Stuff that's wrong with this page:
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Excessive typos. this guy should either get a good spell checker,
or get a smart pal to write for him.
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The font is too big. Use a small
font, folks. If someone is having problems seeing text, they
can always increase the default font size of their browser with its built
in functions.
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Look at all those exclamation points (!!1"!`!|!)... try writing
as if you are talking normally, everyone. Don't write like you're a
hyperactive jackrabbit.
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The background. NEVER, EVER, EVER use an animated background. it's
slow and looks plain bad. And this background is also multi-coloured, which
ties in with the next error:
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it's nearly impossible to read the text because of the multi-coloured
background. either change the background, the text colours, or, even
better, both.
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see that "ee-maill me" link? He didn't close the link after it was
finished, and it carried on to the rest of his text, blocking out his "guessbuke"
and "crapp page" links. Always remember to end every tag you open.
He also did it with his BOLD () tag, but it's not as
visible.
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notice all those horizontal bars? those are called horizontal
rules, and you make one with the
tag. This guy went
a bit crazy with them, and ended up having about 6 when all he needed was
1.
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