RPing Tips
What I look for as a President is Quality. It needs to be interesting. I also look for description in the introduction. Lengthy doesn't usully mean that it has good description. It needs to be as descriptive as humanly possible. HTML is a big factor, I like to see color in role plays. But, the big thing I look at when I am grading a Role Play is their interview. It needs to be very well written, it needs to tell all the facts, what they think of their opponent and if they think they're going to beat them or not. I usually like lengthy speeches, but not a lot of cuss words. Cussing I would like to keep to a bare minimum. Cussing shows a lack of vocabulary and shows you don't know what else to say. Length of a Role Play comes after quality, though I like seeing lengthy RPs, if it totally sucks, then it totally sucks. Usually I will just skim your intro, but if I start and it is great, then I'll read your whole Role Play.
I really hope that that helped you and I hope you take notes on how to improve Role Playing.