Rating: 7/10 (well it is my first attempt)
Dalmo�s comments: Hopefully you�ll like it. It�s based on the game so it�s easier to follow the plot. Plus thier are one or two more added pieces of info than on the game. Short Chapters.
Final Fantasy VIII - New - Prologue, Introduction and Chapter 1
Prologue:
In the world of Spira three sorceresses ruled. Ultimicia, Adel and Edea are their names, each possesses magic of great darkness. Ultimicia, the strongest, possesses the power of time. Adel, A.K.A. the gateway of time, is next in line of strength. She possesses the power of Black Magic. Last of all is Edea, not known by anyone the power she possesses but she is known for creating SeeD, Special Forces that must defeat the evil sorceresses and the school of Balamb Garden where our story begins.
Introduction:
Two candidates of SeeD and bitter rivals are training in the fields of Balamb. It first started off as training yet soon became a vigorous battle and before you knew it both were beat up and battered.
Chapter 1:
The young man with dark brown hair opened his eyes and saw a woman wearing a bright white coat and rounded glasses stood over him �Ah you�re awake, how are you feeling?�
�Ok I guess but how did I get here Dr Kadowaki?�
� I�ll tell you in a minute but first I need to ask you a few questions. What is your name and your candidate number?� asked Dr Kadowaki. Squall looked to his right, to the glass and saw a young woman wearing blue with brown hair stood behind the glass. Squall sharply looked back at the doctor and answered,
�My name is Squall Leonheart and my candidate number is um� 2404649. A woman wearing a grey blouse and sharp blonde hair walks in through the door.
�Oh Squall, what have you been up to now? C�mon you have class now, better there than here.� Squall nodded and got up from the bed and began to follow the woman out of the door.
�Thank you doctor.� Said Squall solemly, just before the automated doors closed.
Squall and the blonde haired girl walked up to corridor. Squall stopped and looked at the floor.
"What's wrong Squall, you seem down?"
"Well I just don't feel comfortable today"