he ran the syringe with blue liquid dropped ground shattering. the blue substance was everywhere now. "Where�s the Palladium?" asked Diablo, the leader of Anthrax. "Right here boss," replied Havoc showing diablo a vile of clear liquid. "You fool!" screamed Diablo slapping away the vile out of Havoc�s hand, sending it to floor where it shattered. "That is Zolician!" screamed Diablo again. Blood trickled down Ryan�s leg. He sat up and started searching for his glasses, He felt something smooth and cold. Grasping the object in his hand, his hand was shot with pain. Blood gushing from the multiple lacerations. Taking a piece of cloth he wrapped the hand to slow the bleeding. Finally finding his glasses Ryan puts them on. Looking at his hand, Ryan notices blue liquid seeping into his hand from the shards of glass in his hand. "You gave him Palladium?" Diablo screamed, blood vessels popping in his neck. Creating an array of red dots."We have no clue what that stuff does, besides the military will notice the mutation oh his genes when he goes the the hospital because of frequent seizures," Diablo told Havoc alot calmer now. The red on his neck fading. Havoc nervous of Diablo�s next move quickly stated "We didn't actually give him the injection, it fell on the groung, the syringe that is, shattering." "Well at least he doesn't have the crap in him. We need more tomorrow we make another raid. Get Raven, Bhall and Marauder.".... A tall stocky man about 6'5" walked in the room his hair jet black cut down to the scalp. His brown skin was covered in black tribal tattoos he wore frameless black Oakleys was dressed in a looses black shirt with black hakamas. "Bhall, raven and marauder have left to get this little puke...uh... Oh yea Ryan. I want you to steal more palladium and bring raiden. Oh and no messy stuff you swigging freak," Diablo told Bhall hiding his anger at Havoc and realizing Bhall will help him get the chemicals to professor Zoindyke |