The Real Truth 5000 - By Eric Filipkowski

Re-write 12/04/02

Int. Big tobacco office -DAY

A RICH OLD WHITE GUY (ROWG) sits behind a large desk.  Behind him is a sign that reads "Big Tobacco Company".  He looks up and addresses the camera.

Rowg

Oh, hello there.  I wanted to talk to you today about those annoying truth.com ads that claim to tell you 'the real story' about all the harmful side affects of cigarettes.  Sure, smoking causes cancer, we don't deny that, but what those ads so conveniently leave out is that smoking also makes you cool.  Very cool.  But don't just take my word for it, enjoy these short skits about the benefits of looking cool and smoking, as performed by our own Big Tobacco Players. 

Cut to:

Ext. Roof of high school -DAY

A high school student, THE LONER, in a black trench coat walks to the edge of the roof of his school.  The sounds of kids congregating on the lawn below can be heard.  He starts pulling guns out of a large duffle bag.  Out of nowhere, a man in a Superman-like costume with a cigarette logo approaches him.  He is TOBACCO MAN.

Tobacco man

Say there, unpopular loner, you seem troubled, penny for your thoughts?

Loner

My problem is I'm uncool, mysterious stranger.  The girls don't dig me and the fellas think I'm a square.

The Loner closes the bolt on his high-powered rifle and takes aim at the students below.

ToBACCO MAN

Say, have you tried taking up smoking to improve your image?

LONER

Smoking?  But isn't that just for people who are cool?

TOBACCO MAN

(winks)

Exactly!

The Loner, pauses, then smiles.  They both start laughing as the Loner drops his bag of guns and lights up a cigarette with Tobacco Man.

Cut to:

Int. Junior high school locker room -dAY

A scrawny GEEK gets dressed after gym class, some Junior High TOUGHS approach him, menacing smirks on their faces, looking for trouble.

Tough #1

Well, well, well, what have we here?  If it isn't the smartest, and therefore least cool student in school!

Geek

Greetings, high school toughs, what is shaking?

Tough #2

Zip it, nerd.  We're gonna pound the hell out of you until you're as slow and witless as we are!

Geek

Surely you guys would grant a condemned man one final favor?

Toughs

(confused, together)

Huh?

The Geek pulls a pack of cigarettes out of his bag.  The toughs all take a step back in awe.

Tough #1

He's... he's smoking!

Toughs

(all together)

Wow!

The Geek lights up and puffs away.

Tough #2

We're sorry, sir.  We were just kidding around, we didn't mean to bother you.  We'll be going now, sir.

The toughs start to inch away meekly.

Geek

Not so fast, there's that little matter of your lunch money.

The toughs empty their wallets and give a pile of bills to the geek.

GEEK (conT'D)

Now beat it!  I don't want you stealing any of my secondhand smoke.

The toughs scurry away as fast as they can.

Cut to:

Int. missy's bedroom

MISSY, an overweight wallflower, sits on her bed crying.  Her big sister, SISSY, a stunning blonde, enters the room.  She sees her sister crying and goes over to the bed and puts her arm around her.

Sissy

What's wrong, Missy? 

Missy

(sniffle)

Nothing, Sissy.

SISSY

C'mon now, Missy.  I'm your big sister, Sissy, you can tell me anything.

MISSY

Well Sissy, it's just that I can't get boys to like me.  I'm fat and unpopular and know little in the ways of pleasing a man.  At this rate, I'll never land a husband and feel fulfilled in life!

Missy starts sobbing, Sissy takes her head in her arms.

SisSY

There, there, Missy.  I think I know of something that can help.

Sissy puts something in Missy's hand, Missy opens her hand to reveal a pack of cigarettes.

MISSY

Cigarettes?  Sissy, I don't know... doesn't smoking seem a little glamorous and mature for a Plain Jane like myself.

SISSY

Well Missy, if you start puffing away, you won't be a Plain Jane for long!  And smoking never hurts when you have a weight problem, either. 

Sissy pokes Missy in the stomach.

Sissy (conT'D)

They don't call them 'Slims' for nothing!

Missy brightens up as she takes a cigarette out. 

MISSY

Sissy, you're the best, I love you!

SISSY

I love you too, Missy.  Now smoke up, put on something slutty and before you know it, you'll be full of babies!

They hug.

Cut to:

Int. Big TOBACCO OFFICE -moments later

The Rich Old White Guy is now sitting on the front of his desk, addressing the camera in a casual manner, holding a cigarette.

Rowg

So when it comes down to it, we here at theREALtruth.com just want to give you both sides of the story, so you can make an informed decision.  We're not the bad guys here.  We're not the ones telling you to sacrifice coolness and popularity for the sake of clean lungs: something inside you that you can't even see!  Show me one person who ever became cool by being healthy and I'll buy you an iron lung.  Really kids, if you smoke, most likely you probably will definitely get cancer, but that won't be for years.  And everyone knows being old is no fun anyway.  Why not enjoy life while you can?  So by all means, enjoy that rich tobacco flavor, not to mention the admiration of your peers, and smoke up!

Fade out.

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