ROOM RAIDERS

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Part 1

***** �s POV*****
RING RING
I ran all the way up to my room when I heard my phone ringing loudly upstairs, I picked it up from the bed and saw my best mate�s number and her pic showed on the screen
�Hellow dumber!� I asked cheekily and sat on the edge of the bed
�Hi missy, how you doing?�
�Taking to you silly! Anyway why you calling me for?� I asked as I played with my hair
�Nufin important actually, but do you know the new MTV program???� She replied excitedly
�No, today I was busy with my own business. I hardly watch telly today,� I admitted and sighed
�Come on don�t be so dumb!�
�Hey I�m honest I dunno what you are talking about, you made soooo much fuss girl!� I giggled
�Ok, so there�s a new reality show called �Room Raiders� and it�s bloody hell wicked!� She promoted
�What�s so wicked about that program? Bet anova rubbish program!�
�It�s for a girl or a boy who wants to have a date, but not like blind date��
�I mean it�s almost the same as blind date but kinda different,� She added stupidly, I laughed when she said that
�So tell me about that program then?�
�You�ll choose your date partner from only looking their bedroom and house, but firstly you won�t see them or even talk to them. You have to decide which room you like best and in the end of the show you�ll meet with them and you�re gonna know who�s room isit!� She explained
�Alright sounds interesting, but do they see your face or something?�
�Well yeah nice question!� She said and I giggled
�They see you�re messing up their bedroom from the camera that follows you around but you can�t see them until you decide which room you like best,�
�So if I already choose the room I like best, what will happen next?�
�You�ll meet him and have a date with him, the next it�s up to you two!�
�Why are you telling me this program for anyway?�
I just want you to move on, get a new life and forget about the bastard!� I sighed as I heard �s name. He�s my ex-boyfriend who dumped me a few weeks back. I asked him the reason why and he told me I�m too young for him, stupid excuses I know it! I�m still 16 years old (Well almost 17!) and he�s 21 years old, for me age doesn�t matter as you both love each other but has a different view about our relationship. He wants to have a girlfriend who more mature than me, so why he asked me out in the first place then????
are you listening to me???� �s voice echoed in my mind
�Yeah I am,�
�What do you think?� She asked again
�What ? Sorry I was out off mind easily this week,� I replied softly and hoped she wouldn�t hear it
�I�m gonna send your profile to MTV and hope they will call you for that program!�
�I�m not interested, I�m sorry��
I know you still have feelings for that dumb bastard who only thinks for himself, what�s his name again?�
,�
�Yeah whoever he is!�
�But I�m not interested so it�ll be useless, I won�t enjoy it! By the way there�re so many girls outside who wants maybe,�
�Ok I won�t force you sweetie, I have to go now! Talk to you laterzzz!!!� She hung up the phone and I released a deep breath�

3 DAYS LATER

I was drinking my milkshake in front of my telly after I went home from work; I work as a waiter in one local restaurant in town. I still need extra money for my daily need, my parents live in New York and I left here alone by myself. I�m a student in the St. Lawrence College and I don�t have brother or sister here in the UK, all my families live in my hometown. I switched the channel to MTV and saw �Room Raiders� playing, I saw it for a bit and noticed it�s a good TV show. I took my mobile phone from the table and texted
�Hey gurl, I saw the program u told me bout! It�s not bad tho�so see you later at skul
xXx xXx�
A minute later, I got the replied
�I knew u�ll like it ;) anyway I have to go, still got something to sort out! Luv ya hunnie�- -�
I smiled as I read the message; I sighed before walking to the bathroom and took a bath�

***** �s POV*****
I�m staring at the dumb telly at �s house after we�re doing our sound check for the next summer gig
�Earth calling to !!!� I blinked a few times when I felt �s hand on my right shoulder
�Yeah man wassup!�
�Nufin mate we�re just wondering what�s wrong with you?� He asked and switched off the telly
�Dunno, I think I�m too tired and need a rest!�
�Go home mate!� suggested
�You right, I better go home now!� I got up from my seat and grabbed my car keys on the table
�I come with you,� smiled and grabbed his jacket
�You both going home then count me in,� laughed
�Aw you all want to go home this fast?� asked and put a silly face
�Sorry , but we�ll see ya later!� I said and gave him a hug
�Okies no probbie friends! See you and have a nice rest!� He winked as he followed us to my car, got to the passenger�s seat while sat in the backseat
�Bye !!!� We all waved him goodbye
�Bye!!!� He waved back and I drove away. First I dropped to his house and next who only a few blocks away from mine
�Thanks for the ride, bye!!!� said as he walked out off the car
�No probbie mate, see ya!� I closed the window and drove to my house�

THE NEXT DAY
I woke up very late today, it was 10am when I woke up, my room looked messed up and I had all the dirty clothes from the summer gig�s around the floor. I walked to the kitchen and opened the fridge to see if I have something to eat
�Damn, I have nothing to eat!� I moaned and grabbed the cereal and fresh milk out
�Cereal again for the breakfast,� I said to myself as I poured the milk and cereal into the bowl

RING RING
I walked to the living room holding my cereal with me
�Yupz �s talking!� I said as I put a mouthful cereal into my mouth
we�ll have interview with MTV UK this afternoon, be ready!� Johnny B said and didn�t gimme chance to replied cos he hung up the phone immediately
�Anova tired afternoon today,� I mumbled and rolled my eyes. After I finished with my breakfast, I put the dirty bowl into the kitchen sink and thought I�ll wash the dishes tomorrow. I looked the clock and realized it�s already this late
�Damn, it�s 11am already!� I said as I ran to the bathroom and took a fresh long shower�

***** �s POV*****
This morning told me we�ll go shopping at 1pm today, so I prepared myself before she�s coming to pick me up. I cleaned my kitchen and my room first, I�m an organized girl and I don�t like to see my house in a mess. I wore my fave outfits, they were old rebel jeans and white tube top with a velvet rose on the right side. I finished cleaning my house and it was only 12.30pm, I heard someone knocked my door

*KNOCK KNOCK*
�Yeah I�m on my way!!!� I screamed as I washed my hands, I opened the door and shocked when I saw TV camera and two strangers� people
�Come on follow us!� One of them said and grabbed me away from the door
�Hey wait up what are you doing!� I asked confused
�We�re from MTV �Room Raiders� and you�re the next contestant, so come on follow us!� They grabbed me and pulled me to the big white car, my pulses racing madly as I was in the car
�Sorry for scaring you like that,� A middle age woman said warmly
�It�s ok, I think I�m used to it!� I replied still a bit shock
�So we received your letter and you said you want to be the next searcher at �Room Raiders� and that�s why we came without letting you know first because we want you�re not trying to hide something from your bedroom�� She explained as she gave me a can of coke
�Ok but I think I never sent that kinda letter,�
�This is yours right, 46 Bridge Street DD10 9DE UK!� She showed me the letter and I saw my address on it
�Yep that�s correct, I mean that�s my address��
�So right now you�re going to 4 men�s house and mess their bedroom a bit,� She winked at me
�What am I gonna do?� I asked
�You�re only gonna look at their bedroom and decide which one you like best for your date tonight,�
�Ain�t it too private?�
�No it�s the deal with the guys, and this is your spy tools!� She handed me a silver box bag
�What�s it?� I asked and opened it; I saw three different tools in there. Rubber gloves, black light and tongs
�That�s your spy tools, rubber gloves are for when you don�t want to touch something nasty with your bare hands. Black light is to test their bed, is it clean or not, and tongs is to take something nasty too��
�I understand,� I smiled as I thought I�m now interested
�Do I know the guys?� I asked
�Nope you won�t see them until you decide,�
�Ok then, so now we�re gonna take the first scene!� She added
�Just open the car�s window and introduce yourself so the guys will know who you are,� She commanded and clapped her hands for the camera operator to get ready
�Ok, 1�2�3�action!�

Part 2

***** �s POV*****
I sang softly as I walked out from the bathroom, I opened my wardrobe and took my jeans and T-shirt. Half hour later I�m standing in front of my mirror styling my hair

KNOCK KNOCK
I heard the door knocked, I quickly sprayed my perfume on my neck and walked downstairs. I opened the door and shocked when I saw TV camera and two strangers� people
�Come on follow us!� One of them grabbed me to the big white van
�Hey cool down! What do you want???� I asked a bit rude
�We�ll tell you later!� They pushed me to the van and I saw another guys there
�Hey !!!� They said together and I looked confused
�We dunno what the heck happen too,� said as he read my mind, suddenly a van�s door opened and we saw a man got in
�So sorry guys for being rude at you, I�m Michael from MTV �Room Raiders� and nice to meet you all!� He said and shook our hands one by one
�Well what�s all this about?� asked eagerly
�We met with your manager and asked him about it and he said yes. So right I�ll tell, you�ll see one girl mess your room a bit and in the end she�ll be your date BUT only one of you. Let�s just say it�s like blind date but here you can see her face and see what�s she�s doing with your bedroom!�
�Whoa!!!� yelled and only went laughing
�You can see the girl�s doing from the monitor there,� He pointed the TV monitor in front of us
�DAMN BUT MY ROOM LOOKS LIKE HELL!!!� I screamed
�That�s why we didn�t tell you first. If we tell you we know you would hide something!� Michael said
�So the point is she�ll choose one of us to be her date tonight only with seeing our bedrooms???� asked unsure
�Correct ,� Michael nodded, I put my hands to covered my face �So ready to see guys?� Michael added and we all only nodded softly

***** �s POV*****
Before I took the first scene, I did my make-up first
be ready in 3 seconds, 3�2�1�action!� Sarah commanded and I slowly took a deep breath, I opened the car�s window and looked at camera
�Hi guys I�m and I�m 16 years old and well almost 17 years old, I�ll be your date tonight but I have to choose one of you only with looking your bedroom! So let�s go to find out and I hope you cleaned it!� I smiled and closed the window�s car again
�CUT!!! Good , so now let�s go to the first house!� Sarah said as we drove to the first house
�Scene two, you show them your spy tools! Ready in 3 seconds!� She said again and camera on
�So this is my spy tools, let�s see what�s in it!� I said as opened the box
�We got rubber gloves, black light and tongs! Anyway we arrived at the first house and let�s go to check it out, I can�t wait!�
�CUT!!! Very nice, so now go out the car and the camera will follow you! Before you go to the bedroom, check the kitchen and living room!� Sarah explained
�Ok I understand,� I said and took the spy tools with me

***** �s POV*****
We saw the monitor on and we saw a young beautiful girl opened the car�s window
�Hi guys I�m and I�m 16 years old and well almost 17 years old, I�ll be your date tonight but I have to choose one of you only with looking your bedroom! So let�s go to find out and I hope you cleaned it!� She said with a very wonderful smile
�That�s her, she�ll choose one of you to be her date!� Michael whispered as the camera recorded what we�re talking about
�Bloody hell she�s HOT!!!� cried in joy
�I hope she�ll pick me tonight,� said and shook his head, only made a wolf whistled
�SHE�S DEFO BEAUTIFUL!� I said in one breath
�Quite let�s see what�s she�s doing now!� hissed and stared at the monitor. She�s sitting in the car and holding a bag
�So this is my spy tools, let�s see what�s in it!� She said as opened the box
�We got rubber gloves, black light and tongs! Anyway we arrived at the first house and let�s go to check it out, I can�t wait!�
�Whoa she has spy tools!!!� We all said together
�Who�s house number one?� I asked curiously. We saw her got out off the car bring the spy tools with her
�We arrived at house number one, come on follow me to check out the house!� She got to the front of the house
�THAT�S MY HOUSE!!!!� yelled
�Cool down mate, hope you cleaned the whole house!� giggled and hissed to make us quite again
�It�s a big house and very modern, I won�t see how big this house is but how clean this house is! Let�s go!� She entered the house and gasped
�Wow defo a big modern with American style,� She exclaimed and walked to the living room
�Yeah right I love my house very much!� added
�I think he�s a very artistic person, can you see the picture hanging on that wall? That�s an art!� She pointed at the picture
�She�s not only hot but smart chick, I love it!� said and clapped his hands
�Let�s go to see the kitchen,� She walked to the kitchen and stopped when she saw how messed it is
�Hahaha man what you doing???� I laughed my head off and only smiled
�It�s kinda messy here, he put all the dirty dishes but not washed them!� She said as now she walked to the fridge
�I hope your bedroom is not like that, but let�s see the fridge first!� She opened the fridge
�You are a very healthy man, you have loads of fresh vegetables and some beers,� She turned to the camera and smiled
�Awww her smile made me go insane�� I whispered
�Without wasting the time, come on and check the bedroom!� She walked upstairs and stopped in front of �s bedroom
�Here I come,� She pushed the door and pooped her head in before stepping to the room
�Wow nice room,� She walked to the bed and put the spy tools on the bed
�Not to messy but the smell isn�t very good,�
�Hahaha that must be your stinky clothes!� laughed
�I bet yours more mess up than mine!� He defended himself
�You put all your dirty clothes on that plastic bag? Oh I know you�re thinking to send them to laundry eh?� She winked as she opened the plastic bag and pulled out the dirty clothes on the floor
�What she�s doing?� said in panic
�Oh no man, it�s hell!!� I yelled
�Yack, I won�t touch them with my bare hands so I need tongs and rubber gloves!� She put on the rubber gloves and held the tongs
�So many dirty boxers,� She said and picked one boxer with the tongs and showed it to the camera
�She�s psycho!� said
�And they stink too!� She added and put the dirty boxer down again, now she walked to �s CD collection
�She�ll love it!� said and not moving his eyes from the monitor
�You have tons of CD�s and that�s plus point for you cos I love music, I noticed you like black music and that means plus point again!� She said as she picked 50 Cent�s CD
�I love 50 Cent!� She put the CD on the CD player and played �In Da Club�, she started dancing around the room
�Man she�s crazy beautiful wild chick!� said
�Yeah and she�s in my room, that�s awesome!� said proudly
�Ok so let�s check out the wardrobe,� She turned off the CD and opened �s wardrobe
�I bet you are a very cool lad, I see you have loads of baggy pants and bling-bling so that means maybe you looks like a rapper!�
�Come here sweetie�� said and opened his arms, we all laughed
�It�s time for the black light, I hope you�re not really wild during the spring break!� She winked as she turned off the light and picked the black light. She examined all over �s sheet
�Clean enough but look here closer, I found something!� She said as the camera came closer
�He wet himself last night or is it something else?� She asked and we all laughed
�I swear it�s my dog!!! I�m not at home all the time and you know I won�t take a woman to my house for some crazy thing!� explained as his face went brightly red
�He�s a real wild lad!� She said again and walked out off the room
�I just finished looking for a room no.1. I think he is a healthy man and kinda wild cos I found a big spot on his sheet but a good point from him is he has a great taste of music, I�ll decide later and now let�s go to house no.2!� She got to the car again
�Oh man that�s the awful truth!!!� hid his face on his hands

***** �s POV*****
�Nice , you did it very well!!!� Sarah came to me as we were on the way to house no.2
�Yeah I never thought it�d be soooo interesting!� I said with a big grin
�3 rooms to go before you decide which one you like!�
�I know, I hope the others room would clean enough�� I said and enjoyed the ride

To be continued...

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