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Okay,now sadly I didn't finish the one I'm working on now,so I'll have to post an old one.But its still a great one I wrote in 6th grade.I wrote it for my writing teacher Ms.Fogle,for she was holding a scary story competetion,and this story one first place,which means I got a 100,got a goody bag of treats,and she read it to EVERY CLASS!!^^ Here it is:


"The Hall Pass"

"It was a couple of weeks before Halloween,when the weirdness began.A girl raised her hand in Ms.Fogle's class and asked if she could go to the Nurse's office.Ms.Fogle,who by the way,is kind and wonderful- said "yes".Many minutes passed by,and yet the girl did not return to the class.Ms.Fogle then sent another girl from the class to go and see why the first girl had not returned.Again,the minutes ticked by,and both girls failed to return.Ms.Fogle told the class;"I'm going to see what in the world is going on"- and before she could finish her sentence,the lights starting flickering in the room.Ms.Fogle told the class she was going to go to the office and that she would return soon.After she left,the kids in class started to feel creepy- what was going on - two missing students,and the lights flickering off and on?Things were even creepier for Ms.Fogle though- as she walked out of the classroom, she could swore someone,or something pushed the door shut behind her.In the hallway the lights were flickering off and on too,and there appeared to be a sickly green color to what light was left. Stranger still,no one was moving in the halls,and not a single sound could be heard!Ms.Fogle tried to peek in the other rooms,but the doors wouldn't open.She noticed that the doorknobs felt hot- almost like they were on fire.When she peeked into the windows on each door,they were completely black inside,so she couldn't see a thing.Ms.Fogle was beginning to feel creeped out so she started walking real fast to the Principal's office.Then she head footsteps behind her -she stopped and turned around,but no one was there.She started walking on again - and this time she was sure she heard the footsteps again. She turned around thought, and no one was there.She walked slower - and she heard slow footsteps behind her.She walked faster,and the footsteps following her became faster.Whoever or whatever was behind her seemed to try and match Ms.Fogle's pace. Also,each time Ma.Fogle took a step the lights started going on - one light with each step.By the time she made it to the office it was so dark that she couldn't see. She called out the staff's names, but no one responded.Standing there,alone in the dark,she felt some icy fingers tap her on the shoulder,but she was too scared to turn around.Then a female said in a weird hissing voice - "follow me,follow me".Then the person or whatever it was let out a slow,creepy giggle.Ms.Fogle was so scared that she started running down the hall and when she did so, she saw the girl's bathroom door swinged open - strangely the lights were on in the bathroom, and someone walked into the girl's bathroom.Ms.Fogle went inside to look around and see who the person was,but no one was in the bathroom!Then she heard footsteps again,but these sounded different - they made a "clicking" noise.She looked down,and a pair of high heel shoes were walking across the floor by themselves.The "ghost shoes" were walking toward Ms.Fogle. They finally stopped right at her own feet.She started to shriek,but a weird sound - like metal being twisted - startled her. She looked to where the sound came from,and the sink was turning on by itself.Instead of water, the faucet started pouring out blood!


Ms.Gogle heard laughter, and she looked into the bathroom mirror, and saw that five people - or beings, were wearing hooded,yellow raincoats. They did not have faces, but only red eyes. They were waving at her.She slowly turned around, but no one was there.She looked into the mirror again and this time, instead of the creatures or herself, she saw a smoky image,like shadows.The image started to grow more and more clear and a face could be seen.It had wild eyes and long,pointed teeth.Instead of just fangs,it had an entire mouth full of sharp,pointed teeth that it was chattering together and smiling at her.Then the face started singing: "Its raining blood,its raining blood,come and seeeeeee" - and all of the sudden a huge,black umbrella started to open up.It had a sharp,metal tip at the top, and it actually started to come out of the mirror.The hooked handle of the umbrella was trying to reach for Ms.Fogle's hand,and actually pull her into the mirror.Ms.Fogle screamed,and when she did,she looked around and saw that she was back into the classroom.Ms.Fogle then realized it was all a dream.She had fallen asleep at her desk.She was so relieved that it was just a nightmare.At that moment though,one of the girls in the class - the exact same one from the dream, raised her hand to see is she could go to the Nurse's office, and worst of all,the lights began flickering off and on..."


THE END


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