"Snoddy's Spit-n-Shake Central"
http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Studio/9976/index.html
Phantom's Review: Erm... you see, this page is a bit of a strange one. Talks about Newsies, but keeps referring to the Backstreet Boys... ::shudder::
My thoughts are in normal type, things
quoted off of the pages are in italics.
Hey eveyone! This page is going to be full of NEWSIES
stuff!! (fan-fics, pictures, contests, NEWSIES profiles....all
dat good stuff!)
Ah.. that WOULD be the point of a fan page, wouldn't it...
There will be more added to my page soon! I have been busy
with school lately...what an excuse huh?
That's actually a good excuse. She shouldn't worry about
defending herself with that one. We all know how much time our
schoolwork can take up. Heh.
I have also decided that this page will have some stuff
about Backstreet Boys too!
NOOOOOOO!!! MAKE THE PAIN STOP!!!
And Thanks for stopping by! (I think my html skills are
improving.)
Is that so? Do you mind explaining to me why you simply have red
paragraphs and a few pictures, all left-justified without a bit
of creativity on your page? Wow, man, those are just astonishing
HTML skills.
Now there are two ribbons. One reads: Newsies Always Shake With Spit How cute. The other reads: BSB RULE! Somebody shoot me.
Now there's a picture of the Backstreet Boys ::gags:: and then:
A Successful Sergury!! That is right...Brian's sergury went by
with flying colors!!! YAY!!!
Could we BE more enthusiastic? And WHY can't people spell? For
God's sake, every page I've reviewed has showcased badspelling.
What is with that? Surgery, not sergury. Gaw.
Ah, her links section... um... there's only one link. That's really not much of a links section. Oh look.. that's the end of the page, too. How special.
TEENYBOPPER RATING:
I give this page 3out of 4 toxins. Anything with the BSB is gag-worthy. My advice? Just separate your page in half: a Newsies page and a BSB page. That way, all BSB fans can go and observe that page, while Newsies fans can look at the Newsies stuff without being interrupted by BSB info. It's a simple solution.