Public Pickups - Gina Divine

Amber wants her twin pair of Charizards in as good a shape as they can possibly be, and maybe sex isn’t the best way to get them to learn how to get used to their mega evolved forms, but it’s definitely her favorite. Commission for Androck.
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Chapter 1 - Intense Training
Mega Evolution training was one of the most nebulous sorts of things a trainer could engage in, the mere concept still so new that nobody had an agreed upon and surefire way to helping their Pokemon prepare for it. Some used rigorous, nearly impossible combat situations to help their Pokemon adapt to the transformation, while others used intense bursts of some kind of emotion, like happiness, to help make the transformation seamless as could be. The trainer's affection seemed to be a popular one, and it was that general idea that Amber decided was best to use for her pair of Charizards, Inferna and Brenna, although not as most trainers seemed to be engaging in.

The pair of fire types had been raised for a set of twin eggs by Amber from the moment they hatched, and she considered the pair to be the crown jewel of her team. Even years later, when she was no longer a bright-eyed teenager wanting to start her teams of dragons off with a bang, they were her most beloved Pokemon, made only a little more 'complicated' by the relationship she had with them. It hadn't taken very long at all for a young Amber to be intrigued by her girls' hermaphroditic nature, and from the day they were mere Charmanders, she was exploring a strange sort of relationship with them, one that became all the more interesting when both Brenna and Inferna evolved into Charmeleons mid-coitus one time. Their transitions to Charizards had been after battle like 'normal' Pokemon, but it set the kind of precedent that left Amber feeling like nothing would have been more fitting a means of helping them get used to Mega Evolution.

The red-haired and very buxom Amber found a good place for them to camp out for the night, a clearing with plenty of space around them. "Alright girls," she said, releasing her beloved Charizards from their Pokeballs. "You both know what time it is, I hope." She smiled wide as the Pokemon emerged from their balls, a pair of Charizards both a few inches taller than their trainer, who looked in broadly smiling excitement at Amber, who had a hip cocked and a smile of her own worn proudly. The happy roar of her twin fire types left her feeling even more excited. "Who wants to--mmph!"

Amber had expected her Pokemon to be game, but not quite as game as this. They two quick Pokemon descended quickly and hungrily upon their trainer, rushing forward and grabbing her. She felt claws at her breasts and on her ass, fondling her through her clothes as long, reptilian tongues slithered their way into her mouth. She let out a happy whine as one of the Charizards kissed her, a tonguey and probing kiss that left her shivering in delight as she stared into Inferna's eyes, only to be swapped over to Brenna, whom she also gladly locked lips with as their fondling continued. They groped their trainer possessively, a reminder to Amber that as much as they were her Pokemon, she was theirs where it counted.

It didn't take long for the exciting fondling of and back-and-forth make-outs with their trainer to rile up the two Charizards, who were more than happy to start pushing the issue further as their needs bubbled up. Amber could feel them get hornier as two cocks slowly emerged from the creatures' sheaths, pushing against her firm thighs and slowly swelling as blood filled in and steadily left both throbbing girlcocks rock hard and aching to plunder Amber's holes. "Mm, it looks like both of you are ready to go," she whined, licking her lips as the squeezing got firmer, a hand between her legs pushing a clawed digit up against her pussy, and she couldn't help but grind her hips against it as she bit her lip. "But I'm not ready yet, so take a step back first, and let me get ready for you."

With eager snarls, the two Pokemon both pulled happily back, staring at Amber lustily as they put the pressure on her quite forcefully. Amber could feel it, and she was torn between hurrying out of her clothes, or taking her time to give them something to look at. She wanted to badly to do something sultry and exciting, a prolonged striptease that would drive them utterly mad. But her aggressive Pokemon and their throbbing cocks didn't look like they could take something long and painstaking in its slowness, so she knew she had to speed things up somehow, biting her lip as her fingers began to undo the buttons on the loose flannel top she wore for warmth over the white tank top beneath.

There was a good middle ground to be found in revealing her body to her Pokemon without drawing it out into too much of a spectacle, and that was the line that Amber tried to straddle as she undressed, reaching for her top and pulling it up to reveal the flat, slightly toned stomach of a girl whose life was biking across the region. Up further, to the unfortunately plain red bra she wore under her tank top, something purely utilitarian; the nicer bras she had to look sexy in didn't do well with exercise, and the size of her breasts required the utmost of security for them to keep them in place. That meant sacrificing immediate visual appeal when she took her top off for comfort, and it was a decision she wasn't foolish enough not to make.

Not again at least.

The bra went, and Amber's perky, round breasts bounced eagerly free as she stared at the monsters, who smiled back at her as she dropped the bra happily aside, unsurprised when the Charizards looked ready to lunge forward at her right that moment and take her right there. But they held back, watching as she ran her hands down her body, gladly undoing her belt before going next for her bike shorts, which she wore over black tights to help keep her legs warm on cooler days and from burning on sunnier ones. Her thumbs followed the curve of her waist, down to her round hips, and slowly started to push the tight shorts down, legs spreading as she gave a slow thrust to the air and gasped in delight, now actively taunting her Pokemon.

She couldn't believe they were actually holding back and waiting patiently for her to finish undressing. Maybe patiently wasn't the right word as the two Charizards stared at her with a hunger that she knew was going to find its way to her one way or another and that she was likely going to be fucked right into regretting taunting them by the time they were through with her. But the fact that they hadn't driven her down and started taking turns fucking her mouth--this time, at least--was still a sign of effort and a willingness to let her have her fun before they indulged. She pushed her shorts down to her ankles, ran her hands up her firm legs as she hooked her fingers into the bands of her tights and her panties in the same, biting her lip as she slowly bent forward, breasts dangling as she eased her way down and into being fully undressed, save for the cap from which her ponytail-tied hair emerged out the back of.

Once she was stripped down to nothing, Amber was ripe for the taking, and the pair of impatient fire types didn't want a moment longer to get what they wanted from their curvy, eager trainer. They rushed over to her, and she nearly had the time to rise up and step out of her fallen clothes by the time they were at her hungrier than ever. "Really? You couldn't wait a few more seconds?" Amber asked, shaking her head as they grabbed hold of her, both Inferna and Brenna having in mind what they were going to do with her, and not wanting to waste another second on anything else. She found herself quickly seized by the needy, hungry Pokemon, who snarled as they held her again, her clothes now gone and her bare flesh theirs to indulge in.

Inferna went around back, grabbing one of her trainer's firm, round ass cheeks and giving it a harsh squeeze before slapping playfully down against it. The Charizard let out an eager snarl as she spread the cheeks wide and ran a single digit up and down along the cleft of her ass, teasing penetration with her finger; she knew where she wanted to take her beloved trainer first and she wanted to be certain that Amber was ready to take her there.

Taking a different approach, Brenna lowered herself down, kneeling in front of Amber and craning her long neck up, staring happily at her plump breasts and the round, large nipples that topped them. Just like her 'sister', she knew exactly where she wanted to have fun with Amber first, and gladly licked across her chest as she adored the breasts with a bit of affection first, priming Amber for what was about to come. Her hands grasped the tits, squeezing them excitedly as she let her tongue drag across every inch of soft flesh.

"I love it when you two are excited," Amber said with a shudder, rolling her head back and pressing against the strong chest of Inferna. She could feel the heat radiating off of the two horny Charizards, both so eager to pleasure her, so ready to give her everything she craved from them. Brenna's cock brushed against her calf while Inferna's throbbed against the back of her thigh, both delightful promises of the pleasure soon to come, and she couldn't wait to feel all of it as she twisted in ecstatic glee amid the firm weight pushing down harsh against her. She felt amazing, shuddering in need as their aggressions and their need warmed her over.

A finger sank into her ass, pushing in deep and making Amber's spine arch against the front of one Charizard, which pushed her ample bust into the face of the other, as Brenna gladly nuzzled into her tits. She was utterly at the mercy of both Pokemon, and Amber was immediately pulled down into submissive, mewling delight as her ass was fingered and she was beset upon by hungry Pokemon who threw everything about the dynamic between a trainer and their Pokemon out the window. "Deeper," she purred, biting her lip as the finger rocked quickly, soon enough joined by a second digit probing her back door, pushing in and spreading out to try and loosen her tight pucker up. Two fingers was nothing compared to the throbbing dragon cock she'd be taking down, but it was better than nothing.

Inferna took delight in fingerfucking her trainer's ass, steadily quickening the pace, until she heard that first moan spill its way past her soft lips, until her pussy was trickling down her thigh with all of that sticky, tart need. Only then did she finally pull her fingers out and slap the round rump one more time, letting out a delighted roar as she lay down on the ground, wings spread out happily as her cock stood tall and proud. Brenna grabbed Amber's hips and pushed her forward, guiding her down ass-first into her sister's lap, and the throbbing dragon dick slammed its way deep into the tight reaches of the redhead's needy ass hole.

"Yes!" Amber yelled, throwing her head back in delight as she felt the hot, aching cock push into her body. She didn't even hesitate, hips already starting to work as she bounced atop her dragon, licking her lip and staring up at Brenna as she stood more upright and grabbed hold of her own cock. "Oh, you're so predictable," she sighed, shaking her head as she grabbed hold of her tits and spread them apart eagerly, inviting the dragon to rest her toasty cock between them. "Not that predictable is a bad thing, of course." She bit down hard on her bottom lip as she stared up from beneath her cap's visor at the smiling Charizard, wrapping her breasts tight around the cock and starting to slowly rock her cleavage up and down the needy shaft.

Inferna took great pleasure with groping and squeezing her trainer's ass as she plundered the tight hole between her jiggling cheeks with her thick cock. She could feel it stretch out wide around the shaft, pushed to her limits but taking it like a champion, if only because she'd had so much practice before with handling big dragon dicks and nothing was going to slow her down. She moved hard and eager as she was taken, moaning loudly as everything started to turn her way, hot and bubbling up with all manner of twisting, delightful sensations that left her happily soaking in the raw thrill of indulgence. She loved her dragons' big cocks, and if the anal fingering hadn't already left her pussy wet, then she still would have been soaked once she was impaled atop Inferna's dick.

Poking out the top of her breasts, Brenna's equally large cock stood long enough that it prodded her trainer's chin, dripping pre-cum and leaving Amber with a stark reminder that she could be doing more. "So impatient," she sighed, looking with at her Charizard and rolling her eyes before tilting her head down and laying some kisses onto the cock tip as she guided her breasts up and down, settling into a quick and fluid rhythm that involved not only rocking her ample bosom along the cock, but doing it in a way that added to the rhythm of her heaving body moving steadily, working her bouncing atop Inferna's cock into the motion of giving Brenna's a titfuck.

Experience guided the redhead. She'd been fucking her Charizards for years, and everything they could do to her, she'd already experienced, used to every last harsh fucking, every position, every double team. She was a pro now, able to handle it with ease and take the worst that they threw at her, effortlessly making the most of it as she moaned and licked at the cock now thrusting into her cleavage. She'd settled into a perfect rhythm with her beloved Pokemon, knowing exactly what they needed and what they craved, how to handle their bestial urges and the massive cocks they delighted in fucking her body with. All the curves in the world weren't enough to make those easy fits, but years of practice had turned the voluptuous redhead into someone capable of not only handling their cocks, but taking two in one hole when they were really fired up.

Both Charizards didn't take very long at all to start fucking their trainer's ass and tits quicker, relishing in the delights of her curvy, firm body. "You can do it, girls," she panted, coaching them on happily as she licked at the cock head pushing up against her lips. "Fuck me harder, come on. You both need to cum, we can do this." She wanted to push them to the edge, knowing that she didn't need an activation of her mega ring when they were appropriately worked up for it, and she wasn't slowing down in her eager pursuit of that push. It wasn't the least viable in an actual fight, but there was something more valuable she could gain from doing it this way.

Sex was intense and physically involved. Maybe not as much as combat was, but she didn't want her beloved Charizards fighting each other in bitter, genuine struggle, hurting one another and tiring themselves out before they could have anyone fun. And these two in particular fucked hard, so in lieu of actually using combat to help them get used to their forms, she used some raw, all-out fucking, letting them have at her body and do whatever they wanted to her, confident that in doing so they would work themselves up more than enough  to evolve, and then to go all out with her. And perhaps, on some level she wouldn't ever admit to them, she liked how much more aggressive they got when they mega evolved, when their cocks grew even bigger.

Amber toyed with her nipples, hardly even bothering to lift her breasts much now as Brenna did all the hard work for her, needily fucking her tits as she worked herself up into a frenzy, the mad thrusting of her aching, needy cock inside of the fleshy warmth of Amber's tits leaving the trainer to just have to sit there, holding them tightly together and toying with herself while her tongue lapped at the air, more often than not landing on the cock pistoning out of her cleavage. Although the harsh fucking of her ass was a different story; she couldn't in good conscience be lazy with Inferna's rough pounding of her clenching behind, and so she kept her body bucking up and down, happily meeting the savage thrusts. The fleshy smacking sounds of their noisy rutting filled the air, and she was all but sure they were making a noisy, scent-heavy mess that any Pokemon within miles could recognize. But she didn't care, moaning louder as her pussy dripped down onto the ground, so delighted by the thrills of tending to her two dragons all at the same time.

The thundering shivers running through her body drove her happily onward, Amber treated to the feverish need to get fucked that dominated her weary mind and drove her utterly mad with delight. She was loving every solitary second of the harsh pounding they gave her. it was what she craved, what she lived for, so far removed from the little four-inch cocks that the young Amber took from a pair of overly eager Charmanders. She was treated to two meaty, throbbing cocks that her body had grown used to taking and which she adored every intense second of being treated to. Nothing was better than this, the purest thrill of indulgence that hammered her aching body and wore her down into a moaning wreck. She didn't hide how good it felt, letting her Charizards both know that when it came to this, she was their bitch. There was no two ways about it; where it mattered, she belonged to them.

The excited roar of a Charizard pounding her trainer's ass was a loud and very intense. Inferna was harsh and excitable, even noisier than the girl she was fucking raw, but with good reason; the harder she fucked Amber the more the tight ass clamping down hard around her cock tried to coax an orgasm from her. And it worked; Inferna snarled as she sat up, grabbing Amber and slamming her down harshly onto her cock, holding her tightly in place as she let out a noise of pure delight, nearly spitting fire into the skies as her cock erupted, and flooded her trainer's pretty ass with more cum than she knew what to do with.

The sight of her sister howling drove Brenna immediately over the edge as well, but having her ass cummed inside of drove Amber to release at that same moment, the redhead trowing her head back as the cock between her tits spewed thick ropes of cum all over her face and onto her breasts, leaving her feeling so warm across everywhere as fire type spunk proved a very warm and toasty thing to be pumped full of. Amber bucked madly against the strong pull keeping her there, failing to actually move as her pussy spasmed and dripped with need. She was so ready, so utterly turned on and craving as much as she could get as Brenna came all over her tits and her lower face, leaving her happy and cummy, her eyes shut tight as she let out blissful noises and only realized upon opening her eyes that her Pokemon had begun to glow.

Pushed off of Inferna, Amber was left gasping as the Charizards pulled quickly away, and the searing light that blinded the redhead left her unable to see much of anything one Pokemon mega evolving was something, but the combined light caused by two of them changing at once was another sight entirely. She shut her eyes tightly, and waited for the guidance, waited for the clawed hands to grasp her body and for the warning to come, the assurance they were finally there.

No matter how many times Amber felt the different grips, she was always shaken by it. She opened her eyes to find that her Pokemon had reacted to their Mega Stones and had once more taken to fondling their trainer as they lifted her up eagerly into their grasp to squeeze at her body without opposition or any sort of obstacle. They were hotter now, especially Inferna, who had turned into a Mega Charizard X, a full-on dragon type Pokemon fluttering with blue flames that burned incredibly powerfully, while the draconic appearance of Brenna, a Mega Charizard Y, certainly shifted more dragon-like still, without dropping the typing of a regular Charizard. Both were stronger, larger despite not gaining any more height, and even though Amber was too blind to be able to see, she knew their cocks were even bigger now, waiting for their chance to ravage her.

"Nngh, took you two long enough," Amber whined, head leaning back as she felt her ass, her pussy, her legs, her tits... All squeezed at by the excited Pokemon, who relished in the chance to indulge with every inch of her primed and needy body. They held nothing back as they felt her up, but she would never have wanted them to, embracing the careless, ragged pleasure they forced onto her with glee. Nothing could have ever made her happier than being their plaything. With cum on her face and all over her breasts, not to mention dripping out of her slightly gaping ass, she was a mess who looked just perfectly primed for another go, and she could not have been more welcoming of this, more desperate and ready for everything she could wring out of this sweet satisfaction.

The twin Charizards let out excited snarls as they looked around, making sure nothing was around them as they asserted their territory, not only of Amber but of the space they occupied, turned more bestial and intense by their transformations as the powerful draconic dominance of their stronger forms drove their actions harder. They groped her every which way, stuffed fingers into her pussy and spread her hole out, both sticking digits into her and using it to try and loosen her fro something that was hardly a mystery, and which left their cum-addled, redheaded lover bucking and squealing happy.

"Yes!" she yelled, realizing where this was going and wanting every debaucherous, filthy second of it. "Nngh, I love the two of you! Please, share my twat. I'm a slut for dragon cock, and you two will always be my favorites!" She was loud, shameless, brazen in her debuacherous need to get fucked as hard as they could possibly give it to her, and she twisted in ecstasy as she awaited the savage use of her body that came from what they craved.

Brenna and Inferna had only been Charmanders the first time they shared Amber's pussy. Granted, even with their much smaller cocks it had been a bit of a tight fit, but they'd managed just fine. Now, Brenna may have grown up, but they'd grown up more, and the two throbbing, mega evolved cocks still found their way into her pussy, but it was a lot of practice and struggle to make it work. Not that she minded, of course, glad to have them working hard to share her, staking their territorial claim over the pussy they had deflowered and summarily owned for years. She would always give herself up gladly to them and let the use it however they so desired, and this was perhaps her favorite way.

With her back pushing up against Brenna, and Inferna's tongue shoving its way into her mouth, Amber shifted happily in their grasp, four clawed hands holding her upright and attempting to keep her steady as they guided her into place, their aching, needy cocks pressing together against her sopping wet pussy. The tips of their dragon cocks were tapered, easily sinking into her at the same time; it was fitting everything else into her hole that was soon to be some trouble, but trouble was what she lived for. "Take me," she whined, head rolling back against the shoulder of her hung, burly Mega Charizard Y as she braced for savagery. "Please, fuck my pussy together, stretch me out like only you can. I want to see what two strong megas can do that a normal Pokemon couldn't." Her tongue dragged along her lips, sampling some more of Brenna's cum, as she laid the stakes out, appealing to their primal nature and craving everything they were about to offer her.

Both Charizards snarled, all too predictable as their trainer's challenge incited everything possessive within them that Amber was all too happy to tap into. They didn't deny their nature, embracing their need to give Amber what she craved as they took her to her limits. They wanted nothing more than to fuck her as hard as she begged for it, and it was that deep, throbbing hunger that took them, left them ravenous and eager to fulfill her every request. Her legs were spread out wide as they guided her slowly down onto their cocks. The first few inches were easy as the cocks slowly sank into her body, filling her like one of the cocks would, but once they reached the combined thickness of one Charizard's base, that was where the fun began.

"I'm yours," Amber whined as they thrust up harshly into her, slamming another inch of cock into her. She let out a sharp cry as the cocks, which both grew thicker with a gradual swell, but once they got wider, the acceleration was a quick once, and a whining Amber could hardly contain her glee as they slammed into her again, forcing another half inch of cock into her pussy, forcing her looser as the slick, velvety walls clung greedily around the cocks inside of her, pulsating in need around them and threatening to milk them of their loads immediately. "Fuck me, girls. You're both so powerful, so virile, and I know nobody else can do it like you can!"

Inferna shoved her tongue again into Amber's mouth as she and her sister made a few more tandem thrusts, loosening her pussy up with each slam until they were certain she could handle them. They were patie4nt with her, at least for this step, knowing the struggle that came from having to be stretched out like this. The way she gasped and kicked and did everything she could to keep herself together said all that needed to be said about that. Her slick, dripping pussy was so receptive and inviting, ready to take them down as deep as they could go, and the two Pokemon adored the feeling of her greedy twat clenching around them.

Brenna took her mouth next, forcing her head back as she shoved her long tongue into her mouth, and Amber met it with a crazed swirling of her own tongue against her Pokemon's. It was a good way to keep her occupied and muffle her screams as the final inches slammed down and both cocks were buried to the hilt inside of the human's stretched out pussy. The two Pokemon let out gleeful snarls of delight as a fuck-drunk, cum craving Amber lay between their strong bodies, letting out a single, shuddered plea of, "Fuck me."

What followed next was Amber's favorite part of having her pussy shared. When their teamwork had left them both finally buried entirely inside of her, and they could get thrusting. And oh, how they thrust. Her body needed preparation, but once she was nice and as stretched out as they needed her to be, all of the calm and relaxed stillness could melt away, and in its place was only pure savagery as they began to fuck her holes without mercy, pounding her hard and faster, utterly in sync as their time together left them as well coordinated as two Pokemon could be. United under the goal of pounding their trainer raw, nothing could keep Brenna and Inferna from getting what they craved.

Two massive cocks pounded her in tandem, and there was nothing that Amber could have possibly wanted to change. Their brutal coordination and the throbbing, swollen cocks stretching her cunt out were both the sort of thing that drove Amber wild. Double vaginal was the most depraved thing Amber could have ever indulged in, and she loved every second of it. It was so intense, so raw, so much more than any kind of pleasure she could have known elsewhere. The slutty thrill of taking both of her Pokemon in her pussy at once was the kind of thing she could never have imagined would feel so good when it first thrilled her, but it had become her favorite now, almost an addiction  for her now. The sort of sinful pleasure that was so many different levels of depraved, and she loved all of them.

Not that Brenna or Inferna had much problem with it either. There was so much to adore about the feeling of her needy twat around their cocks. The way that her velvety, stretched out pussy provided an amazing tightness, unlike anything that fucking her alone would have been able to give them. There was no pleasure in the world quite as amazing as sharing their trainer's pussy together, sisters forcing her to take their bodies harder and firmer. The added pleasure of their cocks grinding together inside of her dripping hole, the friction that came from the two siblings showing little care for proximity, lovers themselves, added the intimacy; they knew no better way to all be united than this.

The pace of the harsh fucking only drew quicker and fiercer, and Amber loved it. Her breasts were heaving, tongues taking turns shoving into her mouth before finally the two Charizards just gave up on sharing, her mouth now almost sort of double penetrated as well as they both went in for a sloppy kiss at once, their long tongues able to force their way into her mouth together and kiss her in a sloppy, wet, noisy mess. But Amber like things sloppy and hard, everything as intense and depraved as she could get it amid the powerful abuse of her needy body. This was paradise, and she couldn't keep quiet as they took her so carelessly.

"Breed me," she pleaded. It was her dream, and she knew it wasn't likely to become a reality, but as her orgasm twisted and throbbed inside of her it was all she could think about. Being bred by these powerful dragons, craving her pussy being flooded with cum and everything that came with. "Breed me!" she yelled again as her orgasm tore through her, eyes almost rolling back as pure delight surged through her body. There was so much sensation burning across her so quickly, the intense bucking of her hips met and infuriatingly enhanced by the craven need of her pussy to try in vain to clamp down around the cocks inside of her, but she was stretched too wide.

As Amber twisted about in their grasp, the twin Charizards, feeling their cocks milked by the spasming hole, gave up their loads, noisier than ever as their cocks slammed into their trainer. They dominated and abused her body so thoroughly, forcing it to accommodate them, and once they'd had their fill, they left their marks. Two massive loads pumped deep into Amber's womb, flooding her twat and leaving her full up on cum, so much that the only thing keeping it from gushing out of her was how tightly stretched around the cocks her hole was. She twisted and writhed, toes curling in her boots as words utterly failed Amber. This was perfect in every way.

From the day she'd first hatched a pair of Charmanders, Amber had endeavored to devote her life to training dragons and dragon-like Pokemon. It was a fascination for their power and a twisted, guiltless fetish, desiring to have a harem of sexy dragon women who could lavish her and fuck her, especially if she could find women as well and uniquely equipped as her 'twins'. And one day, she didn't know when, she didn't know how, but her Charizards would knock her up, leave her pregnant and happily carrying the twisted spawn of a Pokemon and a human's indecent relationships. She was certain of it, and all the molten spunk filling her womb left her wistfully hoping that this would be the time.

But why leave it up to chance?

"Nngh, again," Amber whined, bottom jaw trembling as she braced her arms on the shoulders of both Pokemon, lifting herself up a few inches and slamming back down onto their dicks again. "Fuck me again." And they did, showing the bold, desperate trainer that the limits of human endurance paled in comparison to what a mega evolved Charizard could do.
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