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I want to be like this I want to be like that These visions of myself How far I will look back Joyous, I always know I will put to my soul Rainbow, not only rain? Yes, memoir put in lane If something made alter To the things I adhere So will it be like this? I want you, nothing else I want you to possess Possess our bodies and Depart your frequent guests I can't bethink the bliss For when you're in your den You always feel morbid Isolated, away Have you desired to stay? I need consistency Please, leave all the aliens I see for them you forge Here, none but indolence It makes me wanna dream Flashes of busy times Moments when grass was green We roamed aiming close ties |
Have the time to recall The words you have installed Respect is slowly lost Sorry, I had no choice I want to be like this I want to be like that But if something bothered Making me weep all night I dread the joy will sap The rainbow will soon fade Will it all be itchy When in your company Now that I'm a grown tree From the top, I can see Unbiased, I just know Where comes all this fury So proud of your own coup Self-centeredly happy Passion is what you chase And we're just fans displayed Why do I feel this guilt? All the wrath that's been built Before "want" gets "wanted" I just wish you could change My spirit has withered Waiting for your embrace Don't wait until the time Mirrors can't be replaced |
My latest poetic original that was done in April 7, 2019. As you might see that the poem is quite long with 4 lines each and has 14 stanzas. And it's also a major achievement for me because I was able to finish the poem with a strict 6 syllable per line, with deep words and has some rhyming words too. But it doesn't really matter that much because the message is what's more important.
"All I Wanted (A long-time hidden message)" is indeed given and does not need to be comprehended at all. In the first two stanzas, I was actually expressing myself that I have so many dreams, and that I should be happy and live my life colorfully. The third stanza says that if there was something that could change what I believe in, would that be the person I'm addressing? The next stanza simply defines 'possess' as an equivalent to the phrase 'be with us.' Why? It is because I feel that the person is always away from us and I can't even think any happy times together. While the 5th stanza explains further what the subject does when he/she is near, weak, quiet, and it's like there's a barrier in between us. The aliens in the 6th stanza refer to other people that the subject always hardworkingly work for. I just ask for the subject to do the same as I only see his indolence (laziness). But jumping to 9th and 10th stanza where they were referring to the first 2 stanzas about the changes that might occur just because of this need I am secretly asking, hoping that it would be seen by the addressed. The last 4 stanzas are left, explaining my maturity which implies the objectivity that I have right now from getting this anger. As another complaint is given, guilt comes because of the madness I feel inside. Lastly, I said that I can't wait forever for the subject to change, so please make a move for maybe all I want is you.
This poem is written with all my heart. I can't really say who's the person addressed in the poem, I'll keep it a hidden person. But even though that's the case, I know there are also relatable ideas given in the poem. That's it for this poem. I hope you loved it!