Clear Opinion:
Many people have different opinions on whether people under twenty one should be able to drink, and I agree with some of them.

One Main Idea:
The proposed no smoking ordinance in our town will violate a number of our citizens’ civil rights, and no one has proved secondary smoke is dangerous anyway.

Worthwhile:
Dog’s have always been man’s best friend.

Friends are very important.

Specific terms:
The Women’s Movement has been good for our country.

Registration is a big hassle.

Prepare a reader for facts and details
The first polygraph was developed by Dr. John A. Larson in 1921.

Because the polygraph has not been proved reliable, even under the most controlled conditions, its use by private employers should be banned.(Improved thesis)

Practice (These theses need improvement):
1. Applying for a job can be a negative experience.
2. Skiing is a lot of fun, but it can be expensive and dangerous.
3. In this paper I will debate the pros and cons of the motorcycle helmet law.
4. The gun-control laws in this country need to be rewritten.
5. Being an international student can be fun.
6. Living in graduate student housing is a good way to learn things.
7. In my opinion, Claremont is a fantastic vacation spot.