| Denial ([email protected]) 2002-12-10 I like your Witchblade fan fiction, and I appreciate your review. I'm a big fan of the Darkness series, but it never occured to me to write fan fiction based on a comic. You took a good idea and ran with it, I like your flow, really handleing the dialogue well. Ill keep an eye out for more comic based story, thanks for the good read. Venus Smurf ([email protected]) 2002-10-22 Awww! That's so sad! Are you going to expand on this at all? I promise to worship you if you somehow find a way to resurrect Ian. He's too compelling a character to kill off. This was great, either way. You've got a true gift with language, and I sincerely hope you continue to exercise it. The world needs more authors like yourself. KatrinaHawke ([email protected]) 2002-09-27 Awesome vignette... when are you going to write the story that goes along w/it? Soon, I hope... Katrina Spin 2002-09-16 A bittesweet and moving piece! A wonderful job well done!! =) Oldemystic 2002-09-15 A gem of a short story. It was powerful, moving, and (for me) was an unconsidered end to the Sara/Ian story. Although it raises many question, especially: "Who got the better of Nottingham?", I feel that adding to it would diminish what you have written. A well-done, haunting moment. Two-thumbs up! LaFemmeLurker 2002-09-15 Damn!! That was very powerful. It left me wanting for more. Thanks for sharing. P.S. It is not crap. Jenileigh 2002-09-14 I thought that was very good! Lady Hawke 2002-09-14 Oh please oh please oh please oh please finish it and please don't let Ian really be dead!!!!! Great story, you did a great job! Keep writing! Divamercury 2002-09-14 Awesome but sad. I liked it, but I wish it had been a little longer. Great job! ~DM |
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