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Feedback Form
Fill in story title and author. If you're not sure, take your best guess. If you know the author's email, feel free to include in the same line as the author*. Answer the questions you want to answer. If you're unsure or it doesn't apply, you can choose the closest answer, leave it blank, or add something in the comments section at the end.
[* This is especially important for those trying to mail forms for stories and authors in other fandoms. Not something I encourage, but I've received two of these and cannot forward them to fandoms I'm unfamiliar with unless you supply the author's address.]
In general, the story was:
Great!
Really Good
Good with room for improvement
Room for improvement
The story read smoothly from beginning to end:
Yes
No
Yes, with some hitches
Did you feel this was a Mary-Sue Fanfic?
Yes
No
Yes, but it didn't matter
Was the fiction world believable?
Yes
No
Was the right viewpoint used to tell the story effectively?
Yes
No
Was there too much "telling and not showing" story-telling?
Just Right
Too Much
Not Enough
Was the way the characters spoke believable and natural?
Yes
No
Most of the time
Were the characters believable?
Yes
No
Did the characters act in a consistent manner?
Yes
No
Was there too much/too little/just enough dialog?
Just Right
Too Much
Not Enough
Was the formatting distracting when reading the story?
Yes
No
Were descriptions hard to understand or follow because of sentence
structure?
Yes
No
Did you at times lose track of which character was speaking when
or to who?
Yes
No
Were the conversations easy to read and understand?
Yes
No
Descriptions were:
wonderfully detailed
sparse, but good
a bit too much
not always clear
Was emotion shown in the dialog well?
Yes
No
Did the beginning of the story catch your attention?
Yes
No
Did the story have a well defined start, middle and end?
Yes, well defined
No, not well defined
Beginning not clear
Middle not clear
End not clear
Canon or alternate universe (au)?
Canon, well handled
Not sure, but it was unique
AU, well handled
AU, not something I'd normally read
Did you feel there were loose ends that should have been addressed ?
Yes
No
Was the story told from too many/not enough character viewpoints?
Just Right
Too Many
Too Few
Did the end come too soon or too late?
Just Right
Too Soon
Too Late
Was the ending satisfactory?
Yes
No
What did you like most? Check all that apply
The way the characters were
portrayed
Character interaction was well handled and believable
The storyline was unique
Funny! Add a nose cola alert next time
It's so sad
It's romantic
Romantic scenes were exciting and entertaining
It's poetic
Missions were
believable and exciting
Violence was well handled
Problems were resolved in a reasonable way
Original characters were well handled
It was action packed
Twists and turns kept me
guessing
Can't wait to see more!
Loved the ending
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