!("1! mie HoME PAGe! ^&!






Helo, ey am DUMBGUY627, an tis iz mie web pag!*?*!`1
I hope you liek mie HTML aeg, I worked verry long ad hard oj it?\!!
Plz plz plz sine my guestboke, it makes me feel verry happy.{![!!>

See, u liek my bak gorndu? It maesk the texx verry hared too reed!"1!]0

Plz pLSZ ee-maill me, I leik lurning abut hoo visits mie pag !P!!1111!"!9*

SINE GUESSBUKE!"!;!*!
VEEW GUESSBUKE!""!M11!

MY PAGE ABOT A BUNC OF CrAPP!"!1!








Stuff that's wrong with this page:
  • Excessive typos. this guy should either get a good spell checker, or get a smart pal to write for him.
  • The font is too big. Use a small font, folks. If someone is having problems seeing text, they can always increase the default font size of their browser with its built in functions.
  • Look at all those exclamation points (!!1"!`!|!)... try writing as if you are talking normally, everyone. Don't write like you're a hyperactive jackrabbit.
  • The background. NEVER, EVER, EVER use an animated background. it's slow and looks plain bad. And this background is also multi-coloured, which ties in with the next error:
  • it's nearly impossible to read the text because of the multi-coloured background. either change the background, the text colours, or, even better, both.
  • see that "ee-maill me" link? He didn't close the link after it was finished, and it carried on to the rest of his text, blocking out his "guessbuke" and "crapp page" links. Always remember to end every tag you open. He also did it with his BOLD () tag, but it's not as visible.
  • notice all those horizontal bars? those are called horizontal rules, and you make one with the
    tag. This guy went a bit crazy with them, and ended up having about 6 when all he needed was 1.

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