Author's Note: This is part 4 of my Beautiful Angel series....
You'll want to read parts 1-3 first.
Thank you all who reviews or sent me comments through e-mail!
Sorry for any major spelling or grammar errors... my reviewer was unavailable and
I wanted to get this up ASAP... if there��s anything major, I��ll edit the chapter :)
Beautiful Angel part 4: Consequences
Logan looked up at Syl. "How long until she wakes up?"
"It shouldn't be long. I didn't give her enough to knock her out for to long."
Logan got up and got a wet towel. He returned and sat with Max, wiping the blood away from
her head.
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Renfro was on the phone in seconds. "Prepare to move out. We need 2 teams. We have 2,
possibly 3, X5s."
The teams were ready to go in 10 minutes. They were all in 4 combat cars and one pulled around
for Renfro. When she got in the passenger side, she could see Brin and Zane sitting in the back.
And they were off.
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Max started to come around almost 30 minutes later. She looked up at Logan and reached up a hand
to touch his face. He took it and kissed it.
""Good morning, Beautiful Angel.""
She smiled. ""Logan...""
That��s when Logan��s front door crashed open. Krit stood between Max and Logan and the front door,
and Syl looked out the building and the building across the street. She hurried over and helping
her brother fight the men coming in.
Max, who was unlocked from the cuffs, started to get up. Logan put an arm around her waist.
""I��ve gotta help them.""
""No. I��ve gotta get you outta here.""
After about 2 steps, Max stumbled. Logan caught her before she hit the ground and picked her up.
She watched helplessly as Krit and Syl fought everyone coming in.
Bren came in next, followed by Renfro. Zane came swinging in through the already-destroyed window.
Krit finished off the one she was fighting and hurried to the other side of Logan to fight Zane.
""Get out of here, now!"" Syl yelled.
""There��s no where to go!"" Logan yelled back. ""We��re trapped!""
Renfro walked in as Bren pulled Syl��s arms behind her back. ""Take her back to Manticore."" Brin
pulled her through the door and dragged her downstairs. As Zane kept Krit busy, Renfro moved closer
to Logan and Max.
""Put the X5 down,"" Renfro ordered.
""Never.""
""She doesn��t belong here, with you. She belongs with her family.""
""She doesn��t BELONG to anyone. We��re her real family, so you can just move on and go back to the
hole you came from.""
Renfro let out a little laugh. Into her headset she said, ""Send X5-734 back up here.""
""Run, Logan!"" Krit called.
""We��re not leaving you,"" Max said weakly.
""Go, I��ll be fine.""
Logan started to the door, but Bren showed up. She punched Logan across the face and grabbed Max.
Max fought her sister and fell to the ground. She stood up, but being so weak, a seizure started to
wrack her body.
Logan sat up and crawled over to Max. She was on her side, holding her legs to her chest, hoping
the seizure would pass. He put a hand on her side and the other on her head.
Krit got the upper hand with Zane and kicked him out the window. He ran over to where Max laid and
kicked Bren across the room.
Logan picked Max up and while Bren was getting up, Max, Logan, and Krit ran out of the Penthouse.
Bren got up and was about to run after them, when Renfro put a hand on her shoulder. Into her
headset, she said, ""Dispatch. Head home. Let them get away. It��s over.""
Bren turned to her. ""Permission to speak, ma��am?""
""Denied. I know what you��re going to say. Trust me. In the long run, we��ll win.""
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Krit kicked in the door to one of the many abandoned warehouses and the threesome walked in. Krit
shut the door behind them and Logan sat Max down. He took his coat off and put Max��s head on it.
Krit handed Logan a couple of tryptophan pills.
""Where��d you get these?"" Logan asked.
""You think Max is the only one who gets seizures? She gets them worse and more frequent than most
of us.""
Max opened her mouth and Logan put the pills in. She swallowed them and reached for Logan��s hand.
""You��re going to be okay,"" he whispered, taking her hand.
""Were are they?"" she asked.
""They must have retreated,"" Krit said.
Someone kicked the door in and both Logan and Krit got up. Syl brought her head up and smiled.
""Syl? I thought Bren had you,"" Krit said.
""They did. I��m sure Renfro won��t be happy to see 15 of her men ��sleepin�� on the job��.""
""Good work, sis.""
""How��s Maxie?""
Max got up on shaky legs. ""I think I��ll be okay."" She grabbed onto Logan��s arm to keep from
falling over. ""I always am.""
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The End.................................................?
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I know, the end��s kinda lame... sorrie... I��m planning a sequel to ""Beautiful Angel"". It may
take a while cuz I have finales I have to study for and take with in the next week or so. I��m
going to try and put it all out in one shot, not in chapters like this one :) But, you never know.
Please tell me what you think!
I just want to thank all of you, again, who reviewed my story had something to say every chapter :)
Thanx for all the tips and info on the show in general, thanx guys! *Princess Leia Solo PS: Did I
spell triptophan right? How do you spell it??? :) hehehe
