My tribute to the Newsies

http://www.geocities.com/Hollywood/Academy/4980/newsies.html

Ariela Lamonte's Review: Ah, don't we all love these "tributes?" There isn't much here. The typical monologue we all know too well, and some pictures.

Since there isn't really anything to quote on this page, I'll just share my opinion.

• The background is perfectly fine newsprint, but the black font is unreadable because of the repetition of red-lettered "Newsies" all over the background.
• The page begins, with the title, and the usual monologue. It seems every page has that these days. *yawn*
• Next we have a picture created by someone else. Not uncommon to newsie pages.
• Ooh a link to something! To the photo gallery! Let's go look! Ah I see various pictures, all of which belong to random other people. Pretty much the same pictures you see on every site.
• What's this? On my way back to the homepage I get one of those perfectly lovely, and yet incredibly annoying javascript promts. Isn't this sweet, it says, '"When I dream on my own, I'm alone but I ain't lonely. For a dreamer night's the only time of day.' --Jack Kelly" isn't that precious? I could cry! Or scream, you choose.
• Next up. Oh! A broken picture. What a find! It's supposed to be the poster.
• And now, ooh big surprise. It's a ribbon. Oh and what a witty and charming saying! "Newsie Fans Unite" I'm touched.
• Next is the one part of the page I like. It's a bit about Dominic Lucero. Not especially informative, but the aknowledgment in itself is nice.
• Oh, but darn, the link (using Dominic's name) doesn't go anywhere. Isn't that a bit expected?

TEENYBOPPER RATING:

I give this page, 2 out of 4 toxins. There isn't a whole lot to incriminate it, and the Dominic Lucero part was nice. Basically it's just boring and needs a kick in the creative arse.

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