Key points for this class
Comments on "Fair Use"
Comments on "Fair Use"
Beginning rushed -- establish silently.
Work on Dave's urgency at beginning (on/off syndrome), Janet's at end.
Get shot of ticket pieces falling.
On close-up, move camera to get strong eyeline (profile bad).
Overlapping action was good.
Cut to Mark more during Dave's "can't concentrate" bit.
Get Janet coming in through door, otherwise she pops up out of nowhere.