| Panel Twenty Panel One: Bottom of stairs, interior, night. Jack has walked over to McManus and gut boy to grab two smokes. He�s holding them both out for a light. McManus has the shotgun under his arm and over him forearm so he has the use of his hands to light Jack�s cigarettes. MCMANUS: I wasn�t sure who sold me out until you got here. JACK: Really? MCMANUS: Yeah that�s what I was trying to tell you. GUT BOY: I-I can�t feel my legs oh god it�s s-so cold. JACK: What�s that? MCMANUS: That if you�re here then I�m going to kill Tyler. Panel Two: Room exit, interior, night. They are walking away from the bodies and gut boy. They talk as they walk. GUT BOY: D-DON�T leave me here! JACK: To be honest I didn�t even know you were hear. MCMANUS: Then what the fuck are you doing here? JACK: They broke my nose, I though you were dead. Panel Three: Hallway2, interior, night. They are walking down a hallway from the room the were just in behind them is the entrance they used to get in the hallway. We can still hear and see the man dying. They have their guns out again as if they know something is about to happen. GUT BOY: H-Help me you bastards. MCMANUS and JACK: HAHAHAHA JACK: Ah that is funny. MCMANUS: Huh-huh ah yeah that�s good. Panel Four: Hallyway2, interior, night. They�ve reached a door and each take a side on it with guns ready. They look at each other and the laugher has stoped, but they both have a smirk on their face. Well not McManus but he�s trying. Page Twenty-one Panel One: Lobby, interior, night. We can see where Jacks explosion took place and men are still trapped under the rubble. The door that Jack and mcManus are about to come out of has a guy leaning against it. The other man looks at the rubble is disbelief. Man at rubble: For fuck sakes. Panel Two: Lobby, interior, night. Mcmanus kicks the door and the man leaning against it goes flying. This is a tight shot on the door so we can�t see what the other man is doing. Mcmanus is holding his shot gun ready too shoot and behind him is Jack with a hand gun. Man at door: SHIT! Panel Three: Lobby, interior, night. Close up on the man that has fallen. He�s on his hands and knees looking back at McManus or at us. He is shot in the face by McManus shotgun. So his face is gone. SFX: BLAM BLAM Panel Four: Lobby, interior, night. Tight shot on Jack and McManus standing next to each other firing. Hence why last panel why there were two blams. McManus is pointing his down to the man on the floor we saw in the last panel. Jack is getting the other guy at the rubble that we can�t see. SFX: BLAM BLAM Panel Five: Lobby, interior, night. The man at rubble is taken off his feet by a shot to the chest and his gun flies out of his hands. SFX: BLAM. Panel Six: Lobby, interior, night. They are walking across the room to the hole in the wall. Jack is limping and McManus is dragging his shotgun on the ground. This is from behind them as they leave. JACK: That was really easy. MCMANUS: Yeah it was I guess we got lucky. |
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