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SITE NAME: Sugar City
SITE URL: http://www.geocities.com/x_sugar_city_x
Linked Me?: 5/5
First Impression: 7/10
Splash Page: 4/5
Layout Design: 7/10
Content: 3/10
Originality: 3/5
Tidiness: 4/5
Purpose: 7/10
Attitude/Effort: 8/10
Bonus: 5/10
OVERALL GRADE: B
Comments: This is a great start! You've clearly thought carefully about what you want in your site, and had your own ideas, such as the 'Amy' page and 'The Story of Lissa the Dollie.' All you need to do now is carry on updating with more content, and you'll soon be flooded with visitors!
SITE NAME: AB Dream Land
SITE URL: http://www.freewebs.com/abdreamland
Linked Me?: 0/5
First Impression: 8/10
Splash Page: 3/5
Layout Design: 6/10
Content: 9/10
Originality: 4/5
Tidiness: 3/5
Purpose: 8/10
Attitude/Effort: 8/10
Bonus: 6/10
OVERALL GRADE: B
Comments: You have real potential here. With a grade 'B', you're off to a great start, but there are a few essential changes that need to be made. One major problem is the font - yes, it's pretty, and works well in the top banner, but is so difficult to read in small print. Either make it bigger or choose another font for small text. You have TONS of games - FAB! I love the originality in that section too - I've never come across the 'Possesed' thing before, cool! The splash page and layout are quite minimalistic and simple, but as you're so young, you have shown quite a good understanding of HTML, well done! The frames are quite common, but good practice for your web design. You haven't got loads of graphics for visitors, but the ones you do have are of a good quality. I didn't see anywhere where you linked back to me - that could've earnt you an extra five points. But I've given you a six points bonus as you've clearly put a lot of effort into this site. Before you do anything else, I strongly suggest you change the font of the text - it's good to have so much content, but visitors are more likely to come back if they can actually read it! Other than that, you've done a good job - keep it up!
SITE NAME: Individuality
SITE URL: http://www.individuality.vze.com
Linked Me?: 0/5
First Impression: 9/10
Splash Page: 4/5
Layout Design: 9/10
Content: 10/10
Originality: 4/5
Tidiness: 5/5
Purpose: 9/10
Attitude/Effort: 10/10
Bonus: 8/10
OVERALL GRADE: A
Comments: Ok, *deep breath.* One word: WOW. I am SO amazed by this site. It's just...FANTABULISTIC!! :) Let's begin with the splash page...this was good, it was simple and had everything you'd need on a splash page. The layout: you made it?! BRILLIANT. Absoloutely BRILLIANT. It's SO SO acttractive and the Dollies in the top banner look EXACTLY like you! (Appart from the ears lol) Accident? You have TONS of content, and it's all of such a high quality - what graphics package do you use? I LOVE the site name...it sums up your site just nicely. :) You have tons of stuff for visitors, and that's a MAJOR plus - you've even taught me some new stuff I didn't know about HTML - thanks! The whole site is just so neat and tidy, and you've obviously worked MEGA hard on this - well done! I've given you some bonus points as I was so blown away by your site overall. The only thing I can slate you on is that I didn't see a link back to me anywhere - no worries, just make sure you link back if you put this review up. :) There's a nice big 'A' grade for ya, Jen!
SITE NAME: Silver Dreams
SITE URL: http://www.freeweb.com/half_magic02
Linked Me?: 5/5
First Impression: 8/10
Splash Page: 4/5
Layout Design: 8/10
Content: 10/10
Originality: 3/5
Tidiness: 4/5
Purpose: 8/10
Attitude/Effort: 9/10
Bonus: 6/10
OVERALL GRADE: A
Comments: I'm really loving this site. The splash page loads weirdly at first, but loads quickly and sorts itself out. Thanks for linking me! You earnt an extra five points for that. :) The great thing about this site is the content - there's a fair amount of it and it's all such a FANTASTIC quality, well done! :) There's TONS of games and stuff to do, and all your graphics have obviously been carefully designed, as they're all so unique, great! The menu is in a tidy order, and it's clear you've put A LOT of effort into this site - you have a GREAT attitude, which is an essential in web design: 'A' grade Ginny, woot woo!! :)
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