The Ultimate Tummy Ficlet
Good Better Best
A dialogue-only ficlet in three parts
I - GOOD
"Good?"
"Hmmm..."
"Lie down?"
"Yeah..."
"Sensitive?"
"Hmmm..."
"Painful then?"
"Just full..."
"I know... It's what you get from eating too many pancakes, baby..."
"Not too many... and they were crepes..."
"Sure, whatever... All I know is that you haven't been able to string full sentences together, you lost the jeans the minute we walked in and you can barely stand me touching you - I think I can safely say you ate too many."
"Hmmm..."
"See?! You can't even argue with me!"
"I guess not..."
"So am I right?"
"Yeah..."
"Good."
- - -
"Good?"
"Hmmm..."
"Want me to keep rubbing for a bit?"
"Hmmm..."
"That's a 'yes'?"
"Hmmm..."
"Geez, Lij! You sure killed off every semblance of eloquence with that last strawberry-and-cream pancake you had. Want me to keep rubbing - yes or no?"
"Hmmm... Y-yes..."
"Then hitch up that shirt..."
"Like... this?"
"That's very good."
- - -
"Good?"
"Yeah... So good..."
"It's the only part left of you that's still boyish, you know?"
"Hmmm?"
"Your tummy - all soft and squishy... I like rubbing it..."
"Not soft..."
"Oh yeah... Very soft. Even now.... Now that it's full. Still very squishy, too..."
"Sounds to me like you perv on my tummy!"
"Oh but I do! In fact - I'd like to blow a raspberry on that bellybutton this very second..."
"Eeep?"
"Oh, don't worry, you ninny... I won't... I know you're in agony right now..."
"Thank you..."
"That's all right."
"Good....."
- - -
"Good?"
"Hmmm... Better..."
"That's good..."
"A bit lower..."
"Making demands now?"
"Please??"
"God - don't beg like that... I want to fuck you when you beg and do that thing with your eyes when you're lying here with your shirt all pushed up..."
"Christ no! Please - no fucking... I'm sure I'd die..."
"I'm sure you would too..."
"So could you just keep rubbing?"
"Hmmm?"
"Please?"
"Sure..."
"Good..."
II - BETTER
"Can I kiss you?"
"Since when do you need to ask?"
"Since I want to kiss your tummy..."
"You're blushing..."
"Shut up and answer the fucking question, Lij."
"You can kiss me, just don't press too hard, okay?"
"I promise this will be the softest, lightest, sweetest kiss you have ever had from me..."
"..."
"See? I bet you didn't feel a thing!"
"You're right... I didn't..."
"Then why are you giving me that look?"
"Because I like to feel something when you kiss me..."
"Anybody ever told you you can be quite impossible?"
'You... On an almost daily basis� But it's okay, I'm used to it... Now kiss me again."
"Hmmm?"
"Please?"
"That's better..."
- - -
"Did that hurt?"
"No, actually... It felt pretty damn good..."
"Want another one?"
"God yes..."
"Like this?"
"Geez... Do it again..."
"..."
"Man, you're good at this..."
"Let's just say your tummy brings out the best in me..."
"That sounded awful, you know that?"
"I do..."
"..."
"..."
"Erm..."
"Yeah?"
"No... Nothing... Never mind..."
"What?!"
"Just forget it... It's stupid anyway..."
"You know what?"
"What?"
"I just confessed my obsession with your tummy tonight. Hell, what am I saying? I just confessed my obsession with your round, squishy, painfully full tummy here, so if there's something you want, no matter how embarrassing, just come out and ask for it, will you?!"
"..."
"Lijah."
"Okay. Okay... I was just wondering... Like... Could you...?"
"What?"
"Could you... erm... Could you lick instead of kiss...?"
- - -
"More?"
"Hmmm... Please..."
"Better than kisses?"
"Ten times better..."
"Good... Oh, and Lij...?"
"Yeah?"
"You still ticklish within a on-mile-radius around your bellybutton?"
"Har har. Yes."
"Damn..."
"Why?"
"I want to kiss it, or lick it, or breathe on it and then I want to watch you squirm."
"Why do you think I would squirm?"
"Wouldn't you?"
"Is it going to be just as soft as those little kitten licks you've been given me these past twenty minutes?"
"Yes..."
"Okay."
"Okay?"
"Okay."
"What do you mean 'okay'?"
"'Okay' as in 'give me little kitten licks in my bellybutton' okay."
"Really?"
"Will you just do it already?"
- - -
"Lij...?"
"Hmmm...?"
"Your boxers are tenting..."
"I... erm... Yeah... I know..."
"Want me to touch you?"
"Still think sex would kill me..."
"Touching you does not automatically add up to sex, Lij... Read the handbook."
"If you start touching me now, I'd want to come. Coming is sex in my handbook."
"Still... I think it's kinda sad... It must be feeling lonely and abandoned inside your boxers, Lij..."
"My dick isn't capable of feeling anything at all... Stop being all weird..."
"I'm not being weird... Can't you see it's just simply begging for attention?"
"Cut it out, will you? It's quite simple, really. First you're rubbing my stomach, then you're kissing it, and now you're licking. I ate too many fucking pancakes-"
"Crepes..."
"Whatever - I ate too many of them. All I'm saying is, I'm really sensitive now, and so I get hard. Big deal."
"It is now..."
"Fuck you..."
"Hehee..."
"..."
"Lijah...?"
"Hmmm..."
"Are you... embarrassed...?"
"Jesus..."
"You're embarrassed."
"I am not embarrassed."
"Then why can't I touch you?"
"..."
"Or maybe... you want to touch yourself?"
"Oh fuck..."
"Lijah...?"
"Yeah...?"
"Want me to take your boxers off?"
III - BEST
"Lij..."
"Hmmm..."
"Lijah... Come on, say something..."
"Hmmm..."
"More kitten licks first?"
"Hmmm..."
"I was under the distinct impression that things were getting better in the eloquence department, but now that I am listening to you it must have been my imagination..."
"Sorry..."
"Oh, so you can speak!"
"Fuck you..."
"I think you just said sex would kill you."
"...ception..."
"You mean to say you'd be willing to make an exception?"
"Hmmm..."
"So '�m asking again - do you want me to take off those boxers?"
"Hmmm..."
"I'll take that as a 'yes' then..."
"Hmmm..."
"There... you... go..."
"Oooh... thanks..."
"Geez...!"
"What?"
"It's just..."
"What!?!"
"You are fucking beautiful..."
- - -
"Lij?"
"Hmmm...?"
"We're being all confessional tonight, right?"
"Guess so... Why?"
"Well..."
"Yeah...?"
"I know it embarrasses you a bit.... but...erm..."
"Come on, spit it out."
"I want to watch you touch yourself..."
"..."
"S-sorry... Stupid. So stupid. Just forget I said anything, okay?"
"..."
"..."
"Would it... like... turn you on?"
"You have no idea."
"So... If I did this..."
"Oh my fucking God..."
"Or... this?"
"Christ, yes... That's it, baby..."
"It really does turn you on..."
- - -
"Still full?"
"Hmmm..."
"Want me to keep rubbing?"
"Hmmm..."
"Oh God, here we go again..."
"Hmmm..."
"I take it that means no more talking while you're wanking?"
"Hmmm..."
"Baby, it's cool... You wank... I'll just rub and watch..."
"..."
"Sweet Jesus, Lij... You're not embarrassed any longer, are you?"
"..."
"You know your tummy's sticking out a bit...?"
"..."
"And it's all hard and soft at the same time?"
"..."
"Want me to lick it again?"
"... Yeah... Please..."
"..."
"Oh, fuck!"
"Want me to lick your bellybutton?"
"Fuck, yeah..."
"..."
"..."
"Jesus, Lij, with two hands!?!"
"...'s best..."
- - -
"Lijah...?"
"..."
"Lijah, baby... You okay...?"
"..."
"C-can I lick your spunk off your tummy?"
"Please..."
"Hmmm..."
"Excuse me?"
"Hmmm..."
"Eloquence, Dom."
FIN
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