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| Ever wonder how much a story can change in revisions? Look at Concorde. How about something smaller, say, a chapter in a book. Here's a good example. First we have the original chapter "Leathal Response" from The Elite Eagles, by Jye Meier. Next is the revised version, by both authors, as it appears in the 2003 revisions of the book. Enjoy! |
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| Leathal Response |
| Jye R. Meier and Brian R. Kupfer |