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Reflection of Fully Revised Paper

          I decided to fully revise my argument essay. I thought that it would be easiest because I would not have to make too many major changes to the paper. The first thing I did when revising the paper was give it a more appropriate name. Also before making any major changes to the paper, I read through the paper to make minor corrections such as spelling, grammar, and mechanics. Each paragraph in my paper had a few of these minor corrections to make. One major correction I had to do was split up the second paragraph of the original document because I felt it was a little too long. In the original document, the second paragraph was dealing with a lot of the rules and regulations of the NCAA. I decided to split it up so that the first two paragraphs would deal with the rules and the third would be my argument against the rules of the NCAA. Another major change made was explaining and removing some of the dropped quotes within my paper. A few of the quotes were not necessary within the paper, so I decided to remove them. Also in order to make my argument better I had to explain some of the quotes I used in the paper.