Response
                                                                                                               Danny Avila
                                                                                                                      Period 2
                                                                                                      September 27, 2004

     I taught that the intro was very boring, I really didnt get it that much.  Who ever made this website could have done a much better job by adding sound and maybe even animations , maybe that would have made it even a little bit more interesting and scaries.  The only good part was probably when some girl asks "Who is it, Ann? Who is tormenting you?"  Ann shrieks and flaps and runs, "Tell us, Ann. Tell us.  And then she turns and looks thr the torturer which ends up being me or who ever the reader is, and there is no "The clammy air that seeps through your skin"  I really didnt get like that scared of this, I mean I;ve seen a scarier Disney movie. LOL
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