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Movie: American Beauty

Bullet train

Tanka Nine


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[Movie: American Beauty]

[American Beauty] which lighted up

to the Academy Award 5 section winning a prize.
This work is drawn with merry and cynical fully
of which the state that just common salaried worker
home goes out of gear.
The development which makes amusement and cruelty cross
and which is drawn is the a feeling of loneliness
that a modern holds it.
Kevin Spacey and his wife Annette Bening
live in a house as a middle-class family.
Rather many Japanese people are feeling
their selves as a middle class.
Though I saw this film and realized that
American house is rather bigger and wider than that.
There is a yard or a pool at back too.
They have a car and a garage, of course.
A family can retain these wide space,
it due to a big country.
It must be the land price is low
and a real estate tax is cheap.
I hear that space is more than 10 times
compare with the town in Japan.
Then, their resident area is no limited spread out
on the outskirts of the city.
I could get a sense of that structure through this film.
Sure you need a car absolutely.
I always run my moped to go to downtown or shopping
but it would be useless in America.
Kevin Spacey loves Mena Suvari who is a school friend
of his daughter Thora Birch.
There is a proverb in Japan.
"Newer wife and tatami mat is better than old"
It is a common rule Man loves younger girl in the world.
If I could see from this point of view,
American and Japanese is not so much different.
Drop tantalizing hints of disgraceful scene.
A risky attempting both of Thora Birch and Wes Bently.
Annette does having affairs and hold a gun.
At the last, she killed her husband by the gun.
This movie got Academy Award 5 section winning a prize.
Though, I don't understand fully
which point is worth taking Award.


Itsuki Hiramatu May 20, 2000

Itsuki Hiramatu © Copyright, 2000

(2387, 000519)


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Bullet train

Bullet train
I set a camera
To shot a sinkansen
Here is a mile far away
From Hiroshima station
I wait for a bullet train
In the afternoon
The sun still high position
Oh! Here comes again!
With sun on the head
I need a best shot
Already speed is over 100 miles per hour
Limited time
One chance shatter
Rather quietly run passes away
With high speed
At moment time
It is like nothing happen!
After
Checking my best shot
Uhm!
My best shatter point is
Slipping out of place
Yes it is hard to take a picture
About a bullet train


Itsuki Hiramatu May 21, 2000

Itsuki Hiramatu © Copyright, 2000

(2392, 000521)


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Tanka Nine

In Japanese:

yuugreni.......5
madoyorimieru...7
bonyarito.......5
soranoyuuutu...7
cannbi-runoaji...7

     

English Translation:

At evening twilight
See from the window
Absentmindedly
Gloomy atmosphere in the sky
Is it my caned beer's taste!


Itsuki Hiramatu May 22, 2000

Itsuki Hiramatu © Copyright, 2000

(2394, 000522)


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